Mayur FF Upd-Pyar Bada Ya Abhiman Last Part -P 146

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kirti123

@kirti123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

lovely update

young principle was cute

mayur first meet was superb

wating to read the next part

thanks for the pm

😊

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

congrats dear for ur FF.

just read this FF...n i loved it.

cs was so nice.

bt thres so prob with Aditry Bhushan's age...i think he's 4, nt 5.

d storyline was fab.

m just loved it.

continue soon.

plz add me in ur pm list.

sorry if i hurt u

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ana.khan

@ana.khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

lyked it...

u hav good skills gal..keep going...

nupur was bit harsh but dat was needed coz mayank ko aisay kisi ne treat nhi kra na...

😊

ll b waitng fo ur update...

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Gul

@DhanakZ

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

That was really Fantastic update

mayur First Meeting was Superb

Cont soon and Plz Pm me

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Hey Priyanka .. man... i loved the strict Nupur here... Do Lemme know when u update... 😊

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490368

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: kirti123
lovely update
young principle was cute

mayur first meet was superb

wating to read the next part

thanks for the pm

😊

Thanks Kirti ...Will update today or tomorrow for sure ...😃 ...

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490368

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur
congrats dear for ur FF.
just read this FF...n i loved it.

cs was so nice.

bt thres so prob with Aditry Bhushan's age...i think he's 4, nt 5.

d storyline was fab.

m just loved it.

continue soon.

plz add me in ur pm list.

sorry if i hurt u

Thanks for encouragement n feedbak😃,, will send u PM once its updated

Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago

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490368

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: ana.khan
lyked it...
u hav good skills gal..keep going...

nupur was bit harsh but dat was needed coz mayank ko aisay kisi ne treat nhi kra na...

😊

ll b waitng fo ur update...

Do not know about skill ana, ... this is just a trial but feedback from u people always help me to improve ...

Mayank is little ignorant when it comes to others n Nupur is responsible , so they clash. ..when i clash, u might cross the limit ..so thats what happend, its important for them to realise..wait to read next update 😃

Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago