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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks dear for liking it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Yashu..

Nice di! very nice

I think Mayank will be very happy, but nupur will get very nervous...
Yashu

Hi Yashu honey 🤗
happy to see u here
did u get my other pm?
thanks hun for liking it 😛
u'll get to know soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dreambig

Nice concept.

Continue soon.
Do PM me 😊

Thanks dear for liking it 😊
i'll pme u
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Maria.

@Samira sis🤗

congrats for starting new SS🤗🤗 Very interesting start...
loved Mayu n Nups introduction
loved it
plz do continue soon...
love y🤗
keep it up!!

Aww thank u so much sis 🤗🤗
i'll update 2row insha-ALLAH
love u too🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

congratulations 4 ur ss

ur update was superb..
such n nic concept n plot..
i guess mayank wont regret will if he wont how the story will move further...
i don't knw wat will gonna happen..bt i loved the ss...
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u

Thanks alot Parul for the comment
u'll know soon dear n ur welcome
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

oh gr8...

a very nice strt...tht so good ur writng an ss..hope to see ur ff soon too
wonderful strt..so much there pain celebration, fear...
evrything
cont soon

Thank u verry much sis for liking it 🤗
i don't thing i can handle an FF lol sis
i'll thanks again
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Its lovely..
Hope mayank will be happy by this news...
Cont soon...

Thank u dear liking it😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

OMG Samira, what u have done!!!!

m speechless!!!

awesome ... mindblowing start.

feel bad for nupur ... she suffered so much since childhood ...

i wonder, why her mother behaved rudely to her? was she her step-mother??

its really nice to see mayank loves to her ... he loves her so much.

finally nupur is happy after so much misery!!!

through pregnancy is most beautiful phase of a woman's life, but here nupur was scared ... thinking abt mayank's reaction!!!

bt i think, mayank ll be with her ... he ll be excited like her ...

very well written samira ... u knw, nupur is ur strong point ... u protrait nupur's character very well ... not only this ss ... bt on previous os too...

hats off to ur writing skill.

waiting for ur next part.

so sorry for replying late.

Suja i'm so happy that u loved i know it's small but will make it up to u next part long anough that u'll get bore 😆
yeah she's been throught a lot n God knows what will happend to her now..
Coz i can only feel what women feels in this kind of situation.. that's why Nupur is my strong point old the time
Thank u so much for ur comment it meeans so much to me, urs n all the writres who commented as well,
coz i feel like i'm back in school lol 😆 whe u aprove my writing thanks sweety
love u 🤗
Edited by SamiraARTiMAYUR - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very very nice OS...Sams! Kip it up! Pm me again!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Anila this's for u from my side, belated birthday sis,i wanted to post last night but couldn't,,have blast birthday habibti love you🤗

Part2
He came home that night, he got the feelings like something bed will happened tonight," why do i feel these feelings that i'll loose something that mean so much to me? Mayank forget nothing will happened when you see Nupur's face i'll forget all those feelings" he was trying to comfort him self, " all i want was Nupur i want to hug her hold her long time to breath her sweet fragrance then everything will be alright"
before he opened his door he felt different fragrance coming out his home, he opened the door the lights were dumb candles were everywhere he can't see his Nupur, the house felt like empty only just little smooth and soft back ground Music, their favourite singer ("Celine dion's" song Because you loved me ") he put his jacket and his case on sofa looked around couldn't see still Nupur, but saw a note on the next wall to the stairs, note says.
" Go straight to the bathroom baby" he did go the bathroom the whole bathroom filled with candles and roses everything looks so perfect except he can't see the person who did all these things, he wanted to see her hold her kiss her till they both can't breath, "Where are you Nupur?" another note on the mirror says " took nice bubble bath relax while your there don't you dare to think about work or whatever you don't like to remember, just remember our beautiful moments like our 2nd honeymoon when we want to Milan last year, then when you finish your bath, i put your clothes ready on the bed, then come down stairs honey?" he took his bubbling bath and When he finished he went down stairs on his last step the stairs, he heard her voice
" Mayu would you close your eyes please for me ?" he did as he told she came right in front of him took his hands with her small delicate one rapping her thump on his palm sweetly she took him to the dinning table, and make him sit, then said " open your eyen Mayu" he opened but didn't looked anywhere else but the thing he wanted to look since he came home her face, and saw the most beautiful face on this earth, she looks so breath takingly gorgeous wearing his favourite Sari and the earring that he gifted their wedding night, the one that matched her engagement ring as well her eyes which between brown and yellow kind look like the sun, he looked at her lovingly and she looked him with same look filled expressing their passionate love and that between them,
He put his hand forward so she could took he held her hand pulled her towards him and she collided his chest and gasped "Nupur what do get to deserve this beautiful night?" she put her hands on his waist held him tightly and said " "Honey you deserve more than this, it's just that we didn't get much time together since my college finished i thought why not treat my husband the best tonight, tough i have big surprise for you" she finish with welcome home kiss and rest her head on his chest listening his heart beat, " Nupur are you sure that's it, coz i know since last 2 weeks you look tired always feeling sick? and you know i hate surprises i always like everything to be on planed not coming out of nowhere? "I know baby you don't like surprises but sometimes we can't control what will happen right? anyway i'll tell you later i don't want waste my hard work, so first lats' eat ok" and give him a hard kiss on the lips, "Good coz i'm feeling so hungry lets eat first, i also have something to tell you" he said. He made her set on his lab They eat their food actually fed each other ,Nupur sitting his lab while Mayank feeding her, they enjoyed their good time but God knows how it will last,

After the dinner they went to the living-room set on the sofa, he was holding her hands telling about his office to day , and suddenly Nupur said " Mayank remember i said i had surprise ?" "yeah honey tell me what is it? don't told me you job asked you on board please ?"
" No Mayank you knew i wasn't feeling good these past 2 weeks? today i remembered i haven't had my period last month i thought first it was the stress but i saw some sings which i decided to do pregnancy test, so today i went to the pharmacy and bought a pregnancy test" When she was about to finish the rest she looked his face he looked pale that she thought he'll past out " Mayank are you okay? you look so pale? what happened?" " Nupur why would you need a pregnancy test? you were taking a bills right? so why bother the test? may be you were tense about the new job that could be bit of stress huh? " No i had to i just told you i missed one period thought anything could happened that's why i took the test"


"Then what the test said" his throat moved up and down, she was feeling so weird and awkward couldn't finish what she started, and chokingly with sad smile said "it's positive you going to be a dad" he moved so quickly that she nearly fall down if she wasn't steady her self, he run shaking fingers with his black hair and said "that can't be possible you can't be pregnant, and if you are Nupur you'll not going to have this baby, i don't want you to have a baby not now, i don't want to be a father Nupur," then turn around to see Nupur she was on the floor with her knees her eyes bucket of tears, her face lost all the colours, she looked so young and helpless, that time he hated him self for what he was doing to her, he fall on his knees held her shoulders and said " Nupur we can not have this baby, i don't want you to have it, please let's make appointment tomorrow on the GB and it'll will finish before you realise please Nupur don't be stubborn, her eyes glittering with fierce tears, She felt a wire tightened around her throat and the words couldn't come out, but she have to, for baby and for her bride as well she tried to breath in and out then said..
"How dare you, dare you sitting in front of me asking me to kill my own child ? if you don' want to be a father that's your problem not mine, what's wrong with you Mayank? why you don't want baby? is't with me that you don't want to have baby with or you never want to be a father? answer me damn it. don't sit there and look at me like you never saw me, Mayank say something" he was looking at her not saying anything then tried hold her face in his hands but she bushed him and stood up she said "don't ask me to abort my child, i'll never try to harm innocent human who was i supposed to protect, who am i to take his life Mayank? before he breath to the air in this world, i hate you i hate you for suggesting this. your a monster Mayank i thought you were better person human being who'll understand me, you nothing but heartless cruel , just get the hell away for me and leave the house or i'll if you don't, she poused " no Nupur i'll leave i just need to get something upstairs" he mumered "No don't even bother to go up stairs to get your phone i'll do that for you, just stay out side, get out now or i'll scream, and if i do, you know Mr Smith would call the Police,

Nupur she never thought someone could hurt her that bad without putting a knife on her throat, but Mayank did she never felt this hurt when even her own father said, " i wish you wouldn't my flash and blood," that time she just cried and after talking to her best friend Dia in 1 hour ,then Sumayah came to her room put her head on her lab stroking it she was smiling enjoying forgetting what her dad said, but Mayank asking her to abort their baby? hurts like hell...


sorry guy' about the mistkes n grammer ididnt checked
Anila happy birthday again' sis
Sorry guys i thought it was big anough.😭
how about now?
Edited by SamiraARTiMAYUR - 13 years ago

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