Ambika's SaJan os gallery - Page 10

heyyy ambi
i finaly read d os..
n it was faaab..
realy yr..u penned it down so damn welll
cont dis gud wrkkk alwaz
thnx 4 d pm..

Hey guys as my vacations are going on I thought of writing a sajan oneshot again for all my lovely sajan-ians''..so here it goes...do drop your comments and please silent readers press the like tab'..your comments really mean a lot to me'..this is os is dedicated to my bestie on i-f shreya on her bday on 8^th june..but as she is going out so I thought of posting it earlier'HAPPY BIRTHDAY SHREYA!!!!!!!!!!🥳

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~REALIZING TRUE LOVE ~- A sajan os''

"True love is not how you forgive, but how you forget, not what you see but what you feel, not how you listen but how you understand, and not how you let go but how you hold on."

Love the most beautiful and heavenly feeling on this earth'All have experienced sometime or the other but only few can understand and reciprocate what it really means''.some name this infatuation and some just plain attraction'..But very few realize that it means LOVE'

Realizing true love isn't that easy as it seems'..Fighting your inner battle'listening to your heart without ignoring your mind is all that it takes''Sounds easy...doesn't it?

But who falls in love can only tell what it takes'..And the dumbest creatures on this world are BOYS! Who take years to realize whom they love and with whom they want to spend their entire lives! They seem to get stuck between different girls'or sometimes even walk miles in search of their so-called DREAM GIRL'they try EVERY single thing'.Be it stupid tarot card readers or some idiot money eaters'And sometimes they even sit lonely in a corner like "some depressed movie actors whose love is wooed by someone else or maybe the villain" .😆😆 Sound funny doesn't it? They try anything and everything but still forget the most important thing'..Listening to their heart'.The thing without which you can't decide the right person for yourself'The love of your life'..they try to find them everywhere even at the most silliest places like a GIRLS WASHROOM'😆😆...crazy people aren't they? But forget looking the person in their heart'..that's the place where your dream girl resides''But these MEN'.even a DODO is far more intelligent than them when it comes to this'

So now enough of introduction lets go to our ever sweet-januable-beautiful Chasmish'.who was as usual waiting at her home for Mr. Ever late Samrat'..

G to herself-uff yeh samrat kahaan reh gaya? Kaha tha time se aane ko and abhi bhi late'.kar raha hoga kahin apni morning sweet by flirting..ughh'sometimes I feel like hitting him'aaj main nahi chhodne waali usse'..idiot'jerk..moron'.

((She was continuously muttering to herself not realizing that the SUBJECT of her talks is just standing right behind her...samrat was continuously smiling listening to her talks'.and how much she praised him in his absence'he loved this cute red nosed chashmish'his best friend'.how januable she was''He was so lucky to get a best friend like her'who cared for him'.more than his parents did'))

Getting out of his chashmish thoughts he slowly whispered in her ears'

S-hey chashmish'.((.making her jump'.as she turned she was lost in those beautiful hazel eyes''they both were lost in each other's eyes..and as usual our eye lock session began'.Then suddenly gunjan came out of her trance'.and stepped back so as to create a little distance between them'.and turned away from him facing her back towards him'.))

S-chasmish mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itna acha sochti ho mere baare main'.he said teasingly'.while gunjan glared him'..

S-lagta hai aaj ka weather thora kharaab hai'.and heavy bearish ki sambhavna hai''.he said mockingly..teasing her further and enjoying the very rare sight of her red nose'''

G-shut up! Tum hour late ho'..kahaan the ab tak? She said strictly'

S-comeon chashmish ab tum aise act kar rahi ho jaise kit um meri girlfriend ho'.he said casually'.

While gunjan's facial expression changed'.her angry look gone and an expression of anguish visible on her face'''he turned her face away from her and lowered her head''

S-ab tumhe kya hua? Acha chhodo aur chalo'hum already college ke liye late ho chuke hain..comeon hurry up now!..

She sat quietly on the bike and was lost in her own thoughts'.

G in mind- sorry samrat I think main hi zyada personal ho gayi thi'..i think I shouldn't interfere in your life like this..main kyun hamesha bhul jaati hun ki main sirf tumhari friend hun and nothing else'mujhe apni feelings ko side rakhkar tumhari best friend ki tarah hi rehna chahiye''.ab main apne one-sided love ko kabhi bahar nahi aane dungi..I will remain your best friend only!

She came out of her thoughts as sam called her'..

S-chasmish tum kahan khoi hui ho'.hum college pahunch gaye hain'and main kabse tumhein bula raha hun'..koi baat hai kya? He asked concerned'

She quickly got up from the bike'

G-umm..nahi koi baat nahi hai'nothing'wo bus actually kuch soch rahi thi'ab main class ke liye late ho rahi'..main chalti hun'.she started walking towards her gate'then again sam called out..

S-chashmish agar tum bhul gayi ho to hum same class mein hain''.

G-haan who chalo chalte hain..she said softly'

They started walking..they were walking in the corridor'and girls were as usual trying to flirt with samrat trying to gain his attention..and samrat was samrat..how can he leave any chance to flirt with them'he too joined them'.giving flying kisses and all'.all his actions were being noticed by gunjan and she was really hurt seeing all this'tears were forming in her eyes but she composed herself and started walking faster and away from samrat'..but samrat was too busy to notice that..he was busy chatting and flirting with those shameless girls''after he was over with them'he noticed that gunjan wasn't beside him'..he started looking for her and went to the class and saw her sitting reading her book'..her eyes were down'.and she wasn't looking happy'but she was calm and quiet as always so samrat thought that everything was fine'..he went and sat beside her'.but she didn't notice him and was reading her book'samrat noticed that she was on the same page since 15 minutes'this was so not like gunjan who completed a page in less than 5 minutes'..

S-chasmish! He called out her name but no response'he again called out her name a littler louder'

S-chashmish! Again no reponse''he shook her from shoulder..suddenly she jerked up'..

G-hun haan bolo'.she said adjusting her specs'

S-tumhe itni der se bula raha hun..where r u lost and tum pichle 15 minutes se ussi same page pe ho'..

G-uhh'wo kuch nahi samrat'..wo bas I was thinking something'.she said stammering but still managed to smile'..

S-ya right I can see that!...chasmish now stop giving such lame excuses and tell me what's wrong??!! He said irritated with the lies she was telling'

G-sam I said na nothing is wrong'..now please stop thinking over this small issue'ab class start hone hi waali hai'

Samart was still not satisfied'.he knew gunjan was hiding something'and he didn't like it'..he wanted her to share everything with him as he does'..but there was something that was stopping her, pulling her to speak to him'

He thought of giving her some time..maybe she will herself talk to him'''with that he too tried to concentrate in the class but failed to do so'he was really concerned for his Best friend'..He knew chashmish was not open and expressive with everyone'.she was an orphan so had suffered a lot in life and that is what had made her quiet and introvert'.So he wanted her to talk to him and tell him all her fears and worries'share her tensions with him'to lighten herself by sharing all her pains with him'he had to wait for that'and if she herself didn't tell him he made up his mind to ask her himself what is wrong with her or maybe he will have to find out that himself!

As the class ended gunjan picked up her notes and started to go when sam called her..

S-chashmish canteen chalein? He asked hoping for a positive response..

G-woh sam mujhe library jaana hai'.she said trying to convince him

S-hmm..ok'.baadme milte hain'.he was really upset that his chashmish was hiding things from him'.

After he left the room'gunjan sighed'

G to herself- samrat main tumhe hurt nahi karna chahti but main apni feelings ko bahar nahii aane dena chahti..agar tumhe pata chala that I love you to shayad humari friendship humesha ke liye toot jayegi jo main nahi chahti..isliye mujhe tum se dur hi rehna hoga'saying this some tears came out but she wiped them'.

As she was walling in the corridor she heard a group of girls talking about samrat and she heard it'.

G1-u know sam ki nayi girlfriend kon hai?

G2- kon???

G1-koi nayi admission hai'.umm haan uska naam hai SHREYA'.(😆😆😆🤣)

G1-wo sam ki koi old class fellow hai and ab uski To-be-girlfriend'..

Hearing this gunjan was again left in tears'..she felt a stabbing pain in her heart..she felt as if somebody was ripping her heart apart'she quickly went in the washroom and cried her heart out..Releasing all the pain''.the pain which has been locked in her heart since many days'once she felt contented and relieved..she washed her face and came out'

Just then her phone rang'.she saw the screen..samrat's name was flashing'she composed herself and accepted the call'.

G-hello..she spoke softly..

S-hello nahi chasmish kahan ho tum? Poore college mein dekh chukka hun and tum kahin par bhi nahi ho'.he said concerned..

G-main wo ghar par hun..she lied'she won't be able to face him like this'so it was better to lie!

S-umm..theek hai..baadme baat karte hain..take care..byee..

G-ok bye.!

Samrat was seeing her hiding behind the pillar'he was shocked seeing chashmish lying'.never in his dreams did he ever imagine that HIS CHASHMISH would someday lie to him like this'.he don't know why but he felt really bad'

Now he was damn sure that there is something NOT WELL'..something is wrong with chasmish'.why was she behaving so weirdly'But poor soul he did not notice her red eyes which itself justified that she had cried a lot'.

He had to talk to her anyway'.this was so not RIGHT'.he was confused by her behavior and more than that he was hurt'..he made up his mind to talk to her'But before that he had to pick up shreya from airport'otherwise she would surely fly all people from the airport because of her screams'😆😆.He went to the airport to pick her up'

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AT NIGHT

SHERGILL MANSION-

Samya(samrat+shreya) (😆😉😛😳)were sitting in samrat's room having coffe and refreshing their childhood memories..just then shreya asked'

Sh-hey sam yaar tumne to mujhe kisi se milwana tha na?

S-haan wo chashmish se'he said stirring the spoon in the coffee lost in his thoughts'.

Sh- chashmish? Nice name'.she said grinning'

S-hey only I can call her chashmish'she's gunjan meri bestest friend'he said posssessively

Sh- sirf friend ya kuch aur'she said teasingly noticing his expressions'

S-what do you mean ?? he said confused'((dhakkan kahinka..lol..😆😆😆))

Shreya slapped her forehead'..

Sh-oh god sam! Tumhara kya hoga..abhi bhi utne hi dumb ho jitney pehle the'.she said irritated..

S-hey shut up ok? I m smart ok? Apne college ka cool dude hun main..he said proudly..

Sh-cool dude? Huh'anyways leave this!...r u sure ki gunjan tumhari sirf friend hai aur kuch aur nahi'.means ki tumhare life mein wo kitni important hai'..hoping this time he would understand..

S-chashmish meri life mein sabse important hain'.agar wo nahi to kuch bhi nahi..everything is empty and bland without her''.her smile'her eyes..her heart everything is so pure'pure as snow and as precious as gold..she is like a sunshine in a dark world''har time apne liye nahi balki auron ke liye jeeti hai'totally selfless..the most beautiful girl in this world both inside and outside'.he kept on describing her totally lost in his dream world..while shreya was constantly smiling hearing his words''Shreya was sure that this fellow is in love with his best friend but is not realizing this'But samrat was totally unknown of this fact and kept on praising his CHASHMISH'.

Sh-ahem ahem! Shreya said to bring him back to reality'

S-tumhe kya hua'he said checking her forehead'..

Sh-mujhe to kuch nahi par tumhe bohot kuch hua hai'.she said teasingly'

S-mujhe kya hua hai? He said raising his eyebrows..

Sh-tum kitne bade dhakkan ho na'idiot'abhi bhi samajh nahi aaya..Don't worry bohot jald samajh jaoge'.she said winking'.whereas sam was totally confused''

Sh-ab apne dimaag par itna stress mat daalo aur sojao..its late and kal u r taking me to college na?

S-haan haan..ok'get up early tomorrow'.

Sh-good night! And sweet chashmish dreams'she said winking...samrat threw a cushion on her and she ran away laughing'.while samrat just smiled sweetly and blushed too'

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NEXT MORNING- EXCEL COLLEGE

Samya entered college and all boys were drooling over shreya'while girls were plain jealous as she was being the centre of attraction'..shreya was just completely non-interested in all this'wat she wanted was to meet gunjan..she was really very eager to meet her''

Sh-samrat mujhe gunjan se abhi milna hai plzzz'..she pleaded him'.

S-tum itni desperate kyun ho rahi ho use milne ke liye'.he said a little suspicious'..he knew something was surely cooking in her mind'

Sh-who isliye kyunki tum uski kitni praise kar rahe the to I m sure ki who bohot achi hogi'.she said concealing the real purpose'..

S-hmm'achi nahi she's the best'lekin abhi who library mein hogi'

Sh-ok'chalo we will wait for her in the class'..

They walked in the class'...all eyes were on them'..while they were just ignoring it'.they sat on a bench waiting for gunjan '.just then gunjan entered'.as she saw them together she guessed it was shreya about whom the girls were talking yesterday'.

She moved from there and sat on the seat behind them'.sam saw her

S-hey chashmish..just then shreya stood up and saw her'she was really elated to meet her'she went and hugged her tightly'Gunjan was taken aback'..while sam was again getting doubty'..'Shreya broke the hug'

Sh-hey gunjan omg!!!!! I was so excited to meet you..sam tumhare bare mein bohot baat karta hai..i m so glad to meet you'.she said happily'

G-hi'nice to meet you too'..she said smiling''saying this she sat behind''

After the class-

S-chashmish chalo canteen chalte hain'.

G-samrat wo mujhe'

S-ab koi aur excuse nahi'..jab dekho tab koi na koi excuse banate rehti ho'no today..chalo'.he held her hand and dragged her there'.they sat and started chatting and gunjan excused herself and went from there'..

Shreya saw that sam was a bit stressed out'..so she asked him..

Sh-sam kya hua..tum itne pareshaan kyun ho?

S-shreya mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha..aajkal gunjan keeps on avoiding me''humesha koi na koi excuse banakar mujhse dur bhagti rehti hai..and jab puchta hun to she says kuch nahi hua'..and yesterday toh she even lied to me..he told her about yesterday's incident how she lied to him that she's at home'

Shreya herself was confused..the whole time she has been noticing gunjan's odd behavior and she knew what sam was telling was the truth''she was sure that gunjan has some feelings for samrat''she was smart enough to understand this looking at gunjan's jealously and hurt whenever she and sam were close''she just had to unite them''and she had to do this for her friend's happiness'.But first she had to make sam realize his love for gunjan'.she has to think of a plan''

Sh- sam don't worry'.everything's going to be fine'.

S-hope so'he replied sadly'.

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AT NIGHT- SHERGILL MANSION-

Shreya's POV-

Shreya was just thinking about how to unite sajan and most important making sam realize his love for gunjan'..she was totally confused'..i have to reunite them at any cost'..kya karu?

Kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai'.i ll think about this tomorrow'..ab I need some sleep'.with that she went to bed'.

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Samrat's POV-

Yeh chashmish ko pata nahi kya hogaya hai'what's wrong with her..kyun aise behave kar rahi hai?...this hurts me a lot'but wait'why does it hurts me so much??!!...why is it troubling me soo much???!!! Why do I keep thinking about chashmish al the time???!!!!...what is going on with me??!!! Wait! Am I in love??!!...no what am I thinking?!.. you are gone crazy samrat'you need sleep'.Ya by tomorrow you will be fresh'.so just relax and sleep'.

With this he dozed off still thinking about HIS CHASHMISH''

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Gunjan's POV-

Sam aur shreya kitne ache lagte hain saath mein'.just like a perfect couple'.main pata nahi beech mein kaise aa gayi''sam and me were never meant to be together''..still I thought ki sam will love me'how can that happen?

We are so different..i m nowhere around him'..shreya kitni smart aur beautiful hai'sam deserves only and only shreya'.not me''((some tears fall from her eyes but she wiped them))'ab I will stay away from samrat'.main uski khushiyon ke beech nahi aaungi''she closed her eyes and went into a troubled sleep'..

((But the SaJan were not aware what destiny had in stored for them'they were completely unaware of what God was planning for them...Tomorrow was going to be a great turnover in their life'.))

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NEXT MORNING-EXCEL COLLEGE

Samrat was impatiently waiting for gunjan near the gate'.waiting for to arrive'..Shreya saw this and went to him'..

Sh-tumhe kya hua hai? She asked looking at him'

S- I m waiting for chashmish'use ab taka aa jaana chahiye tha'.he said worrying'..

Sh-sam who aati hi hogi..U relax na''she said trying to calm him down which didn't seem to work'

S-shreya she should have arrived 15 mins back and wo nahi aayi hai abhi'you know chashmish never gets late''something is not right shreya..i m telling you..i have a feeling ki something is wrong'he said holding her shoulders in worry'

Sh- sam you relax first'chalo hum abhi chalte hain use dhundne..Ok?...come-on uske ghar chalte hain'

They left the college in search of her'.sam was panicking a lot'..he had a fear of losing chashmish'.he just can't afford that at any cost'..just then shreya noticed something'.people were forming a corner around something..it looked like an accident had occurred'shreya asked sam to stop the car'they went near that and sided people and the scene froze them'.gunjan was lying there covered in blood''she had wounds on her forehead, arm and everywhere''shreya was shocked seeing it'.she moved her head and saw sam who seemed to be lifeless'as if somebody has taken his life away from him'.he wasn't reacting only'..shreya shook him from shoulders'.

Sh-sam jaldi uthao gunjan ko...we need to take her to the hospital'.she said panicking..

Sam quickly picked her up and put her carefully on the back seat'..

He and shreya sat and started driving towards the hospital'..

(('.sam was totally shocked seeing his chashmish like this..Tears were continuously flowing from his eyes..he still couldn't believe what happened a while back..it just seemed a nightmare but actually it wasn't that..he was driving as fast as he could'seeing her lying so lifeless ,it pained him a lot'..he has to save his chasmish at any cost'.he can't live without her'.he JUST can't''he had realized that she meant special to him'really very special'.and he LOVED her..Yes he did LOVE her'''.That time samrat was not sure whether to be happy or sad'Happy as he had realized his love for his CHASHMISH'.and Sad because his CHASMISH was fighting for her life''He was on the edge of losing HER'losing HIS LIFE'He couldn't let this happen''he can't let HIS NEW FOUND LOVE leave him like this''..))

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Shreya's POV-

Oh my God! What is this? A while back I was thinking how to unite them and now gunjan is in this condition'..this is so not RIGHT! How can God do this to them'.I feel so bad for samrat'.I can understand his condition really well''Hope everything gets fine soon'Can't see him like this'.

Please God don't make him suffer more'..Hope gunjan gets fine soon'.

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Shreya was not able to see her friend in a such a vulnerable condition'.he placed a soothing hand on his shoulder''sam glanced at her and started driving even faster''they reached the hospital in less than 15 minutes! Sam quickly got down and took gunjan in his arms and rushed towards the hospital while shreya followed him'samrat went to the reception and asked for a doctor urgently'Even the nurse was shocked seeing gunjan's condition and sam's anger..She went quickly and called a doctor'the ward boys brought the stretcher and sam laid gunjan on that'the ward boys started taking stretcher towards the O.T. while sam accompanied them'.he can't see his chasmish like this''he was completely shaken''all the time shreya tried to calm him down but he didn't pay any heed to it and was just looking at gunjan'.the doctors asked samrat to stay out of the O.T. while they were checking her!...shreya went and completed all the formalities while sa was sitting on the bench with his head in his hands looking really vulnerable'.. she came and sat beside him and kept a hand on his shoulder'.He looked up'.As he saw her he hugged her and started crying badly'..while she tried to calm him down'

S-"shreya I can't see her like that''please use mere paas wapas le aao''I want my chashmish back'.I can't stay without her'..I LOVE HER shreya..I really love her a lot'.I can't see her like that please"...he said crying badly'..

Sh-samrat everything's going to be fine..gunjan ko kuch nahi hoga'.she will be completely fine'..

She said trying to console him''

((..The operation started and sam and shreya both were praying for Gunjan's life'.Finally the operation ended and the doctors came out''Samart rushed to him..))

S-"Doctor gunjan kaisi hai ????!! She is fine na??!! plz kuch to boliye'"he said quickly in a single breath'..

D-"relax relax! Agar aap rukenge tabhi to main bolunga." he said smiling''"she is absolutely fine'..hune operation kardia hai'kaafi serious case tha but now everything is fine'.no need to worry at all'.abhi she is unconscious'..2 hours baad unhe hosh aayega then u can meet her.."..He said and patted samrat's back and went'..

((..sam's happiness knew no bounds'he was really very very happy'he felt like jumping'.he hugged shreya tighty'..))

S-"shreya chasmish bilkul theek hai..suna na tumne..she's fine..i m so happy'".she said smiling widely'.

Sh-I know sam..I m really happy for you'.ab bas tumhe gunjan ko apne dil ki baat batani hai'.she said hugging him back'

S-haan jaise hi usse hosh aayega main use bata dunga ki main use kitna pyaar karta hun'.and then everything will be fine''

Sh- yups I m very happy for you both''.

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AFTER 2 HOURS- GUNJAN'S ROOM

Gunjan slowly opened her eyes'adjusting her eyes to the sudden light in his eyes''.her vision a little blur and then as she opened her eyes fully the first thing she saw was samrat sitting on the seat beside her bed holding her hand and smiling at her''and then she saw shreya standing besides samrat smiling''

G-s-a-m-r-a-t'she said in broken words as she was really not well''

S-shh'chashmish you are not well'you need rest'.tum rest karo..ok? he said concerned''

G-I m f-ine sam-rat'.she said getting up a little..sam helped her up''

Sh-umm'main tumhari medicines laati hun gunjan..ok? take care'.and best of luck samrat'she said winking at him'.Sam smiled at her while gunjan was confused'.she left the room'

G-uhh samrat woh..she started'.only to be interrupted by samrat..

S-shh'.he said putting his finger on her lips''.chasmish mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai'..he started huskily'gunjan's heartbeat started increasing'she felt butterflies in her stomach due to their close proximity and samrat's intimate tone'.yet she composed herself and listened to what he said'.

S-Chashmish main kabhi bhi nahi samajh paaya ki tum mere liye kya ho''ki tum mere liye kitni special ho'.main hamesha se har roz har pal apni dream girl ko dhoondta tha'maine har jagah use dhoonda lekin kabhi bhi apne dil mein nahi dekha..kabhi bhi apnea as paas nahi dekha'.main itna blind kaise ho gaya mujhe bhi nahi pata''is cool-dude flirt samrat ke peeche bhi ek insane hai jo apni dream girl ke liye wait karta raha'..mian kin kin ladkiyon ko date nahi kia'par yeh nahi samajh paaya ki meri best friend hi meri dream girl hai'.nahi samajh paaya ki TUM hi meri dream girl ho'..ki main tumse PYAAR karta hun'..(( gunjan was totally shocked'..seeing her expression samrat continued))'.haan chashmish I LOVE YOU..I really LOVE YOU A LOT'..and I can't LIVE WITHOUT YOU!!!!!...((gunjan was just speechless'she never thought that one day THE SAMRAT will confess his love to her'))

S-"lekin agar tum mere liye yeh feel nahi karti to main tumhari life se hamesha ke liye chala jaunga'tumhe kabhi force nahi karunga'..it's your decision completely'.if you don't love me I swear I ll leave from your life forever and kabhi wapas nahi aaunga'.." he said in tears'.and stood up to go'just then gunjan stopped him by holding his hand'.

G-mujhe apne saath lekar nahi jaoge?? She spoke in an innocent tone'..

(( sam was totally shocked and surprised'.he turned around and found her smiling'..he went forward and she hugged him and he hugged her back too..))

G-yes I love you too samrat'aaje se nahi bohot pehle se..i really love you a lot..please don't ever leave me alone..please..I love you''''.

((both kept hugging each other tightly'embracing each other in their arms..feeling contented''and blissful'.sam broke the hug after a long time and kissed her cheek while she simply blushed''.he smiled seeing his blushing girlfriend..and hugged her again..))

Hope it wasn't boring'''please drop your comments and silent reader press the like tab'.and criticism is welcomed..feel free to criticize''.this os was for my best friend on i-f- SHREYA'.

HAPPY BDAY SHREYA IN ADVANCE''🥳😳😳😳''Hope you have fun and may this day be the most beautiful day of your life'''

Love😳

Ambika😳😳😳😛

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excellent yaar...who said u r a pathetic writer...par excellence!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome os. Loved it. Don't feel that u r a pathetic writer! U r an excellent writer. Do write more. Thanks for pm

waooo
amazinggg,awsm one dear.
totalyy outstandinggg.
luvlyyy...
luv u
vritika

Hey bandariya 🤣

finally i am commenting huh
so please ab kuch mat kehna haha

nw talking abt the update
hmmm it was ok ok haha
naah nt ok ok bt gud gud
hmm naah nt gud gud
bt fabulous really
it was too gud

the lines in the starting were fab
kaha se churai huh? Hahaha
well if u have nt copied them
then feelings n knwledge abt love in ur pov is excellent
mst say u r experienced in all these matters hahaha chupi rustam

bt really the cncept was too good
last part was smethng i knew
as u told
toh already guessed it
bt very beautifully written
hats off

n nw cming to shreya
hey shreya happy birthday
may god bless u loads n loads of happiness n success
keep smiling always
oops i frget happy bday in advance
love
surabhi

Waooo

Amazingg OS ambi...
U r such a sweetheart yaar... ur frnzz r soo lucky to hav u with them!!
U always make their day soo special with ur beautiful, romantic OS.!
They might b feeling really thankful for havin u in their life...
well Happy Birthday Shreya...
Wishin u a long life ahead... all d best dear...