~*MayUr O.S. Contest*~CAST YOUR VOTE~CLOSED - Page 4

Originally posted by: snow007

phalay tu ap ka OS contest ka idea bhoat acha hai

aur my vote for # 2
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college ki definition maray hisab say bulkul sahi hai

College bole toh....a place to learn...a place to get to know new people...a place to spend some great times with friends while still having the rim of focus on the career...a place to start putting a boundary for our life in this good and bad tactical world...in general it means all this..

2nd
stroy kafi realistic hai jo hum khud say yah ap surrounding say relate kar saktay hain

@Sabah, 😊 Every one of them is beautiful, but i voted for 3 because it has all the characters in it. I loved the way Mayank's thoughts about his best friend - Nupur, were described. The entry of Nupur and her falling into Mayank's arms is so typically Mayur. I loved the conversation between them, and the way they both confess to each other that they are in love. Beautiful 👏

Originally posted by: .Yamini.

@Sabah, 😊 Every one of them is beautiful, but i voted for 3 because it has all the characters in it. I loved the way Mayank's thoughts about his best friend - Nupur, were described. The entry of Nupur and her falling into Mayank's arms is so typically Mayur. I loved the conversation between them, and the way they both confess to each other that they are in love. Beautiful 👏

Originally posted by: --jiya--

Entry No. 1 Aetibear

It was like, a journey of a lifetime, put together in just few words. The writer portrayed every emotion so beautifully, the wait, the trust, the dilemma, the guilt... every single moment was expressed with an extra-ordinary grace that infused serenity in the reader's mind. In simple words, it was beautiful.

Entry No. 2 U, Me aur Hum

The first stanza, the description of being in college, it was truly commendable...hats off to the writer for that. I just can't help but quote:

Yes, college does mean all of it...

The story unfolds in a very sweet manner, giving us a glimpse of the companionship and love of Mayank and Nupur, our very own MayUr. Their cute ruthna-manana that was once a part of our lives... this story was fully identifiable to the Mr. and Mrs. Sharma we would have loved to see in the show.

Entry No. 3 Waiting For You

The best part of this story for me was the way the key phrase "College bole toh" was blended in it. College held a significance in all of their lives, for Diya it was masti, for Uday, it was Canteen, but for Mayank, it was only Nupur. The emotions that he had hidden in the deepest corner of his heart for 10 long years, surfaced today because of this simple phrase... and the wait of a lifetime was blessed with a blissful end.

The writer weaved the story in very simple words, which were enough to strike every chord of my heart. It was a perfect story, not only the-Mayank Sharma-perfect but actually the-Mayank Sharma and Nupur Bhushan-perfect.

Entry No. 4 Milke Bhi Hum Naa Mile

A beautiful story of silent love, love so strong that it gave Nupur the strength to live her life with just one memory of the man she loved, her Mayank.

Entry No. 5 This is True Love

Again a very sweet story, composed very nicely. The idea of Kashish narrating her parents love story was really touching as well as cute. She very nicely described how much her parents loved each other. When she lost her voice, she didn't want to hurt her beloved, perhaps she thought she would be a burden on him, but he silently proved himself, that no matter what happens, he will always love her.

Entry No. 6 Mayank Saint Sharma

This piece grabs attention mostly because of the extremely powerful vocabulary of the writer. The intrusion of Nupur Bhushan in Mayank Saint Sharma's prude and perfect life and turning it into a whirlwind, was described exactly the way Mayank would have put it. Kudos to the writer for doing such an extra-ordinary job.

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So, finally, all said and done, my vote goes to entry no. 3😊' because that was something I would regard as "Simply Beautiful" However, I still think every piece of writing out there deserves to be the winning entry. So, all the best to all the writers who participated.

~jiya~