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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...EhSaas...

Chal mujhe idea de ke me kaise story aagey le jau ?


accha tu hai yaha??
maine socha bhaag gayi shayed

ummm kaise age le jayegi
umm kaise age le jayegi

ummm bahut mushkil baat hai- sochna parega

ek kaam kar

story ko apni goad main utha le pher MILKA ki tara bhaag ja


LOL LOL LOL

HEHEHEHEHEHE
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Posted: 12 years ago
pher se gayeb
okey - i m going to sleep
GN

SD



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Posted: 12 years ago
Ole ole ole mene idea manga to faru baby dar gayi bye gn idea soch aur mujhe bata warna meri tarah se sorry aage lekar jaugi title padhna kya not so happy ending ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 17

At party

Mayur reached at party venue, they were wel come by every one and some male staff also praised nupur which makes mayank jealous and angry that how any one can praised her like that its his right only but he tried level best to control her anger becoz there is no doubt she is beautiful and today she is looking more beautiful he wanted to tell her when he saw her at home but he didn't becoz he knew that once he start he cant stop himself and it will create awkward situation for both of them so he control himself and look at here everyone are praising should i be happy or not ? obviously happy and proud to and he smiled

N : mayank kaha kho gaye

M : tujhme

N : kya ?

M : (realised what he said) kuch nahi

N : mayank tumhe pata hain main pehli baar party me aayi hoon i mean aisi party me aur yaha sab kitne acche hain khaskar ke jasson flirt hain lekin accha hain aur by god kya dikhta hain ekdum hero type

he was feeling jealous after listening someone's praise from nupur but nupur was busy in praising other so she didn't notice that when it was enough for mayank he interrupted her

M : nupur tumhara jasson puran khatam ho gaya ho to hum baki ke logo se bhi mil le

N : kuch jalne ki smell aa rahi hain kaha se aa rahi hain, arre mayank yeh to tum mese hi aa rahi hain tum jal rahe ho kyun ? jasson se ?

M : main main kyun jalunga jasson se ? mayank Sharma kisi se nahi jalta samjhi aur mera aur jasson ka koi comparison hi nahi hain

N : haan bilkul sahi kaha, kaha jasson aur kaha tum sach me koi comparison nahi hain

M : tumhare paas jasson ki tariff karne ka time hain lekin meri tariff karne ka nahi

N : ulta chor kotwal ko daante, tumne to meri badi tariff ki thi aur jab pucha tab tumne kya kaha acchi lag rahi ho bas

M : (going to close to her) to tumhe mujhse tariff sunani thi

N : (hesitantly) nahi mera wo matlab nahi tha

M : (playing with her word) matlab tumhe nahi sunani thi

N : haan nahi mera matlab hank e grrr mayank tum bhi na hatho yaha se mujhe pura confuse kar diya

M : confuse ko main aur kya confuse karuga

N : SHUT UP

M : dekho nupur yaha mat jagdo meri bhi reputation hain, log kya kahege is newly wedded couple ke liye ke shadi ko ek din hi hua hain aur abhi se ladayi start kar di

N : (pointing finger towards mayank) ladayi maine nahi start ki hain tumne ki hain samje, tum ghar chalo fir batati hoon

M : by god nupur tum to puri tarah se wife ban gayi ho i am scared

N : u must be scare mr. Sharma

Their conversation oops fight was disturbed by someone voice

V : ladies and gentlemen we all know why are we here, we are celebrating for our newly wedded lovely and most beautiful couple mayank & nupur, who are busy in their lovely world so sorry to disturbed you, I request both of you to come to dance stage

Nupur was feeling nervous after announcement and mayank hold her hand and started to walk but nupur was nervous and stand their

M : kya hua nupur, nervous?

Nupur just nodded her head

M : why ? don't be nervous main hoon na nupur

After hearing his words nupur was feeling little bit easy and she gave him assuring smile and both reached at dance floor by holding hand

J : (whistling) look at the love bird haatho me haath humesha tera saath

Nupur was feeling nervous again and left his hand and it hurts mayank when she left his hand and he was slowly keeping distant with her
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update..feeling bad for mayank...
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks tasnim 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sreevijayan

nice update..feeling bad for mayank...


thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 18

After hearing his words nupur was feeling little bit easy and she gave him assuring smile and both reached at dance floor by holding hand

J : (whistling) look at the love bird haatho me haath humesha tera saath

Nupur was feeling nervous again and left his hand and it hurts mayank when she left his hand and he was slowly keeping distant with her and when nupur realised that mayank is moving away she suddenly hold his hand and whisper don't leave

Mayank like he got his life back and he was feeling happy too that nupur wants him and he assured her that he wont leave her and they interrupted by voice

J : sorry to disturb you but you both forgot that you are in public place, ladies and gentlemen big round of applaused for newly wedded couple mayank and nupur and lets cheer them for dance

Song was playing bahoo ke darmiyaan

Mayank strecthch his hand for dance nupur she was first hesitant but she gave her hand to him and song started bahon ke damiyan

Mayank slowly slowly kept his hand in nupur waist and nupur was feeling uncomfortable and looking here and there and took a deep breath

N : (to herself) WTH nupur why are you so nervous he is your friend and its not like you are dancing with some stranger, didn't you dance with him earlier too so what is wrong with you now

But there is difference between earlier and now at that time he was my friend and npw husband

So what nupur nothing has changed he is your husband but he is your friend first, that friends who was always ther whenever you needed him and he is showing trust on you than why are you behaving like jerk

Its not like that but i am not feeling comfortable, i need time.

For god sake nupur, didn't he give you time, why its him only who take step ahead isn't it you should do something for him, don't take him for granted

No i am not taking him for granted

Yes you are nupur look at him look at his eyes who has lots of love for you and more than that he trust you, why are you hurt him, one day you have to move ahead in your relation so why are you starting from today, nupur just once look at his eyes and him

Nupur was confused what to do and what not and mayank saw that nupur is lost somewhereelses

M : nupur

N : (coming out from her thought) haan kya hua ?

M : nupur i think you are not feeling comfortable, lets move

Nupur just look at him for a second love and trust for her and slap herself in her mind and she realised what wrong she is doing with him and his love

N : no mayank i am ok and she took his hand and kept on her waist and another hand on her hand with the promise never to left him and smile at him, lets dance and mayank smile at her and they start dancing

After sometime jasson came to them and ask permission from mayank to dance with nupur, though mayank didn't like it and nupur knew that so she was going to say no but surprised when mayank said yes to him with smile becoz he knew jasson is flirt but he is good person and moreover he doesn't want to bind nupur becoz of his jealousy and with that he left to drink counter.

J : can we dance ?

N : ye sure but she was looking towards mayank only that he is all right or not

J : sorry nupur bhabhi

N : for what ?

J : for disturbing you two

N : na its not like that

J : mayank really love you and that can be seen his eyes and i know he is feeling jealous of me and you know what i love that mayank and wink at nupur

N : haww you are amking him jealous ?

J : sorry bhabhi lekin kya karu maja aata hain, akdu hain lekin dil ka bahut accha you are lucky to have him in your life

N : (smiling) yes you are right i am truly lucky to have him in my life, he is just like angle of my wife who world happiness to me and take all sadness from me on himself, i hope one day i will return what he deserve

Nupur was dancing and laughing with jasson and mayankw as looking at them feeling awkward but happy to see nupur happy thats what matter most but he cant control himself and went towards them

M : jasson can i dance with my wife ?

J : ohh sure why not

M : (with jealousy) bahut enjoy kar rahi thi uske saath ?

N : haan lekin tumse jyada nahi

Mayank was feeling so happy after hearing that

M : really

Nupur just blink her eyes, mayank was overwhelmed and he lessened distance between them and keep both his hand on nupur waist and nupur was feeling butterfly in her stomach she kept her head against mayank and their breathe was mingling and mayank was on cloud nine when he feel that nupur is reciprocationg his feeling and he said what he said

M : nupur i love you and i really love you and i mean it

N : mayank i know i am stupid but i realised that i love you too, i took long time but finally i realised that i never love adhiraj, he was just infatuation but i always love you and sorry that i make you waited for this long and she buried her face near mayank heart

Mayank cant believe that is it dream or reality? His nupur really love him or its just his imagination, he just hug nupur tightly

Mayank broke hug and look in nupur eyes and ask her

M : nupur are you not joking na ? you are sure na ?

Nupur smiled at his confusion and she just kiss on his and keep her lips for long time and whispered in his ear yes mayank Sharma i am truly, deeply and madly in love with you and she turn to leave becoz she was feeling shy to look at him

Mayank pulled her back and keep his face on her, nupur you really don't know what best you give me today and he turned her towards him and cup her face nupur was not looking at him she was feeling really shy and mayank coming more close to her and she breathing heavily and mayank was going to kiss on her lips and he was just inch away he was intruptted by applaud of claps and he relaised that nupur is on stage with jasson and he is sitting on drinking counter and it makes him realised that he was dreaming, that was all nothing but dream, first he was upset but he encourage to himself that don't worry this day will come.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part...
Read both the parts Part 17 and 18

17 was very nice..
18

ye kya..yaar dream kyu..
kaash ye reality hoti...
bahut acha lagta...
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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks sara 😊

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