Memories In the Making-The Sharmas(MN)Link p.149 - Page 21

Originally posted by: kirti123

amazing part

loving mayank more

loved the part

hee hee uday always the kabab me haddi

milk scene was cute

wtg for the next continue soon😊

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

lovely update...........

Originally posted by: cutiepie12

oh sweety it ws sooo besutiful.....i told u before m gona love it all n it happened......

da most cute n beautiful part dis ws

jeep updating more parts lyk dis soon

loved it alot

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

nice update.

again Uday, the altime kabab me haddi for Mayur.

phone convo was nice........i loved it.

update soon.

thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

really nice part the morning talk...sami n uday

evrythng is soooo perfect

lovely

Originally posted by: pritta

nice update dear..
do cont soon..:)

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Wao lovely part

I love kabab ma haddi Uday so much

Sajan part was also cute

and Mayur rocks again

Thanks for pm and cont soon

Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal

heya!..... jst went through all the parts of the ff..... its a brilliant idea to continue the story...... jst loved all the parts!!...... do pm me when u update, coz i tend to loose track of it!.....:)

Originally posted by: sumonetolub

awwww this was very cute.....i wished in the end they showed mayank more like this haha...but his saduness took over instead....i liked all of it and our innocent dodo once again found a way to interrupt the romance....hes such a sweet character that you cant even get mad at him haha.....well mayank does....but wow so bauji knows about nupurs pregnancy and hes asking about mayank......i hope to see nice scenes between bauji and mayur.....though i hope you somehow compensate for the fact that bauji went missing during the dhruv fiasco.....naina

Originally posted by: ruexangel

i loveeee this story sooo much....just a mayurians dream!!

awesome, pleaseee continue soon!

and oh i like all your dialogues, especially in this one hehe 😳

I was kind of thinking about changing those dialogues but then I pictured Mayur saying that (Mayank teasing and Nupur blushing - Date anniversary end bit) and decided to go with it.