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Posted: 12 years ago
by the way thank you for updating
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally mayur gt married...hope nupur wil fall in love wiith mayank soon...

awesome update dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jaya-------------- ye kya hai???????
itna jaldbazi. ha yaar i wanted to dance in mayur marriage. lekin tune us time he nehi diya
itna jaldi shaadi karwa di. it seem ki un dono ko local train pakadna hai jo abhi chut jayega.

kyun karwya itna jaldi jaldi shaadi. huh.
anyway jo hua accha hua--- adhi ka chehra dekhana nehi parega. ab sirf mayur he mayur rahega...

now i feel relax. ab sirf mayur ki biz pyaar , roamnce, cute fight, NUPUR and SHIPLA mom ki cute scene dekhna baki hai.. now we we are going to get some oops sorry many beautiful scene of sharma family.:D i m damn happy. yeee
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

oye

Jaya..ki bacchi..update de diya..
aise kese ho gaya..
abhi tak to suday aayaa bhi nahi..
tune bina sunday kese de diya..
Yaar thoda to romance dikha ab mayur ka..
ab to shaadi bhi ho gayi..
or sab se badi baat
tu maan ya na..maan..
Nupur to pyar Mayank se hi kerti thi..
vo to adhiraj ki taraf ek infatuation thi samjhi


thats upto you what you want to feel
becoz in my story adhiraj is her 1st love and will always be and i clearly mentioned in this story from begining 😊
she knew that adhiraj can never be her and she doesnt want to force adhiraj too becoz he loves suhani and she is moving on with mayank becoz of his trust on her and after heartbreak she came out from fairytale world and facing reality
romance i dont mind to show it but do you think as per story it is good to show that soon means she is coming out from one phase of her life 😊
you are writer and you can answer me that very well

i will try to update on e romantic update for sure 😳
but you need to help me becoz romance is not my cup of tea
otherwise i have to copy from update from other writer and will make 1 chapter πŸ˜†

i updated earlier becoz i am going on break for one week so till next sunday no update πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
Edited by ...EhSaas... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

by the way thank you for updating


you are wel come dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sreevijayan

finally mayur gt married...hope nupur wil fall in love wiith mayank soon...

awesome update dear...


thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

Jaya-------------- ye kya hai???????
itna jaldbazi. ha yaar i wanted to dance in mayur marriage. lekin tune us time he nehi diya
itna jaldi shaadi karwa di. it seem ki un dono ko local train pakadna hai jo abhi chut jayega.

kyun karwya itna jaldi jaldi shaadi. huh.
anyway jo hua accha hua--- adhi ka chehra dekhana nehi parega. ab sirf mayur he mayur rahega...

now i feel relax. ab sirf mayur ki biz pyaar , roamnce, cute fight, NUPUR and SHIPLA mom ki cute scene dekhna baki hai.. now we we are going to get some oops sorry many beautiful scene of sharma family.:D i m damn happy. yeee


i want to end this SS as soon as possible 😊
than break for 1 month and i will write new story but after reading that you and shaffy are surely gonna kill me πŸ˜†
why you hate adhiraj ? πŸ˜• poor fellow πŸ˜†

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...EhSaas...


thats upto you what you want to feel
becoz in my story adhiraj is her 1st love and will always be and i clearly mentioned in this story from begining 😊
she knew that adhiraj can never be her and she doesnt want to force adhiraj too becoz he loves suhani and she is moving on with mayank becoz of his trust on her and after heartbreak she came out from fairytale world and facing reality
romance i dont mind to show it but do you think as per story it is good to show that soon means she is coming out from one phase of her life 😊
you are writer and you can answer me that very well

i will try to update on e romantic update for sure 😳
but you need to help me becoz romance is not my cup of tea
otherwise i have to copy from update from other writer and will make 1 chapter πŸ˜†

i updated earlier becoz i am going on break for one week so till next sunday no update πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†


Fine fine as a writer i understood what's story plot is going on and you have show it slowly..
but as a reader mein bas expect ker rahi thi..
aur tera adhiraj vo bhaad mein jaaye...
bas keh diya to keh diya..
aur sabse important baat
madam aap ek week ke break per jaa rahe ho..
itna bhoi torture mat karo please..
ek to update de do.
and don't worry i will help in romncing Mayank mujhe bahut lagta hain vesa kerna..
ehehehe

aye Jaya Raani..jaldi wapis anaa yaar
missing you
abhi se..
vese you know kise..
but still ho sake to..
i am not forcing you..
but fir bhi..agar ek baar ker de to kuch chala nahi jaayega tera..ladki...
ookay..chal..bahut bol diya..
ab ek update de ker jaa 1 week ki break per..
wapis aa ker 5-5 ek saath de dena..
okay
now be a good girl..
my sweet girl..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...EhSaas...


i want to end this SS as soon as possible 😊
than break for 1 month and i will write new story but after reading that you and shaffy are surely gonna kill me πŸ˜†
why you hate adhiraj ? πŸ˜• poor fellow πŸ˜†


tu nayi story mein aisa bhi kya kregi that we will kill you...


Yaar Adhiraj mujhe to pehle se hi pasand nahi tha..
patanahi usse dekh ker mann kerta hain usse thappad maru..
bas,..
kyu i don't know myself.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...EhSaas...


i want to end this SS as soon as possible 😊
than break for 1 month and i will write new story but after reading that you and shaffy are surely gonna kill me πŸ˜†
why you hate adhiraj ? πŸ˜• poor fellow πŸ˜†


@bold- becoz i dint fine a single quality to like him. actually its all about the affection towards character. I m in so much j love with mayur that i cant like/love any one other tthan mayur.. its good that adhi love suhani not NUpur- pher tou mayur nehi hota. hehehehehehe

i know it wouldnt be easy for NUPUR to forget her first love but i m damn sure maynk will shower her with so much love that she will be bound to love him back. and i believe it.. he lekin i dont believe u. tu kuch bhi kar sakti hai. as u know mood swing,. pata nehi tuhe humesha mood swing kyun hota hai?? baat kya hai??LOL LOL

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