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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sargamif

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Firse apna dialogue manne chep dia 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

Abe tu mere konse gun dekh rahi h😏😏😏

Taala laga k rakhna padega talent ke ib..Suppi ki kaali nazar pad gayi h

Kyu piyu?

Tu kya kehti h dho daale is suppaaa ko

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#33

Originally posted by: sargamif

Abe tu mere konse gun dekh rahi h😏😏😏

Taala laga k rakhna padega talent ke ib..Suppi ki kaali nazar pad gayi h

Kyu piyu?

Tu kya kehti h dho daale is suppaaa ko

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣neki n puch puch🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sargamif

Abe tu mere konse gun dekh rahi h😏😏😏

Taala laga k rakhna padega talent ke ib..Suppi ki kaali nazar pad gayi h

Anjali samj rakha hai kya manne ??😵😵

Kyu piyu?

Tu kya kehti h dho daale is suppaaa ko

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kitna dhogi didi ?? kabhi kambal kutai to kabhi ye 😭

is haalat me mai agla part nhi likh paugi fir ...😳 Aur is FF ka yhi ant ho jayga 🤣
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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

Supriya🤗

I am so thankful to people like you who put up FFs ..especially during the weekend..

Makes it easier to tide over the weekends.


Well written 👍🏼 and I am very eagerly waiting for the next part

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: nycgal

Supriya🤗

I am so thankful to people like you who put up FFs ..especially during the weekend..

Makes it easier to tide over the weekends.


Well written 👍🏼 and I am very eagerly waiting for the next part

very soon 😉

Thank you so much di for making time to read this...!❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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~| Part - 2 : Outburst |~


As Vir closes the door while departing from Manas' room, his eyes are stuck on his bawri who is putting cold water straps on Manas' forehead while stroking his hair gently. Vir is elated and bares a peaceful smile on his face - tu har mayne me mere bachho ki maa hai bawri !! Mere sare punyo (righteous deeds) ka fal hai jo tu mhare jeevan me ayi mujhe sawaarne...❤️ His psyche knew how incomplete and desolate he will become in her absence !!


Vir heads towards his room. He was concerned for Sakshi but never felt any affection for her since her homecoming. Being with her in a room felt more like an obligation and thus he used to find reasons to escape...! He opens the door to find Sakshi heading out from the bathroom. His eyebrows curl in confusion.

V - yo key kar rhi hai tu ? Sawere to naha chuki thi to fir itni jaldi dobara kyo....?

Sakshi cuts him in between and speaks - aree mukhi ji, wo hum Manas ke paas the na islie. Doctor ne bataya tha ki uske paas rehne wale ko infection ka khatra hai to humne vha se aake naha lia.


Vir sensed a crook expression on her face. How can a mother be less worried for her son and more anxious about her own safety? "Ek taraf bawri hai jiski ankho me aasu the, darr tha Manas ki salamati ke lie aur dusri taraf yo... jisne naukar se keh dia uske matthe par patti rakhne ko.. Hey Raam ji, meri uljhan ka koi hal batao manne." this thought ran in his mind. Nevertheless, he now revered Purvi more for everything she did, she is. It was just a matter of time that once her presence din't affect him, and now her absence is nearly killing him ❤️

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It was nearly half noon and Purvi has not left Manas alone for a second. She fed him with her hands, gave him medicines and put him to sleep. "jitna jyada araam kroge utni jaldi thik ho jaoge... Fir hm mil kar khoob khelege" She says while planting a tender kiss on his forehead. Keeping his head on her lap, sleep soon engulfed him. A child is safest with his mother, so is he -- tranquil and sound. She is lost in her son when the door opens and she finds Vir drawing close with a tray in his hand. He knew her solicitousness and that not a grain of food has entered her mouth since morning, thus he was here with food.

Vir's romanticism has gained new heights in these months. He dint relinquish any chance to be with his Bawri, gape into her dazzling eyes, touch her playfully and predominantly, love her in all possible ways. PurVir were habituated of spending their nights together; cuddling, slumbering in each other's embrace. Her presence was the only thing which soothed him, healed him, providing calmness. His restlessness and dilemma ended whenever she was in his sight. His heart pounded with her name -- manne sirf tu chahiye bawri.. tujhse bichhad ke mai ib jee naa pauga.

Purvi's face lightens up on seeing him, it always does! His divine presence meant the world to her. They have seen a new phase in their relationship since the last 2 months, but none of them grumbled, instead endured it as a decision taken by Almighty for their betterment. Their love has aggravated and stood this catastrophe.

P - mukhi ji... ap ?

V - haa, teri yaad ayi to chala aaya tujhse milne aur tujhe khana khilane ! (his voice full of love and concern)

P - to apne haath se khila bhi dijiye... (she stretches out her hand like an innocent baby. vir holds it and takes a seat beside her. He prepares a bite and feeds her.)

V - ab kaisi tabiyat hai mhare chhote mukhi ji ki ? (he says playfully, to keep the mood light. Meanwhile, Purvi breaks the roti and feeds Vir)

P - bukhar pehle se kam hai ab ...! (a sigh of relief follows) Apko kaise pata ki humne abhi tak kuch nhi khaya hai ??

V - waise hi jaise tujhe ye pata hai ki mai bhi ib tak bhooka hun... (he holds her hand and kisses it softly)


Their eyes - inundating with love and longing - locked, fingers intertwined and both of them start to exhale heavy warm breaths. Vir places his another hand on her waist to pull her close. She feels vulnerable, an inch closer and she will break in her arms. "Mukhi ji... koi aa jayga....!!" she stutters. Before she could withdraw, his arms seized her tightly. The surging tide of warmth left her limp and she surrendered to resisting. She raises her face, her lips nearing his. Her arms encircle his neck, her chest pressing against his. Vir loses his residual control and brushes his lips against her hungrily. They indulge in a passionate liplock, least conscious about their surroundings. It wasn't their first kiss but no matter how much they tasted each other, their appetite never seemed to have been pacified. They have kissed eo multiple times on their bed (of servant quarter) and everytime it felt like their first.


This wasn't a fortunate moment for them though. Sakshi ws standing on the door all this time. She sees them in proximity, their grip growing firmer and kiss getting deeper. Her eyes raged like fire. Her presence had no affect on the love birds, and this boiled up her anger. She storms towards her room and slams the door behind. She shouts in exasperation and throws away every object that comes her way. " Akhir kyoo?? Kyo ap baar baar us Purvi ke kareeb chale jaate hai Vir? Hum chahe kitni bhi koshish kar le apke kareeb aane ki, apko us do kaudi ki ladki se durr karne ki par hum humesha nakamyaab hote hai !! Aisa kya hai usme jo ap khiche chale jaate hai uske piche piche??" She cries in distress while shouting.

She starts to take off her jewelry in haste (tears of anger continuously falling). She stands in front of the mirror and smudges her kajal and rest of the makeup and also unties her judaa. "Hum apse pyaar krne lage hai vir... aur hum chahte the ki ap bhi humse waise hi pyaar kare jaise sakshi se krte the. Par ap to apne dil me us Purvi ko jagah de chuke hai🥺 Nhi bardaash kar sakte hum ye .....kabhi nahiiii...!!! "

She then picks up the pillows and tears it. "Apko lagta hai ki hm so gye aur har raat ap hume is bistar par akela chhod kar uske kamre me chale jaate hai. Uski baahon me apke chehre par sukoon hota hai aur humare saath bitae har pal me ap bechain rehte hai... kyo virr??? Kaise tum apni Sakshi ko bhool kar kisi aur se itna pyaar kar sakte ho? Jab se hm yha aye hai tumhe apna banane ki har mumkin koshish kar rhe hai.. pr hmesha ye ladki beech me aa jati hai !! Aur bachhe... unhe to haathi ke siwa kuch dikhta hi nhi hai!"

She mourns. "jab yha aa kar apko jaana, apke paas rhe to apse pyaar kar baithe... par ab ehsaas ho rha hai ki hum kitne bade bevkoof the jo ye sochte the ki ap us Sakshi ka chehra dekh kar humse deewano ki tarah pyaar krege. Lekin ap par to us molkki ka jaadu chhaya hua hai."

She now wipes off her tears "apko to hum paa kar rahege uske lie chahe jo bhi karna pade hme. Par usse pehle hm apna maksad pura krege.... wo maksad jiske lie hme yha bheja gya tha. Uske baad apko humara hone se koi nhi rok sakta Vir... apki bawri bhi nhi.....!!"



Who is she? How is it possible that she resembles Sakshi? Why has she entered their life? Who has sent her and for what mysterious reasons? What wil she do to get PurVir separated?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks once again sargu di for reviewing my writing 🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Sorry can't tag all 🤗


Bhool chook maaf

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