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Posted: 14 years ago

Hiii guys well I ll b writing an os..actually this scene is 4m other serial where a girl gets injured and the boy(whose actually a vampire leaves the place due 2 some reasons)well I actually imagined monaya..and soo decided to write an os on it..plz give in ur reviews'

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Gunjan gets a chit that samrat is waiting for her outside and desperate to meet him she goes out..and calls out his name bt he is nowhere to b found..in the corner there is a car which is waiting ffor her 2 move so that he can kill her coz of her he lost her so called LOVE'actually this guy is a womaniiser who made a girl pregnant n then made her scared that if she reveals the truth she wont live anymore..bt due to gunjan n her friend he gets exposed leaving his fioncee n family shocked n his fioncee also walks out on him'

And so he gets flashbacks n wants to back full advantage as samrat is nt there to protect her..and soo he drives the car in full speed and then injures gunjan who is now battling b/w life n death..samrat is unaware bt gets a sensation that everything is not well and soo dying to meet gunjan..he leaves every1..bt will the world care abt his feeling?

Will his fake parents allow him to leave that safe place n go somewhere else where dangers r surrounding them from all sides?

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Howz it?plz comment

m waitin..

love

palak

Edited by mohit_rockstar - 14 years ago
aashizin thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey palak its wonderful concept can't wait to read this i think u should make FF for this concept it will be treat for us to read and if not possible for FF then can't wait for this OS and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beauitful Palak..
Awesome concept..
Can't wait to read ur OS..
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Posted: 14 years ago
palak this is an awsome concept its really very amazing u should extend it mroe then an os that will be amazing
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved d concept.........but plz name it yaar............
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey palak aweosmeee concept loved it i think u should make a ff would luv to read do contineu soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
palak plllllllllllllllllllllllllz cont soon
i love to read this for monaya dooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
cont sooooooooooon
awesome concpt yara😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was nice....n its rockingggg!! the concept is familiar to me....😉..hehehe anyways..plz continue asappp
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome u know what i watch that serial reguraly after mjht this is my favourite serial.its amazing to imagine our monaya in that charectors.can't wait for your os.but i love read this as ff.if u have any concept in your mind write it as ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
waooooo waoooooooooooo palakkkkkkkkkkkkk sabse pehle ek huggggggggg🤗................ ur cncptttttttttttttttttttt ws totalllyyyyy differnt babyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy...............
superb yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
abbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb jldiii updttttttttttt krde os yaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr ,,,w8 nii hooo rhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.👏
luv uuuuuuuu
vritika👏

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