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Posted: 20 years ago
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On a cold winter night, as I walked passed the flower garden
I saw the most beautiful thing, it was a women
Her face was as soft as a baby's bottom
Her hair like pure silk
Her eyes were sparkling like the moon at night
Her laughter was as gentle as a lullaby
She was as beautiful as a rose when it blooms
That night I saw such beauty, oh such beauty
like I had never seen before
I felt so strange, what was happening to me
I didn't want her to leave, what was I to do
It seemed like I was stuck in one place.
With a blink of an eye she dissapeared in thin air.

PLZ tell me how you liked my poem.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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did u make that poem up??😲 not that u cant but WOW!😃

👏👏excellent poem! 👏👏

BRAVO!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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AWESOME, FANTASTIC, great, superb, just noooo other words to describe it! JUST EXCELLENT! 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: i_luv_shah_rukh

did u make that poem up??😲

yeah i did make up the poem

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