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Posted: 13 years ago
Just finished reading both parts.
OMG samira they are amazing...beautifully written.
Loved the way you described Nupur in first part,it was too
straight forward and I liked it.

And second part..OMG..I was so happy ,everything was going so fine,the way nupur arranged to give him surprise was amazing,but Mayank!!!

Hoe could he say her to abort the child,it was too mean.Hope he will realize his mistake soon or else It will be better for nupur to leave him forever...!

Do cont soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Samira, its beautiful update.

loved it totally

bt, i dnt knw wht to say more ... through its a beautiful update, bt its a very sad update.

first i ws very happy for everything ... nupur accepted her child ... n arranged everything for mayank ... she makes everything according to his taste ... bt at last her fear turned true... mayank nt accepted this child..

i really hate this mayank ... why he didnt accept this child???

when nupur ws ready then why not he???

i really disappointd to see this side of mayank... i really hate him.

waiting for next part.

contineu soon

thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 13 years ago

thank u 4 the update

aww my poor nupur...
mayank is not completely wrong ..may be he has some reasons not to become a father
bt it is vryyy bad to tell nupur to abort the child
he cn't mend his mistake by doing such things
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
Edited by parul_bansal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u very much guy's for ur beautiful comments 🤗 i didn't expected this much but it means lot to me that u liked the story... but please don't hate Mayank he may have reason not want to be a father?
Suja do't be disappointd on Mayank hun 😊
thanks guy's i'll update latter on next part insha-ALLAH
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Posted: 13 years ago
sami sis
res...LOL
apki update ki pehle he res karke rakh rahi hu..:D

Edit

samira sis i-umm what can i say abt this update
yaar mujhe kuch samjh main nehi arha hai.

maynk aisa kyun kar rahi hai
whats the reason?????
hmmm something bothering him- but what is it???
im curious to know the reason ...fabulous part
awesome
waiting for next part...


Edited by tasnim. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Here is part 3 s tell me what you think??
There's new character and is Sumayah she's Nupur's nanny who's like mom to her...
That night he left the house, he went to his office, And Nupur she was so lost, felt broken helpless, she wished she had lovely mother who she could share her pain, so she can lay her head on her moms lap and cry until no more tears left, But she will not have that wishful, coz her mom doesn't do emotional or have that soft heart who can heel Nupur a bit now, and Dia is so far from here can't even phone this hour in India,
She'll probably sleep, so as Sumayah she don't want to tell her all these she was Nupur's bestfriend, a Mom, and everything to her since Nupur remember, may be tomorrow she will go to her hug her tightly feel her aroma, but tonight she'll be on her own, so she just lay her head on the sofa instead her mums lap and cry out loud, felt so weak after crying like ages, and fall sleep in her place sitting on the floor her head on the sofa,

Mayank in the other hand was in his office didn't get sleep at all, his eyes were wide open there was dark circles, in the morning he changed his office and remember to call Nupur, he called the house number and it kept ringing and ringing, he worried then he tried one more time and this time she answered, a voice seems sleepy or tired, he felt as his heart being squeezes in fists, but didn't talk just listened her voice, her voice was going straight to his heart, somehow she might felt it was him and said "Mr Sharma you don't have to check up on me, i'm fine can take care of my self, and hey don't worry i won't have second thought i'll never ever abort my own child, even if my life depends on it, so this is your house you can come, And don't worry i won't bother you too much, till i get time to look a new home, as i don't want to go anywhere not even to my parents coz they heartless like you who'll suggest to kill my Baby, so it's your house feel free, but don't ever expect me to be your wife, or act like one, is that understood Mr Sharma,?" she finished hang up on him and start crying

She have no idea where she get that strength to say all that in one breath "God if someone you love hurt you, your totally become someone else" she thought. She was so tired to go outside tomorrow she'll go to her job which will be exhausting, how will she survive if she's getting tired of doing those small things at home, even arguing with Mayank making her more tired the she can imagine.
How will she stay the same home and not a share a room with him? not to go and hug him kiss him when he's back at home? "Oh God Nupur now you make your self more miserable," but i have to i hate him right? he asked me to abort my baby, how can i still feel him want do the things we you used to do? Nupur you have to to be strong not only your self but for your baby, what will he thought of you that you feeling this heartless arrogant men, who doesn't want to to be a father for his own flash and blood? you got to be strong for the sake of your baby" she rubbed her balms on her flat stomach she already loved her baby could do anything for him/her,
Mayank feeling miserable hating him self for what he said to Nupur, but he can't do anything he love her more him self could do anything for her, but he want to safe her this cruel world, he want to protect her that was what he promised in front of God the day he married to her, and he was suppose to do that, but he did the opposite he made her pregnant, what will she do if she find's out will she hate him? or stood beside him go through all the those things? he can't bear to see that again this time it'll kill him, "God please help me i don't want to complain about your tests, but when the question is my love one, i can't control it makes me ask you why are you doing this to me? but i'm in your hands and with your help i have to set the records right, tell Nupur i'm sorry that i'll do anything she want me to do, stay with her go through with the pregnancy and every step will stand beside her, and we'll be there for our baby whatever happened to her/him, hang on" i won't say that, just not now i'll wait until 1st scan ask the doctor by my self then when i know it's ok i'll tell her everything even my... No no i can't ... i can't even bear to think that let alone to tell as story..
preca
she looked around to get a cab and didn't looked weather the trafic light is green or red she put her foot on the road and track come to her and crashed...
Tasnim here is the update 😊
Edited by SamiraARTiMAYUR - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
@samira sis🤗 wow...what an amazing update
brilliant
sis u r an amazing writer
i m loving your writing
plz do write more as i wana read more of ur work
love y🤗
P.S..sis plz re size the font of ur post..its too small to read😳
Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update API...🤗
it was d best chapter so far in dis SS...
i truly loved it lodsss...
Beautifully written...
i loved it to d coreee...
u described Both der feelings really well...
its an awesome treat to read from U...
loved it lodsss...
Though i hv many qs in my mind now..
bt i will wait to read d further parts...
n now...jst wanna enjoy dis part...
loved it lodsss...
keep it up...
Love u API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Maria.

@samira sis🤗 wow...what an amazing update

brilliant
sis u r an amazing writer
i m loving your writing
plz do write more as i wana read more of ur work
love y🤗
P.S..sis plz re size the font of ur post..its too small to read😳

Awww sis love y🤗 thank u so so much for ur lovely comment
i'm happy that ur loving 🤗🤗🤗
n i'm sorry Maria my screen shows too big i changed now hope isn't that small now
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnim.

sami sis
res...LOL
apki update ki pehle he res karke rakh rahi hu..:D

Edit

samira sis i-umm what can i say abt this update
yaar mujhe kuch samjh main nehi arha hai.

maynk aisa kyun kar rahi hai
whats the reason?????
hmmm something bothering him- but what is it???
im curious to know the reason ...fabulous part
awesome
waiting for next part...


Tasnim u'll get ur answers very soon ..
and u won't hate Mayu or u'll be feeling sorry for him 😉
Thanks sweety for ur lovely comment 🤗

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