Kaash Aisa Hota!!! A SaJan SS-Part 3, Pg. 16

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SoniRita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

omgggggggggggggg thnx u thnx u so so much diya n ayesha for dis concept i always wanted someone to write ff or ss on dios concept only i wanted sajan intense n like u said in ss concept seriosly n u guys make my wish came true awesomeeeeeeee anyways gosh u gals r superb writers man wat a starting loveeee how u showed da feelings of both sajan wen dey were so close to each other n all hayeee n den loveeee how dey were almost kissing bt ugh dat phone lol anyways n den loveee der talk man so emotional n intense talk gosh lovee da way u wrote all emotions of sajan talk n den hehehe sammy is back wid mischevious i mean wen he was going closer n closer n gunji was all blusing n her heartbeating increasing n all lol n kya nikla he was taking da towel hehe loveeee dat scene awesome standing ovation to u both man do continue soon now

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aa123.80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

LOL... Finally read this !!!
Firstly, thanks Ashu, for writing an SS. I've always LOVED your One Shots, this SS was no different! I LOVED it.

Reading this makes me realise what could have been, but wasn't. This was the way it should have gone. The guilt, awkwardness, relief, comfort, all emotions were portrayed really well.

I wanted Sam to say this on the show:
"Chashmish, agey ka abhi kuch socha hi nahin hai. Sach pocho toh ab agey ke barey mein sochney se bhi darr lagta hai. Waise bhi, thak gya hun khud se bhagtey bhagtey. In teen saalon mein sab kuch jaise bikhar gya ho. Ab thodi der ruk ker araam kerna chahta hun. In bikhrey huey tukdon ko sametna chahta hun. Kuch waqt apney saath, apney liye guzarna chahta hun. Uskey baad agey ke barey mein bhi soch lein ge".

Cause this line shows his relief, his feeling of finally getting rid of the burden of guilt. Shows his desire to just stop with everything and finally think about himself, cause these three years, he forgot to LIVE. Unfortunately, it didn't happen on the show.

Again, Gunjan's guilt of having pushed him away, her concern for him.Understanding the role of destiny...... Everything was awesome........

Oh! And I loved the title- "Kaash aisa hota......"😆😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

it was awseomeee plzz pm me nxt part its great want this track really thanks for postingg thankss

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kavya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

i've read it, i've read it *dances in joy*

i jus loved reading it (see, i told u...i like reading fiction)

kaash, kaash aisa hota.....

every word is jus awesome.....that vivaah scene toh totally blasted me, read with fullllll tension n excitement

n the 1st scene, it had been their dream since 3 yrs, since the day they realized their love, every mrng when they wake, they want to see the other's face first ....it's truly their deam, which didn't take shape into reality in all these yrs, n 2day due to kumbakarna's sleep, it has turned to reality for atleast one day

u know what's my fav in this SS,??? gunjan's regret, i've been dying to see that since ages n now left hope n stopped watching the show as well

Thanks for this SS EQs.....keep writing!!!! (nooo, dont keep writing!!!!)

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: sajanroxx20
Wonderful SS Ashu and Diya🤗🤗 Its beautiful, i could really imagine it all, and kaash aisa hota😔 Perfect title😉😆 Thanks for the pm🤗 And pleasee cont soon, i'm waiting eagerly!!

Thanks a lot, dear for ur sweet comments. Glad that you liked the update, and also the title 😳

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi
hey nice chap😊

Thank you 😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: roknstarz_mjht
wow............do pm me....................

Thanks!!! Will surely PM you the next updates 😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: marisol45
really liking this version of the story
samrat and gunjans feelings post nupurs return were completely unexplored in the show

hence i absolutely loved what you wrote

wish we got to see such scenes...

do continue as soon as possible

and thanx a lot for the pm!

I completely agree with you, Mari!!! After the exit of Dhruv...there wasn't any mention of the broken linkages between S, G, M and N...which according to us, were and are very essential to be dealt with. Lets see how the CVs have planned this whole thing.

And, thanks a lot for reading and liking the update. 😊

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ayesha_80

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: zobsheh
Mind blowing SS....how i wish it could have been like this in the show as well and not in a funny manner....but i really hope our Sajan come back with their confrontation of what Samrat wants from life....thanks for the pm and please continue soon😊

Ahhh!!! Like you, We ALL want this comedy to end...and after yest's epi...things do seem to be coming back on the track. Hope they don't take a u-turn back. We have already had enough of the funny scenes, which weren't even funny!!!

Glad that you liked our SS. Thanks a lot for reading and for ur sweet comments 😊