Memories In the Making-The Sharmas(MN)Link p.149

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#681

res..

no problem sweet! take ur time!🤗

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awwwwww...ish that was so lovely, these small MAYUR moments are to cherish forever, the beginning part was nupur getting irritated was so lovely..😆, weight problem was also great! 😆

but the bets part was nupur blurting about her being dying, a sensitive person like mayank would surely be hurt, it was an amazing thing his! i loved that the most.

wow! mayank's birthday! wow! looking forward..and all the best!

🤗

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

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Posted: 14 years ago

#682

res res res..😉😳

n phir sorry..😳 its k we allll can wait!!🤗

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ok i finally read it....n omg m totally mesmerised n spellbounded by ur update....😍😍😍😍......how much evr i thank u fr this ff its less...😛😳.....u write fantastically well....n everytym create the same effect on me...😃😳u wrote it in 1 day??wow!!n dnt wrry it turned out to b awesome!!😳(well as usual!)

ok now d update....gosh....it was just perfct! i had only thought these things on mn.....cvz nvr cared to show all this lil lil thngs which matter alot!!😍😳....awwww....these two are super adorable n cute!!....ryt frm d startin till d end....everythng was just perfct!!

mayank teasing nupz....aww..n njoyin seeing her cute frown n pout....awww....this is typical mayu! n then d talk they hav n he agn teases her...awww...i loved it...😃

then the typical nupz thng...abt she wrryin of gettin fat..😆..awww.....n the way he agn handles her..aww....then i loved the care he showz n all...n the last part whr she thinks abt celebratin his bday..aww....m super excited fr that update now!!😍😍😳

n its k...u update after 2 weeks....no issues at all...n plz no more sorries!!😳 😳

n yea d death thng that nupz says n mayu gets upset...wow akka....u make the update so spl wid small small thngs....i guess this makes it so realistically mnish n wonderful to read...👏😳

k m done wid my thesis😆 n u like it so i comment so big..😃😳

i loved ur this update also n can say till n times ki i just adore d way u write n love this ff!!

just fab!👏😳 lots n lots of kudos fr this!😃

b bck as per ur convinience..😳 😃tc!! love u loadzz...🤗

keep smiling:)

Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago

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vasantha

@VasuKaShlicious

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Posted: 14 years ago

#683

biggggg res 😃 😃

edited....

sry for the delay..... as i just came to cyberspace today ....i dont want to commnt thru my mobile ...so waited for this day!!!!

kya bolu ishu....its amazing part...and i always say...u make me feel mayur are with us...there's story not yet ended ...and it never ends...

the first prt is utterly cutteee.....the wy nupur wants his attention and he intentionally teasing her ..and then the small fight and he pulls her into his embrace.... awww...i so mis mayur for this small actions!!!! they are BESTEST in these..

he was asking his pic.....i know she wants a boy like him ...but i would lve to have a boy with nupur's features and characters and a gal with mayank's characters and dimples.... 😳 😳

haha ...that washroom scene was soo cutteee....her expressions when she get to know she increased 6 pounda in two months.....lols its NUPUR!!!! and the wayhe made her understand ...and that mjht dialogue...main tab bhi tumse itna hi pyaar karungi jab teri baal safed ho jaayegi aur daanth nahi hogi.....awww!!!! 😍

and on monday.....he had to go to college and he doesnt want to leave her alone ..... i wonder always do i get such guy like mayank/arjun who cares me so much!!!!! he is truly a SUPER SWEETHEART or more than that ..... 😃 have no words!!!

when he is back...seeing her in such position and his fear is so visible!!! and that small fight and nupur's unintentional words pierced him...such is his heart!! he never expresses it ...but deep inside he is afraid of losing his loved ones specailly nupur!!!! and the hug they share..... 😍😍 i always cried when mayank cried and ishu!!! even this time u made me cry!!! mayank made me cry!! 😊

mayapari!! first MN gift!!!! never expected such one from mayank ...but truly mayank knows how to surprise his love!!!! 😳 😃

wow...reunion party and mayank's birthday.....

cant wait...ishu...take ur own time and ll be waiting for ur next update....... 😃😃

love ya loadssssss 🤗🤗

vasu!! teri shaitaani!!! 😆

Edited by VasanthaArTi - 14 years ago

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#684

when r u gonna update the next part ishita??i m getting restless...😳

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ruexangel

@ruexangel

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#685

I'm getting so restless too! update pleaseeee

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vasantha

@VasuKaShlicious

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Posted: 14 years ago

#686

Originally posted by: Ishita16
Res

Sorry guys for not updating for so long. I've been busy with midterm exams and all. I'll be updating this weekend though. 😊

ishu.. u love the word sry na! :rolleyes:

take ur own time sweets!

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jiya

@--jiya--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#687

take ur time🤗

*edited*

wow....😍

everything is so perfect😍

and Nupur is planning a surprise for Mayank's B'Day🥳

i can't wait for that moment😳😍

thnx for the pm🤗

do continue soon😃

Edited by jiya_angel - 14 years ago

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Sumz

@.MayAngels.

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#688

Hi, Ishita

This is just superb, i love that you have continued on MN's journey and its even better than the ones CV gave us. Their little moments, memories, nok jhoks, you have taken care of everything here. And the preganancy of Nupur and mayank taking care of her is super sweet and something i always wanted to see in MJHT but never saw it! but glad to read it through your words.

the best i loved in this story was mayanks diary enteries, they were painful to read but the emotion and grace you brought into them was wonderful.

Do pm me.