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Posted: 14 years ago
N: Gunjan yeh tumhare liye(said showing the plant).
Gunjan smiled broadly and went to him.

G: Niel! Ek aur rose plant! Thank you so much niel. Yeh rose bahut sundar hai and its my fav ''pink rose.''(said smilingly).
N: yeh, mera gift hai tumhare lie.
U: Gift! Kisliye? Kya aaj gunjan birthday hai, mein kaise bhul gaya?
[COLOR=BROWN](said worriedly).

G: Arey, nahi uday bhaiyya, aaj mera birthday nahi hai.
U: Toh, phir gift kisliye dia niel?
N: woh isliye kyun ki mein kal raat NEW YORK ja raha hu na, apne film ke shooting ke liye.
U: Ha, isiliye toh uncle ne parso raat dubai jane se pehle nupur-mayank ko bhulaye, kyun ki woh ek mahine tak nahi ayenge aur tumhara bhi ek mahine ka schedule hai aur woh kal subah hi agaye the.
N: Exactly, uday. Main one month tak nahi rahunga. Aur nupur uski saath rahegi toh gunjan puri duniya ko bhi bhul jayegi.
Isliye mein ye de raha hu, taki woh har subah plants ko pani dete time isse dekh kar hi sahi, woh mujhe yaad karegi.

Gunjan opened her mouth in shock while uday and niel laughed.
G: Niel, mein tumhe kabhi bhul sakti hu kya?! U r my best friend mein tumhe kabhi nahi bhulungi.(said seriously).
N: hey, i was just joking.
U: waise, neil ek baath sach hai. Gunjan jab nupur ki saath hoti hai na, tab use kisi bhi cheez ki chinta nahi hoti. Aur jab bhi use koi problem aati hai, tab nupur ke elawa kisi ke saath bhi apna problem share nahi karti
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N: Is mein kya nayi baat hai uday, ye toh sab jaante hai.
G: Ha, woh isliye kyun ki main di se joot nahi bol sakti. Aur koi bhi baat chupa nahi sakti.(said sweetly).
N: Aha! Tum apni di se kya, kisi stranger se bhi joot nahi bol sakti.
U: Ha, yeh 100% correct hai. Ki gunjan joot bol hi nahi sakti.

G: Ha par, mere bina bataye bhi mujhe samajne wale bestfriends hai na. Woh meri problem jat se pakad lete hai.
U: ha, kon hai woh log.
G: ek neil hai. Aur...
N: aur dusre, hamare jeeju, aur iski world's best jeeju... Mayank.
U: oh!
G: Hato, tum log. Mujhe bahut kaam hai. Di, dia aur jeeju uthe hi honge. Mujhe break-fast bhi banana hai.
N: ha, waise baarish ruk gayi hai toh main ise jake garden mein plant kar deta hu.
G: Ok.

Neil went to garden and gunjan went towards stove.
U: Lo, mere sandwiches katam hogaye.(saying this he kept the plate in wash basin)
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Thank you so much for reading this very boring part by taking time from u r busy schedule. Sorry for dissappointing u.Actually, it had mayur's intro scene as a continution. But, it wasn't good. That's why i edited it. Will post mayur's intro in next part and i'll make sure that it was up to ur expectations. And one more thing. I won't be able to update before a week. Because, i have a project to submit. But i'll try to update, when i get sometime. I hope u'll understand my problem. One again very sorry for a disappointing and boring update.
Edited by gnaneswari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Not disappointing at all Lakshmi... really nicely written. And do not worry about updating a bit later... will wait for the next update. 😊
IISHAFS thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was soo nice love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME Part LAKSHMi. FABULOUS. Loved it...nice description of Bonding between GUNJAN & NEiL. Its so flawless. Update was little short But,Its Ok..I understand your problem. And, this time time your color selection is good...sorry,I didn't know that,U R Mobile user...so,Its Ok...no any complain. and thanks for consider my suggestions. Do continue soon...If,U have some time...Thanx a lot for the PM.
tanisha997 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice and cute update
and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nyc updte yr n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Laxmi ...i read all parts in one go ...frst all congratulations on starting a FF n that even so superb 👏...lovely ...u have described each n everything very well...👍🏼...n ur story line is also superb ...plss do add me in ur Pm list ... cont soon ...n do Pm me ok 😃
gnaneswari thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks a lot for commenting
gnaneswari thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaNia_2

Not disappointing at all Lakshmi... really nicely written. And do not worry about updating a bit later... will wait for the next update. 😊

thanks a lot for commenting. I'm glad that u were not dissappoited with the update. i'll try to update on wednesday.
gnaneswari thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was soo nice love it

thanks a lot for commenting

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