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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Ziva01

Kya hua usse❓


So Shaurya got kidnapped 😲

Pata nahi..People are saying he is not well..So they brought this Kidnapping track..

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Posted: 4 years ago

So beautifully written pallu...🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

So beautifully written pallu...🤗

Thank u sri

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Posted: 4 years ago

The best thing were the letters written in bold..majboori and zimmedari.

Very well written...very well shown the longing vir has for purvi and as expected..thoda sa bachpna from purvi...ab hamesha purvi grown ups ki tarah thodi behave karegi...toh thoda sa ruthna purvi ka and mukhi ka usko mnana...❣❣hayee..

I dont knw whetger someone from writing team of our serial is reading your stuff or not...but if it is...do incorporate them..jaise pehle kiya hai(JUDAII FF)

woh jo aaj scene aayega..jissmein mukhi is going inside purvi room...do write your imagination abt it also...as you can portray the emotions so well..

Keep up the good work..❣❣

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Posted: 4 years ago

That means a lot jaspreet. Acche comments se hamesha inspiration milti hai

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

As per scene, where mukhi getting wet in rain with sakshi, as purvi stands there just looked both of them and feel sad.

I m writing here my imagination after that, this is not any type of os. So this story is for those friends who likes my writting.



Dono ko saath me dekhkar purvi wahan se jane lagti hai, aur mukhi purvi ko dekh leta hai. Kuch der k baad mukhi S ko room me jane ko bolta hai.

Vir: ab bahut ho gya, ja jakar kapre badal le.

S: aap bhi chaliye,

V:mai aata hu tu chal

Purvi baarish ki boondon me khud k aansoo chupaye barish me chat pe khadi hai.

Tabhi vir wahan aata hai. Vir ko dekh purvi wahan se jane lagti hai. Vir uska haath pakad kar rokta hai. Purvi apna haath vir ki pakad se chudati hai

Vir: k hua bawri, tu to sab janti hai, ki mera Sakshi k saath rahna meri majboori hai, phir tu bacchon jaisi harkatein kyu kar rahi hai.


Pur: to humne kab mana kiya hai, phir aap yahan kyu aaye hai

Vir: kyunki tere paas rahne mere dil ki jaroorat hai. Mera pyar mujhe tujhse door nhi jane deta. Is baarish me mai tere saath bheegna chahta hu, isliye aaya hu tere paas

Dono tez baarish me bheeg rahe hai.

Vir purvi k nazdeek aana chahta hai, pur purvi narazgi me her baar vir se apna haath chuda leti hai. Tabhi tez baadal garajta hai. Purvi dar se mukhi ki taraf aati hai, purvi ka dar dekh vir muskurata hai.

Vir purvi ko gale lagana chahta hai. Pur naraz purvi vir se bachti hai.

Tabhi tez bijli ki chamak k saath baadal garjte hai, aur purvi mukhi k baahon me aakar simat jati hai.

Purvi: hamen bahut dar lag raha hai

Mukhi bhi bade pyar se purvi ko apne majboot paKad me samet leta hai.

Vir: ab tujhe darne ki jaroorat nhi. Mai yahi hu tere paas

Purvi: hamen maaf kar dijiye, pata nhi hamen kya ho gya tha

Vir: yahi to tera pyar hai bawri.

Dono ek dusre k pyar ki barish me bheeg rahe hai


Sorry cant tag everyone❤


This is so beautifully written and expressed..😳❤️ Too good..

Kaash aisa kuch mil jaata💔

Edited by darkchocolates - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavi_p28

As per scene, where mukhi getting wet in rain with sakshi, as purvi stands there just looked both of them and feel sad.

I m writing here my imagination after that, this is not any type of os. So this story is for those friends who likes my writting.



Dono ko saath me dekhkar purvi wahan se jane lagti hai, aur mukhi purvi ko dekh leta hai. Kuch der k baad mukhi S ko room me jane ko bolta hai.

Vir: ab bahut ho gya, ja jakar kapre badal le.

S: aap bhi chaliye,

V:mai aata hu tu chal

Purvi baarish ki boondon me khud k aansoo chupaye barish me chat pe khadi hai.

Tabhi vir wahan aata hai. Vir ko dekh purvi wahan se jane lagti hai. Vir uska haath pakad kar rokta hai. Purvi apna haath vir ki pakad se chudati hai

Vir: k hua bawri, tu to sab janti hai, ki mera Sakshi k saath rahna meri majboori hai, phir tu bacchon jaisi harkatein kyu kar rahi hai.


Pur: to humne kab mana kiya hai, phir aap yahan kyu aaye hai

Vir: kyunki tere paas rahne mere dil ki jaroorat hai. Mera pyar mujhe tujhse door nhi jane deta. Is baarish me mai tere saath bheegna chahta hu, isliye aaya hu tere paas

Dono tez baarish me bheeg rahe hai.

Vir purvi k nazdeek aana chahta hai, pur purvi narazgi me her baar vir se apna haath chuda leti hai. Tabhi tez baadal garajta hai. Purvi dar se mukhi ki taraf aati hai, purvi ka dar dekh vir muskurata hai.

Vir purvi ko gale lagana chahta hai. Pur naraz purvi vir se bachti hai.

Tabhi tez bijli ki chamak k saath baadal garjte hai, aur purvi mukhi k baahon me aakar simat jati hai.

Purvi: hamen bahut dar lag raha hai

Mukhi bhi bade pyar se purvi ko apne majboot paKad me samet leta hai.

Vir: ab tujhe darne ki jaroorat nhi. Mai yahi hu tere paas

Purvi: hamen maaf kar dijiye, pata nhi hamen kya ho gya tha

Vir: yahi to tera pyar hai bawri.

Dono ek dusre k pyar ki barish me bheeg rahe hai


Sorry cant tag everyone❤

Pallu 🤗🤗

Haye kaha se ate apke pass ese ideas

Nostradamus ye bhi sach hojaye 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: darkchocolates

Pata nahi..People are saying he is not well..So they brought this Kidnapping track..

Okie


Hw is the show going on???

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Ziva01

Okie


Hw is the show going on???

It's going ok..Abhi sort of filler episodes are there..

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Posted: 4 years ago

No sneak peek given today

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