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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafy_MN


Fine fine as a writer i understood what's story plot is going on and you have show it slowly..
but as a reader mein bas expect ker rahi thi..
aur tera adhiraj vo bhaad mein jaaye...
bas keh diya to keh diya..
aur sabse important baat
madam aap ek week ke break per jaa rahe ho..
itna bhoi torture mat karo please..
ek to update de do.
and don't worry i will help in romncing Mayank mujhe bahut lagta hain vesa kerna..
ehehehe

aye Jaya Raani..jaldi wapis anaa yaar
missing you
abhi se..
vese you know kise..
but still ho sake to..
i am not forcing you..
but fir bhi..agar ek baar ker de to kuch chala nahi jaayega tera..ladki...
ookay..chal..bahut bol diya..
ab ek update de ker jaa 1 week ki break per..
wapis aa ker 5-5 ek saath de dena..
okay
now be a good girl..
my sweet girl..


@bold-- I 2nd u shaffy. tu saach main meri sweetu hai. meri dil ki baat keh dala..hehehehehehe

i dont want Jaya to end this ff soon. becoz i know she wont come ack soon with a new one. main usse rag rag main wakif hu

iruuu kaha hai tu. plz aja yaha . mujhe n shaffy ko teri support ki jarurat hai..
Edited by Faria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
mayur got married- wow really very nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
happy to see that mayur are married now. i just i hope Nupur will find her soul mate in mayank through this new journey
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.


@bold-- I 2nd u shaffy. tu saach main meri sweetu hai. meri dil ki baat keh dala..hehehehehehe

i dont want Jaya to end this ff soon. becoz i know she wont come ack soon with a new one. main usse rag rag main wakif hu

iruuu kaha hai tu. plz aja yaha . mujhe n shaffy ko teri support ki jarurat hai..


haan Faru...
mujhe bhi kuch aisa hi lag raha hain..
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Posted: 12 years ago
most probably tonight bt it just a filler part next update too
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Posted: 12 years ago
kab kab kab kaaab
milegi hume update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 12

Nupur parents were sad that their daughter was leaving them but they are way more happy that she is going to her new life and that home where everyone love her more that they love her and today they didn't lost daughter but got son in their life who respect them like his own parents.

After taking permission from nupur parents SA & mayur left to their home. In car when nupur was crying and mayank was consoling her but instead of stop crying she start crying more and mayank was feeling helpless and confuse and SA came to his rescue.

SA : mayank kyun tang kar rahe ho meri beti ko

M : maine kya kiya apki beti hi roye ja rahi hain usko chup karane ki puri koshish kar raha hoon main lekin wo jyada hi ro rahi hain

SA : tu jis tarah se chup kara raha hain na to wo aur darr gayi hain bhala koi aise kehta hain kya tumhara make up kharab ho jayega agar tum jyada royogi to aur tumhara kajal spread ho jayega aur tum acchi nahi lagogi.

M : haan to main kya kahu sahi to kaha uska make up sab kharab ho raha hain

SA : waha per o rahi hain aur tum usko chup karane ke badle uske make up ki burai kar rahe ho

M : nahi maa main to yeh keh raha tha ke wo aaj bahut acchi lag rahi hain aur yeh rone ki wajah se wo achi nahi lag rahi hain

SA : haan to royegi hi na wo pata hain nupur jab wo school picnic pe gaya tha wo bhi sirf ek din ke liye aur wo fut futkar ro raha tha mujhe nahi jana mai aapke bina nahi reh sakta jabki wo picnic sirf ek din kit hi aur mayank yaha nupur ko humesha ke liye apne parents ka ghar chhodkar aana hain to wo royegi

After hearing that nupur started laughing

M : maa tab me bahut chhota tha aur nupur tum kya has rahi ho

N : mayank you were so cute lekin ab kya ho gaya tumhe sadu akdu

SA : haan to abhi bhi tum mere bina kaha reh sakte ho lekin ab to tumhari shadi ho gayi hain ab is maa ki kya jarurat ab to ghar pe bhi nupur ka hi raaz chalega meri kaun sunega (SA tried to hide her smile)

M : kya mom aap bhi na

N : ( interrupting mayank) sahi to kaha mom ne ab main aa gayi hoon ab sari jimmedari meri

M : nupur tum yeh kya keh rahi hon

N : (winking at him) kya galat kiya maine

Mayank understood that what she mean and he also play with her

M : haan nupur tum sayad sahi keh rahi ho mom ko ab rest karna chahiye finally bahu jo aa gayi hain sari jimmedari ab nupur ki aur aapka beta bhi

SA was shocked after hearing that and mayur started laughing and nupur side hugged her

N : awww mom you are so cute, aapko tension lene ki jarurat nahi mom mayank aur wo ghar sabse pehle aapka hain aur apke hi rahege aur aapko ek baat ki tension lene ki jarurat hain kyunki aapki aur ek jimmedari badh gayi hain aur who main hoon

SA : (patting nupur cheek) tension nahi khushi ki baat hain mere liye and mayank was just adoring their relation.

They reach home and completed all ritual.

SA : nupur

N : haan maa

SA : nupur main janti hoon ke car me hum majak kar rahe the lekin ab main sac me chahti hoon kea b is ghar ki responsibility tum aur mayank le lo

N : mom hum to

SA : nahi beta ab main thak gayi hoon aur aaram karna chahti hoon aur jitna bhi waqt hain tumhare saath bitana chahti hoon

M : lekin mom achanak kya hua

N : theek hain mom agar aap yehi chahti hain to hum wohi karege

M : lekin nupur

N : mayank mom ne job hi kaha wo soch samajkar hi kaha hoga na aur unhone aaj tak humse kuch nahi manga jab aaj maang rahi hain to humein mana nahi karna chahiye na aur mom mana ke hum yeh jimmedari le rahe hain lekin fir bhi aapke bina koi decision nahi

M : mom sab theek to hain na

SA : haan beta lekin main chahti hoon ke mere bacche ab bade ho jaye

M : haan lekin aapke samne bacche hi rahege

Nupur hugged SA : I love you mom and you are the best mother

SA : and you are best daughter

M : (cupping her face) maa mujhe yeh accept karne me koi sharam nahi hain ke me nahi kal tumhare bina reh sakta tha aur nahi kabhi rehna chahta hoon and kiss her forehead and hugged her

SA : chalo chalo bahut raat ho gayi hain aur tum log bhi thak gaye honge jao jakar aaram karlo

M & N : good night mom

SA : hey bhagwan mere baccho ko sambhalna aur apna pyar humesha dena aur unhe himmat dena sach ka samna karne ke liye.

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Posted: 12 years ago
i am sorry for not replying today i will reply tomorrow 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
kon sa sach re..
koi twist laa rahi hain kya...

vese awesome part..
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago

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