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mindblowing os....loved it...u did a brilliant job writing it

outstanding yaar...........

Oh palak i luv u swty.
ur a sW*Hrt dear,luv d os.
it ws superb,awsm ,fantastic.
it ws totaly totaly different baby.
it ws out of dis world.
today ur os shws dat luv has no boundaries.
amazing yar,it ws out of dis wrld.
u rck jaan.
plz plz do write mre os swty.
luv u
vritika

awesomeeee os yaar loved it it was beautiful do write more

cant believe it

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

Hey Dear Palak OMG!! Wow!! what an Awesome n beautifull Story ....just superb Os dear👏...Very well written Os , Amazing and Excellent Dialogues👍🏼👏......the story is rocking .......Everything from Hospital scene to Samrat coming to save n help his love Gunjan 2 Saving her from his fake parents to Gunjan wanting 2 be with samrat and loving him so much that even after finding out he is a vampire She still loves him and wants to spend her whole life with him Each n everything in Your Os was Fantastic...👏...even the End or should I say Beginning of Sajans new life in another world everything was Just Superb👏👏...................Mindblowing piece of Work Palak .............👏👏

Thanks 4 Pm 🤗and Dear u r a very good writer👍🏼 So plss Do write More SS n OS PALAK😊....................

And Dear one more thing If u donot mind In UR THIS OS U have By Mistake in Many PLACES written the Character name As MOHIT when it should have been SAMRAT....Beginning mein Gunjan part mein Mohit mentioned many times....HERE is One place ----------------------------
"scene shifts to hospital where gunjan is left alone in the icu and seeing the machines she gets scared..and asks how did this happen?and her head starts aching..n then she gets flashbacks as to how she was finding MOHIT"......plss do change it 2 Samrat...😊..I hope U didnt mind me pointing this out 2 U Dear............

AND dear Do write more Os n Ss n plss Pm me whenever u write another New SS or Os......And one more thing palak the song Selection for ur os is Superb👏..Takatey rehtey tujh sanj savery is a lovely song ..👏..I Even imagined Sajan in this song while reading ur Os and I am sure Sajan would have looked Droolable in this Song 😍...they would have looked lovely👏....................once again Fabulous and Superb Os ..............👏👏..........

Love Gunjan😊..........

awesome os totally loved it

it was awesome... :)

wow palak

Amazing work and Awesome OS👏 👏It was Lovely ⭐️Keep writing more😊