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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Priyanka..

Sanchari ..waiting for ur feedback ...😃.. thanks ...

nahi 2-3 chapter main theek ho jayega .😃

yeah...that would be gr8 then...😃😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
priyanka - waiting waiting and waiting for ur update
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Posted: 14 years ago
read last 2 chaptrs today...luved them...its getting more ntersting...ll b waiting for next update...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ana.khan

read last 2 chaptrs today...luved them...its getting more ntersting...ll b waiting for next update...


Thanks Ana ... i m glad u r liking it ... will update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mjht-nups-mayu

Nice Update😃 ...I wanna see Mayank beating Ranvijay now 😡 n teaach lesson to Diya for her behaviour towards Nupur ...Aw i loved Benji...

Thanks for liking it ...Benji is too cute 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-

priyanka - waiting waiting and waiting for ur update

Update karoongi faria aj raat ko😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 7 :- Mayur kee beech dooriya 😕

Nupur was very shocked with all the things happened n just wanted to run away from their. Mayank was shocked n surprised with the situation n cursing himself for not handling it properly. Ek taraf uske good friends jise who itne saalo se janata thaa the and doosri taraf Nupur, jise who bas kuch dino se janta thaa. Uskee ek galati thee kee usne apne humiliation ke barain main apne doston se discuss kiya n told them to take revenge few days back, leking uske baad he realised kee Nupur is not that bad, she has a attitude.
Nupur akele waha pub se nikal kar bahar aa jati hai, she could not find taxi to go back to panchgani. Nupur was crying badly for the humiliation she faced just now from mayanks friends n she was more hurt by trusting mayank .She was hurt n heartbroken kee Mayank ne yeh sab plan banaya usase badla lene ke liye. Nupur brain was not working , she started walking senselessly on her own in a dark road , tabhee barish suru ho jati hain, she keeps walking as fast as she can , she just wanted to run away from mayank n everyone, Nupur puri tarah se bheegi hue hai ,suddenly she saw bright light flashing infront of her. Ranvijay was standing infront him.

Ranvijay:- Hey Beautiful, akele kahan ja rahee ho

Nupur:- Tum, ghabra kar usne bola

Ranvijay:- Han main, tumhe akele kaise chod sakta hoo

Nupur :- Leave me alone

Ranvijay:- u r looking so pretty, how can I leave u alone here

Nupur:- I m telling u last time, leave me alone, nupur is trying to regain strength now

Ranvijay- C'mon, Ek thaappad jo tumne lagaya hai , uska answer to milna chahiye

Nupur :- Leave me alone, she started running

Ranvijay:- C'mon baby. Do not run away from me, koi nahi hai bachane ke liye

Nupur: - God help me, she was running faster faster n suddenly she collided with someone n looked at that person, felt safer in his arm as that person hold her very tight , She said Mayank.

Mayank:- Nupur main hoo yahan, ab kuch nahi hoga

Nupur:- Nupur looked at mayank n fainted, wor puri tarah se bheegi huee thee aur dari hue thee, mayank decided to put her safe in his car first than deal with Ranvijay.

Ranvijay was still standing there it seems nothing has happend n waiting for Mayank. Diya came out from the car also n joined Ranvijay, ab barish thodi kam ho gayee thee. Mayank nupur ko safely apne car main baitha deta hai n came out to speak up with Ranvijay n Diya

Mayank- Ranvijay what is these, he said it angrily

Ranvijay:- chill Mayank, I just wanted to scare her , that's it, you did not say anything when she slapped me.

Mayank:- RV, your behavouir was pathetic n disgusting and she is different from the girls u met in ur life

Ranvijay:- C'mon mayank, u r taking her side for ur friends

Mayank:- Well it was my mistake I discussed my problem with u guys , I shud not have done it.

Diya: C'mon Mayank, kya hai is ladkee main, she is full of attitude , I just hate her

Mayank:- Stopped Diya, I do not want to hear anything against her n I would you to say sorry to her.

Diya :- Sorry my foot mayank, u r taking her side rather than me

Mayank:- Well meree opinion change ho gayee hai , she is different n I do like her as a person.

Ranvijay:- Mayank, OMG r u the same guy who does not believe in relationship, commitment etc etc ???

Mayank:- I m still the same but I cannot see anyone insulting her anymore, she is my employee n me being her employer has got right to support her, she is different , very different from the all girls I have met in my life

Ranvijay:- Yes mayank , she is different that is why I just liked her, abhee woh meri hoti agar tum nahi aate hamare beech main , he said laughing loudly

Mayank:- Enough Ranvijay n he slapped him very hard , he was very angry

Ranvijay:- Enough Mayank, u slapped me for that bitch

Mayank:- mind ur language Ranvijay , if u want our friendship to continue than please leave

Diya :- Mayank , this is enough , you slapped him for her

Mayank:- I would have slapped u as well for ur behaviour lekin main ladkiyon per hath nahi uthata

Diya :- Mayank, we r your old friends

Mayank:- But I did not exprect my good friends to mistreat n humiliate like this to her

Diya :- Aise usme kya hai jiske liye u r humiliating us now

Mayank:- well she is pure by heart n harmless but jin doston ko main itne salo se janta hoo who aise nikle. How could u guys behaved like that to her, what will answer my Dadi n main kya answer karoonga ise ?

Ranvijay:- Hmm , mayank I do not think our friendship is same anymore, we used to enjoy all these things before , suddenly everything changed .

Mayank:- yes we used to enjoy because hamare life main nupur jaisee ladkiya nahi aayee hai pahle, she is different

Diya :- she is the reason for breaking our friendship

Mayank:- Well friendship can stay but you guys have to apologise to her.

Ranvijay- apology my foot mayank, uske slap ka revenge lena bacha hai

Mayank:- well RV , just think twice before harming her , I will kill you.

Ranvijay :- Chill Mayank, I was joking .

Diya :- Mayank , I m sorry whatever happened today ( dia did not want to loose mayank so she started handling the situation by saying sorry to him)

Mayank:- Well both of apologise to her n if she forgives you than our friendship will stay as it was before.

Diya :- Okay Mayank , I will say sorry to her only for you, not for her n ranvijay will do the same because we love our group n I love u

Mayan:- I wud like to keep our friendship as it is like before but if anyone will misbehave with nupur in the future, I will not tolerate.

Diya :- Calm down mayank, we said it na, Can I come with you to Mumbain ( diya is hating to hear a nupur name from mayank mouth but tried to calm )

Mayank:- No Diya, you came with Ranvijay n you go back with him, I will drop Nupur safely home, if she will see u again in the car, she will get upset

Diya :- OH okay , Diya is so jealous of Nupur n felt Mayank hath se gaya completely.

Ranvijay n Diya left from there, Mayank went to his car n saw Nupur sleeping peacefully in his front car seat, her face looks relaxed now but pale. Mayank wanted to hug her n wanted to say sorry for whatever happened today but he decided to stay away because he knew "Nupur is very angry with him for whatever happened today n will not forgive him so easily". Mayank just wanted to take Nupur home safely but looking at her condition, he thought its not a good idea to take her home directly, So he called Benji. Benji was waiting for Mayank at the Pub unaware of the incident, he could not find Diya, Mayank,Ranvijay n Nupur there, he tried calling diya n ranvijay but could not get through so he tried Mayank , Mayank picked his call n asked him to wait there so he can come n pick him, he needed friend today, Mayank knew Nupur was comfortable with Benji so he decided to ask Benji to join them while going back to Mumbai. Mayank picked Benji n told him everything happened few minutes ago , Benji was shocked n very angry at diya n ranvijay. Mayank n Benji were very tensed to see Nupur in that condition.

Mayank:- Ben, do not know how all these things happened so quickly

Benji:- Mayank , well fault is yours also, you could have stopped them, RV crossed his limit, we all know him very well n we also know how he treats girls

Mayank:- I know, Both Diya n Ranvijya did not let me speak on that time

Benji:- Nupur is very different , I like her, not like other girls . She is special,

Mayank:- yes she is different, not our type

Benji:- Mayank , you need to apologise to her when she wakes up

Mayank:- I m more worried about her now, she looks very pale , barish main puri tarah se bheegi hue thee n upper se Ranvijay ke incident se She is in SHOCK. Kya karoon main, kahan le jaooon

Benji:- You can take her to my would be fianc place

Mayank:- Fiance ??????? tumhareee, kab kahan kaise ?????

Benji:- Well mom ne introduce karaya thaa few months back , on the time I did not like her much but now we r friend , she will help

Mayank:- Benji itne badi baat tumne chupayee

Benji:- Mayank main to milta hee rahta ho ladkiyon se , u know that n u know also I will marry a girl of my mothers choice,

Mayank:- Benji , I m glad u believe in relationship but I hate marriage, commitment, family , but I m still with my family due to my MUM n Dadi , no body understands my pain.

Benji:- C'mon mayank, think differently , you will find life beautiful

Mayank:- that's your department, I feel like Nupur is having fever , he checked nupur forehead

Benji:- I really feel bad for her, she did not deserve all these drama

Mayank: yes, lets take her safely to your would be fianc Place

Benji:- Yes.

Mayank drove back to Mumbai with Benji n Nupur, Nupur fever was getting higher, mayank n benji are getting worrid now. Mayank is cursing himself for today, he was not expecting that incident to happened, he just wanted peaceful journey bak to Mumbai with Nupur n drop her safely but it did not happen. Mayank reached Mumbai with Benji n Nupur n they were outside Benji "would be fianc" House. Nupur's slept in whole journey due to the fever n shock, he condition was not improving. Benji came out from the car n knocked at the door, girl open the door n shock to see him

Benji:- Main koi bhoot nahi, its Benji

Girl :- What r u doing here at the moment?

Benji:- calm down , I need your help

Girl :- What help

Benji:- I will tell you whole story but please help me now, it is urgent, my friend, she is not well, 😕

Girl :- Okay , bring her inside quickly

Benji went outside n ask Mayank to bring Nupur, Nupur was unconscious n was not able to move, so Mayank had to pick her, Nupur head was lying comfortably in mayank shoulder n her hand was on his neck, Mayank felt nice carrying nupur, he looked at her face n felt something different but could not understand what was that but he felt nice carrying nupur.

Girl :- Nupur tum, said surprisingly,

Benji:- Do u know know her

Girl :- yes she is my colleague , what happened to her

Maynk:- tum , I know you , mayank said is surprisingly too

Girl:- yes Mr Sharma, we met before, what happened to Nupur, who to panchagani main thee naa apke sath

Benji:- hold on guys , we need to introduce each other properly now

Mayank:- Benji , let me introduce your would be fianc , her name is Annie n she is Nupurs colleague from the school

Benji:- Annie n Nupur are friends , OMG this is bestest new

Annie:- Mr Sharma , we can introduce each other later, please nupur ko aap mere bedroom main layiye

Mayank:- yeh sure ,

Benji:- I m going to call doctor

Annie :- please do it n aaplog mujhe bataye yeh sab kaise hua meanwhile I need to call Nupurs dad, he will get worried .

Mayank took Nupur in Annies bedroom n put her safely n comfortably, Nupur was holding Mayank shirts collar very tight, Mayank was about to fall on Nupur but somehow he manage to save her but he seems not able to take his eye off from her, Nupur was looking stunningly beautiful sleeping, he kept staring her but he got interrupted by Annie n Benji entry.

Annie:- How is nupur now?

Mayank:- she has got temperature n she is still uncounsious, I m worried, all these things happened due to me

Annie:- Mayank, Benji told me everything n whatever happened with Nupur was very wrong n its your fault also because u let it happen

Mayank:- I know, I did not get chance to speak up, everythinh happened so quickly ,at the moment I m worried about her health than anything else

Benji:- Doctor is coming soon, jo hona tha ho gaya , we will sort it out

Annie :- I have spoken to Nupurs father n told him she is here

Mayank:- thanks for handling this situation,

Annie:- mistake to hua hai, nupur k eek chote se humiliation ka itna bada revenge

Mayank:- I wanted to take revenge earlier lekin hamari Mumbai-Panchagani jaourney ache hue n we became friends leking beech main diya,RV ne akar sara problem create kiya.

Benji:- Mayank do not think much now

Annie:- main Nupur ko samjhaoongi

Mayank:- I m so happy that u r in Benji life, he is truly a good guy

Annie:- not yet ,, abhee time hai inke life main aane main, but we r good friends at the moment

Benji:- Woh din bhee aayega

Annie :- let see, Okay guy , I will suggest both of u to leave now, I will look after Nupur

Mayank:- nahi I will leave after doctors checkup

Benji :- we will

Annie :- that's okay .

Doctor came n checked Nupur , her fever was going down but she needed proper sleep so he gave an injection n instructed Annie, Mayank, Benji to let her rest n also told them " Nupur wll be fine by morning" . Mayank was relieved to hear that n thanked Doctor. Annie requested Mayank n Benji to leave n assure tham not to think too much, she promised mayank to help to sort this mess n asked them to come in the morning.

Precap:- Mayanks Guilt n Nupurs Confusion 😕

Edited by ..Priyanka.. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
cute update priyanka
poor nupur feeling bad for her
i will kill that diya n ranvijay😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for liking it ..😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for liking it 😃

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