Yes, I have conscise picture of whom i wish to give me vote too,but before i do i would like to say a few words. I was once told ,''Some people try to find things in this game that don't exist but football is only two things - blocking and tackling'' just like that, even this contest is about sharing what we do with what we have, it isn't about winning rather your journey and what you come upon through it.
Since i have read all the OS's i think it would be more appropriate to give my veiws on each, because honestly i have found something in each entry that made me want to say i will vote for this one. All five of the Os's are marvelous in the story they made out of a a few simple words, something i admire very much.
Atiebar
The pain of desertation was clearly shown, but i presumme if it was hard for me to read it, it was just as hard to write it. Their whole journey was explained just beautifully, with their feelings highlighted wonderfully, too feel the pain just by reading words is a outstanding accomplishment, because i feel their pain and turmoil, all of it. And at the end when they were reunited, my eyes danced with so much joy, and truly you brought out that atiebar on your love is vital as breathing.
Just a beautiful tale.
U,Me aur Hum.
Mr and Mrs Sharma, to be honest i just loved that second paragraph because it made me envy that i couldn't say i did those things, those things... rather moments which brought two people together and tied them in a bond of love. And the but they found their mirrors in each other's eyes which gave them their worlds in them... speechless, your description is flawless. I must say that little moment you focused on and sweet nothings session, had me awed. You managed to make me smile by the end even though at first i was also angry with Mr. Sharma just like Mrs. Sharma😆
Amazing.
Waiting for you!
can i just say you completely stole my heart through your description of Mayanks sharmas life without Nupur Bhushan and his anticipation on seeing her. And than the tale became complete after ten years, their wait was finally over. finally!😳, And it was adorable how you brought out Mayanks absentminded response to the college bole toh question and then everything came out as if suddenly the hidden away pandora box had been opened. And then their life was perfect, not seperately but with each other.
Just damn adorable. Had me in awe the whole while reading it.
Milke Bhi na hum Mile.
Defintely a very sad tale and how you blended the title into the story, close yet so far, brilliantly done. The story itself was nice, you portrayed true love essence wonderfully, for lovers can part but they still live in each other. Just superb. And end was painful, the saddening end to two people who loved each other, very heartouching.
This is true love .
Indeed that is true love at its peak, because it is in love when you become unselfish and care about others needs before your own.
Mayank Saint Sharma
I must say the grammar and structure of this piece is at the highest regards.I loved the story very much, about how Nupur came into the very prim and proper Mayank Sharma's life and caused everything to tumble away and lead him to falling in love with her. And their journey together as a whole and how they brought out the best in each other truely praise worthy.
You have written the transition ever so smoothly that i didn't realize when the story beging and ended and all i knew was, this Mayank sharma. And his Nupur.
Kudos to you for writing such brilliance.
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Now that i have pointed what i loved in each tale, i must announce for which woven tale it is that won my heart, it has to be Number 3, the wait of a lifetime, finally ended and true found its way back to each other. I did have alot of trouble choosing as each entry was worthy of being the winner, but number 3 just something about it was warm and enlighting and humorous also.
Good luck to everyone. No matter who wins, everyone is truly a winner in my eyes.
Sajjal.
Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago
Anupamaa
