Kaash Aisa Hota!!! A SaJan SS-Part 3, Pg. 16 - Page 7

Originally posted by: ayesha_80

Ms. Kavya...atleast say something about us both 😆😆

Aww!!! U know this ladki Ashu very well....don't u??!! 😉 So, the essay had to be there. BTW...have added a few more lines in my intro...so, the essay is getting bigger n bigger. Now, wat say??!! 😆😆

😲😲😲 Partner...why do u hate our posts...and batao na...why do u read them??!! *innocent face* 😆😆😆

Awww!!! Take ur time, sweety. Hope you like this SS.

Have a great week!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: Anu_sajan4ever

omgggggggggggggg thnx u thnx u so so much diya n ayesha for dis concept i always wanted someone to write ff or ss on dios concept only i wanted sajan intense n like u said in ss concept seriosly n u guys make my wish came true awesomeeeeeeee anyways gosh u gals r superb writers man wat a starting loveeee how u showed da feelings of both sajan wen dey were so close to each other n all hayeee n den loveeee how dey were almost kissing bt ugh dat phone lol anyways n den loveee der talk man so emotional n intense talk gosh lovee da way u wrote all emotions of sajan talk n den hehehe sammy is back wid mischevious i mean wen he was going closer n closer n gunji was all blusing n her heartbeating increasing n all lol n kya nikla he was taking da towel hehe loveeee dat scene awesome standing ovation to u both man do continue soon now

Originally posted by: aa123.80

LOL... Finally read this !!!
Firstly, thanks Ashu, for writing an SS. I've always LOVED your One Shots, this SS was no different! I LOVED it.

Reading this makes me realise what could have been, but wasn't. This was the way it should have gone. The guilt, awkwardness, relief, comfort, all emotions were portrayed really well.

I wanted Sam to say this on the show:
"Chashmish, agey ka abhi kuch socha hi nahin hai. Sach pocho toh ab agey ke barey mein sochney se bhi darr lagta hai. Waise bhi, thak gya hun khud se bhagtey bhagtey. In teen saalon mein sab kuch jaise bikhar gya ho. Ab thodi der ruk ker araam kerna chahta hun. In bikhrey huey tukdon ko sametna chahta hun. Kuch waqt apney saath, apney liye guzarna chahta hun. Uskey baad agey ke barey mein bhi soch lein ge".



Cause this line shows his relief, his feeling of finally getting rid of the burden of guilt. Shows his desire to just stop with everything and finally think about himself, cause these three years, he forgot to LIVE. Unfortunately, it didn't happen on the show.

Again, Gunjan's guilt of having pushed him away, her concern for him.Understanding the role of destiny...... Everything was awesome........

Oh! And I loved the title- "Kaash aisa hota......"😆😆

Originally posted by: meerrii

it was awseomeee plzz pm me nxt part its great want this track really thanks for postingg thankss

hi ayesha....

Originally posted by: kavya.b

i've read it, i've read it *dances in joy*

i jus loved reading it (see, i told u...i like reading fiction)

kaash, kaash aisa hota.....

every word is jus awesome.....that vivaah scene toh totally blasted me, read with fullllll tension n excitement

n the 1st scene, it had been their dream since 3 yrs, since the day they realized their love, every mrng when they wake, they want to see the other's face first ....it's truly their deam, which didn't take shape into reality in all these yrs, n 2day due to kumbakarna's sleep, it has turned to reality for atleast one day

u know what's my fav in this SS,??? gunjan's regret, i've been dying to see that since ages n now left hope n stopped watching the show as well

Thanks for this SS EQs.....keep writing!!!! (nooo, dont keep writing!!!!)

Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

hey dear nice SS!!!

plz add me to ur pm list:)

plz cont soon

Originally posted by: lovedkruti

Wow ayesha glas m a regular here now...i know wat i missed in the past 2 years but luved it yaar...kaash aaisa hi hota..looking forward to more nd more intensity...
u have totally represented our SG and m sure u will continue to do so....😃