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Its beautiful Vish.

I absolutely loved you penned Gunjan's point of view. Simply amazing.

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Their meeting was definitely important as it formed trust between them. And pehli baar mein hi sixer woho lol. Exchanging numbers...interesting.

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Originally posted by: HSFA
Its beautiful Vish.
I absolutely loved you penned Gunjan's point of view. Simply amazing.
And wow Samrat a gangster Waiting to read more of this criminal😆
Their meeting was definitely important as it formed trust between them. And pehli baar mein hi sixer woho lol. Exchanging numbers...interesting.
Update soon and thanks for the pm dear :)

Thankyou Fati 🤗
Glad u liked it 😳 sixer marna bhi jaruri tha 🤣

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Hola guys 😊
I am back after break 😛
Apologies for making you all wait long 😊
Was busy due to exams 😊
So as I already said few chapters will focus on SaJan's POV after that I will give them shape according to your tastes.. 😊
OK Enough of my ranting 😛
Here you go 😉
Happy Reading 🤓

Chapter2:

*Gunjan's Point of View.*
I sighed making my way into the house. It was strangely quiet for it being six in the afternoon.
I heard a voice of broken glass.
I was sure Dhruv is behind this.
I made it to his room just to question him 'Why he didn't picked me up today?'
Though Somehow I was happy as because of him not picking me up I again got chance to meet my Lightning eyed boy.
Still I am thinking about him and calling him 'My Lightning eyed boy' grrr What's wrong with me? I hit my head with my bag.
I shrugged away the thought and made it to his room.
I can see its one messy room.
"Dhruv" I whispered
He was lying on floor with broken glasses all around.
He didn't responded I thought he must have slept.
As I was about to go I felt a tight grip on my wrist I turned back to look at him.
His eyes were blazing in anger. It was dark red.
Before I could question him.
He asked me "Where were you?"
"In violin class" I replied back
'After that' Dhruv asked
"Was waiting for you but you didn't came" I replied
"Oh so you have learned to lie like my dad's second wife" said Dhruv
"Shut up speak properly she is our mom" I whispered
"Don't teach me how to speak! She was your mom not mine. And stop fooling me." Murmured Dhruv
"When did I fooled you?" I asked
"Now" Dhruv whispered
"Come to the point" I said
"Who is he?" Dhruv asked
"Who? Whom are you talking about?" I whispered
"I saw you with that jerk who kissed you" Whispered Dhruv
I was stunned. So he saw everything.
"You misunderstood its nothing like that he is just a friend" I replied
"Friend or Boyfriend.. Oh now you got a friend who kiss you passionately and make your day.. your are a characterless girl." Yelled Dhruv
"Enough is enough Dhruv it was just a moment" Before I could speak further he slapped me.
My cheeks turned red.
It was paining but I was ready for it as its not first time he slapped me.
He always gets a reason to accuse me and slap me.
I was use to it.
After lots of accusations by him.
He made it to his bed and ordered me to get out from his room.
I sighed and made it to my bedroom.
I will not cry much.
I want to smile and I have reason to smile.
I met my lightning boy again today.
And that memorable kiss was bliss.
My dad contacted me after ages today.
These two reasons are enough for me to smile.
I laid on my bed staring up at my star printed ceiling and smiled.
The stars gave me an amazing memory with my father.
We always sat and had a picnic together until late at night at the park.
We use to stare at the stars for hours, just looking at them.
When the winter came it was much harder to do that.
So my dad has this idea to paint stars on my ceiling. So even on the cold winter nights we could look at them.
That was before everything with my mother
happened.
I wished I had someone to talk to about this.
I looked through my contacts and sighed. Realizing that I have no one I can trust with this secret.
I continued scrolling through my contacts
and accidentally tapped on Samrat.
I thought about for a second, maybe I could trust him, even knowing I barely know him.
There is something about him that tells me he isn't
who he plays off as.
I tapped on "Send A New
Message"
Me: Hi, Samrat, do you think I could maybe talk to you about something?
I waited for a reply for few minutes, but got nothing.
I shook my head, of course he wouldn't reply to me.
He's a criminal, a leader of a huge gang.
He wouldn't waste his time on me.
I grabbed a book off myself without looking at the title.
I laid on my bed and read it for hours, until I looked at the clock and seen it
was ten o'clock at night.
I realised its late I should change and sleep.
I put my book up and changed into my night suit.
I started folding clothes before hearing a scream. My eyes widened with fear as I quickly ran to the down of the stairs.
What I saw certainly scared me for life.
Dhruv lying on the ground with blood flowing out
of his stomatch. I quickly went towards him
"Dhruv?" I asked, shaking him, no response.
I continued shouting his name and shaking
him until I gave up. I called the ambulance sobbing.
And what I again saw horrified me again.
A mask man was standing their facing other side who was taking on phone.
I was sure he is the one behind this.
I shouted "Hey You wait" I quickly ran to catch him shouting.
He turned back and fired on my right knee.
I became unconscious.
Few hours later I opened my eyes.
Its all white.
White curtains, White walls even my blanket was white.
I realise I am in hospital.
I hate being here.
This place haunts me.
My mom died here after meeting with an accident.
I wanted to run away from here but I couldn't
"Do you know what happened miss?" One
Officer asked me. I shook my head. "
"Did you saw anyone there?" Officer asked
"I saw a mask man" I replied
Before officer could enquire further doctor came in and ordered him to empty the place as I need rest.
I sighed and thought no I don't need rest I need him 'My Lightning Eyed Boy'

Precap: Samrat's pov 😎

Thankyou so much for reading 😊
I know you guys are disappointed because its Samrat less update 😛
But I don't wanted to make it long that's why I didn't wrote his pov in this update 😊
Hope you understand 😊
Still if you have problem tomatoes chappals all are welcome except eggs as I am veggie 😛