Memories In the Making-The Sharmas(MN)Link p.149

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#481

😊wow thanks for this ff

i feel like i m actually watching mayur performing these scenes

such a beautiful update

please do continues soon 😊

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#482

Mind blowing, Awesome Part ishita...

wonderful piece of writing...

loved ur comblnation of past and present..

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#483

god u made me cry.....lash..it was out of ths world..the dairy n bauji moments ahhh.. i soo loved it...

everything was so perfect .....

excellent work

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Nithya

@tellycrazy

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#484

Oh dear, you moved me to tears with this update😊 Mayank's greif, Bauji- Mayank reconciliation, Gunjan's grief and everything else was portrayed wonderfully in this update👏 Keep it up Ishi!😃

You were right! Reading about the funeral rites from a third person POV was much better than Mayank himself narrating it. Actually I liked that part the most than the actual diary entries probably because those areas encompassed the emotions of others and not just Mayank😊 When they performed the barsi in the show after the leap, Arjun's expressions were heart wrenching and so much like an aggreived husband but your Mayank, I think, excelled in it than Arjun😃 It was not enough for me to imagine Arjun during the funeral scene, as the emotions that you were portraying were quite beyond that realm, and I think you conveyed it pretty well too.👏Just loved the whole funeral scene and the reconciliation that followed.

It really made sense the way you made Bauji relate to Mayank during the funeral. I sincerely wish that they had more of Bauji-Mayank scenes in the show especially after Nupur's death. That would have made the show watchable to some loyal fans who stuck with it even after the season 1 ended. Alas, that was again one of the tracks left incomplete in MJHT! Instead they had those irritating Riya-Mayank scenes and constant flashbacks of Nupur. Your FF is in a way a wish fulfilled for every Mayurian as we get to read about all these wonderful moments😃

You ended with an absolutely sweet moment there😳 I could simply feel Mayank's pain when Nupur mentioned about that 3 years. Both of them deserve all the happiness after the suffering of those horrible 3 years😊 And that we leave it to you 😆

BTW, what was Bauji doing in Dubai?😉 I thought he was in Morena yaar😆 Was Nupur's marriage that disagreeable to him that he had to go out of the country?😆 Do continue soon and sorry for not replying to your PM. Was busy with some things:)

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katherine123

@katherine123

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#485

hey; well thought story.......!nyc one...

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#486

Ishita.. that was just so emotional and beautifully written..

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#487

Wao so beautifull update

Really these are those scenes which we wished ti see in the show but hay

Really feel the pain of Mayank

thank U so much for Pm and cont soon

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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: varsh-mayur
hey ishita really loved it this is my 101th post i thought i'll reserve it for my ff but ur update made me reply...got tears in my eyes........although mayur are fictious characters they live in our hearts ya...so well written..loved it😊

Thank you! 😊I'm really honoured😳...sorry I made u cry though.

They do have made a special place in all our hearts. Glad u loved it. 😃