Raj's Fall Now Kranti's turn-Uptd Part XVI Pg 30 - Page 13

Originally posted by: yakkudimag

I like your fic very much..specially the character of Badi Bi..and Shubhankar.

But..Raj and Kranti..till now it was Raj's one sided feelings..but in Rattowal..Raj spent a happy time with Kranti without any attitude..that is the best part.Carry on..waiting for the reply.

you know what every time I log in from my phone I get what I want.... your update n I guess I was among first few to read it but cud not reply from phone immediately ....sorry about that.....
Thanks a lot for sending me PM....I was like wow you sent me a PM.....I mean we just started interacting n you kept in mind that I too read this..... that was so sweet.....
and this update.... its awesome👏so sweet😛 such a nice one😊 just plain love among raj n kranti (although kranti is yet to realise)...at its best.... they spending time together n enjoying that too....their interaction was awesome.... n raj is changed so much 😊but nice one to see him changed😳 you see wat love can do to you… arrogant Raj so humbled to admit his mistake....happy that subhanker confusion was cleared so nicely.... I like it wn grown up people handle their emotions maturely……n whole festival scene was built nicely....
very nice ending too... you are writer in true sense.... know how to keep readers immersed….. loved it😊

Originally posted by: netu19

you know what every time I log in from my phone I get what I want.... your update n I guess I was among first few to read it but cud not reply from phone immediately ....sorry about that.....
Thanks a lot for sending me PM....I was like wow you sent me a PM.....I mean we just started interacting n you kept in mind that I too read this..... that was so sweet.....
and this update.... its awesome👏so sweet😛 such a nice one😊 just plain love among raj n kranti (although kranti is yet to realise)...at its best.... they spending time together n enjoying that too....their interaction was awesome.... n raj is changed so much 😊but nice one to see him changed😳 you see wat love can do to you' arrogant Raj so humbled to admit his mistake....happy that subhanker confusion was cleared so nicely.... I like it wn grown up people handle their emotions maturely''n whole festival scene was built nicely....
very nice ending too... you are writer in true sense.... know how to keep readers immersed'.. loved it😊

Originally posted by: pennu

Wow Rajna,as usual.. brilliant piece of work..

Loved the way Raj and Kranti.. cared each other....

But what is that foto you are talking about..

Can't wait to know that...

Waiting for the next part....

Originally posted by: bhawna_dhunna

hey ranju darling love you.
thanks for posting this.
this one is awesome.
i can see a beautiful and upbringing chemistry between the characters.
you know i was literally smiling when i was reading the part-when they plucked lady finger.
it was so touching yaar.
and also the scene where they were dancing./
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
plz send next soon ASAP.
badi bi helped both shubhankar and raj to understand their feelings.
and MRS.KRANTII is still confused wid raj's behavior anyways she will soon realize her own feelings.
but atleast the matter is sought ot between raj and krantii unlike in the real show where they are still having the misunderstanding.

Originally posted by: Bugger

awesum ranjana👏👏 brialliant work............i m dying to see them as frends b4 they fall in luv .........but i really cant see tht in the show ....gud u got tht aspect in ur fic ...........luved it will wait for teh next part ..write it soon

ranju i dunno why but tonight once kids were sleeping i decided to reread ur ff in one go ....i rarely have time for such novelties noramlly bec of all those updates etc... and my work....sach kahunn yaar maza aa gaya...i also like that ur ff is easy to read because its in english ,i also like this simple sweet punjabi touch to it,i mean like village name of ratowaal is so so real so many ratowaals in punjab...and it gives authenticity to story and era.and kind of scenes u created with thnking raj..gavie will be so brilliant in those ,i sincerely hope to see some scene of urs in serial u never know yaar they actually might do it,they r very loyal to this forum's wishes normally but am impressed i normally dont get time for ffs but i have decided to follow urs always will try to catch other ffs too as all r better than serial for sure but am really loving ur ff keep up the good work👏