Raj's Fall Now Kranti's turn-Uptd Part XVI Pg 30

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Bugger

@Bugger

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Posted: 16 years ago

#141

ohhooo so raj shirtless .........jyoti wil love it ........😆😆😆

it was amazing ranjana .👏.....very nicely written .....eagerly waiting for ur next part ......do post it soon😊

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@chimuli

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Posted: 16 years ago

#142

jaelous n woh bhi K mazaa aa gaya plz show some good scenes ofRK AS u did loved them waitin 4 ur version i m more curious 4 urs than real serial(honestly) u presented every emotion nicely wow loved it

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sasha722

@sasha722

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Posted: 16 years ago

#143

PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL update fast
Emotion of K shown superb just waiting 4 R 2 take kantin ARMS
👏😃 Pl do fast

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

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Posted: 16 years ago

#144

Raj is definitely up with some naughty trick😉😆😛...Ranju wow in the show we hv Manpreet and here u hv Sanjh😉😃...Ok I m sure BBR lied to Kranti that Raj too loved Sanjh ..mayb Sanjh's love was just one sided😃..at least I hope so😕...

But I m sure Raj's whistling and this sudden change in behaviour definitely had some reason😉...I m sure secretly he is enjoying this confused avataar of Kranti😆😳...

End part was very passionate ..Kranti thinking about resting her head on his chest..awwww😍..

As usual Ranju very interesting...Amazing narration...equal amount of suspense and the story is going in a wonderful direction now👍🏼..

In the future Sanjh and Shubu can make a good pair na😉...

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

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Posted: 16 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: skeptical
Ranju ........... 👏

Thanks a lot skep

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

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Posted: 16 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: jyoti06
Raj is definitely up with some naughty trick😉😆😛...Ranju wow in the show we hv Manpreet and here u hv Sanjh😉😃...Ok I m sure BBR lied to Kranti that Raj too loved Sanjh ..mayb Sanjh's love was just one sided😃..at least I hope so😕...

But I m sure Raj's whistling and this sudden change in behaviour definitely had some reason😉...I m sure secretly he is enjoying this confused avataar of Kranti😆😳...

End part was very passionate ..Kranti thinking about resting her head on his chest..awwww😍..

As usual Ranju very interesting...Amazing narration...equal amount of suspense and the story is going in a wonderful direction now👍🏼..

In the future Sanjh and Shubu can make a good pair na😉...

Jo my character is Sanjh as I love this name. All the suspenses will be revealed in the upcoming installments.

Thanks a lot Jo. I will be updating very soon dont worry the mind was playing tricks before was not able to connect things (problems of intellectuals 😆😆) But now I have plot clear in my head will be posting the next part very soon.

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Ranjna Narang Monga

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Posted: 16 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: sami01
ranju pehle to u just continue with next part super fast .......really reaaly ned it and as per todaty loved this teaser epiosde thanks so much u r too good

Sami already writing it will be updating very soon. Thanks a lot

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

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Posted: 16 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: Bugger

ohhooo so raj shirtless .........jyoti wil love it ........😆😆😆

it was amazing ranjana .👏.....very nicely written .....eagerly waiting for ur next part ......do post it soon😊

Ash we all love him you know how. Thanks a lot will be updating very soon.