New mayur ff : Do you realize? part 15 pg.25 - Page 5

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Oh my GOd my heart beats geating faster.Plz update soon.

hey just today forst time i read all ur updates.n all r gr8 ........full of suspence.

m realy liking ur ff..............plz update soon

Hi guys i am sorry for the late update. This part is a little bit controversial after this part you might not like it. Please tell if i should continue it or not.

Part 7

Nups mom handed the ring to nupur, while nupur starerd at it. Then bam the entrance door of the hall opened. Nupur's eyes shot at the door in an instant a smile forming on her lips, Only to feel more pain it was samrat. Nupur could tell from her Jij's face that he didn't know here Mayank was either this was it. Nupur felt Rohans hand holding her hand to put the ring on her finger. Nupur was shaking really bad she was on the verge of crying. Piya and Suhani saw nupurs body trembling they held her shoulder to giver support. To nupurs luck no had seen this. Finally Rohan put the ring on nups finger. While nupur was just staring at her hand. Nups mom: "Nupur beta Rohan ko ring pehanao". Nupur looked at her mom. While Nup's dad gave her and her mom a hard look. Finally nupur's mom took nups hand and nupur putted the ring on Rohan's hand.

Scene shifts to Mayank

Mayank was sitting at a beach on a rock, throwing little pebbles into the ocean. Tears were rolling down his eyes. He completely knew that by nupur was engaged. Now she belonged to someone else. Mayank : "I sorry nupur maine tumhara bharosa toda hai. Likin main kya karta Nupur main tumhari yeh engagement nahi tod sakta tha nupur. I am really sorry". Just then he felt a hand on his shoulder he turned to look behind it was nupur she came in front and cleaned Mayank's tears with her thumb she gave him a kiss on the cheek and then quietly settled into Mayank's arms. Nups: "I love you Mayank hum kabhi alag nahi honge henna". Mayank: "haan nupur I love you too". Mayank was about to kiss Nupur's forhead when she was gone. Mayank realized that nupur was only his imagination. He was alone. Mayank: "I love you nupur and always will".

Scene shifts to Nupur

Nupur was in room crying her heart out while her friends and Gun and Sam were standing outside her room trying to tell her to unlock the door. Gun: "nups please darwaza kholo". No response finally samrat banged the door. Sam: " Nupur pls darwaza kholo agar tumne do minute main darwaza nahi khola toh main tumse kabhi baat nahi karunga, aur samjunga that I was never a good friend to you. Finally the felt the door unlock. Nupur opened the door, Gun, Sam, Piya , Suhani entered the room they were shocked looking at nupur. She looked so weak from the all crying that Sam pulled nupur and made her sit down on the bed. Gun: "nups tu pagal hogayi hai yeh kya kar rahi hai rona is problem ka solution nahi hai". Nups: (crying) "toh kya karo main di meri engagement hogayi hai kissi aur se sirf ek faisla main apni life ka khud lena chahti lekin woh bhi mere liye kissi aur ne le liya". Sam: "nupur tum is tarah himmat nahi haar sakti hum sab tumhare saath hain". Nups: "please jij mujhe ab jhuti umid dena band kardo". Piya: "mujhe toh yeh samaj nahi aata ki yeh Mayank gaya kahan aisa kaunsa important kaam agaya ki woh yahan nahi aa paya". Suhani pinches Piya whispering her not mention Mayank as it will hurt nupur more. Nupur then see Gun packing few of nups clothes in a bag. Nups: "di aap yeh kya kar rahi hain". Sam: "chalo Nupur". Getting her up holding by her shoulder. Nups: "kahan". Gun: "tum aaj raat hamare saath rahogi mujhe tumpe bilkul bhi bharosa nahi hai". Nups: "sahi waise bhi aajkal kissi pe bhi bharosa karna nahi chahiye". Sam: "nups stop it please ab chalo yahan se main massi se (refereeing to nups mom) already baat kar chukka hun".

The sound of doorbell woke Samrat up from the sofa he was sleeping on. While in his room Gun was trying to make nupur relax and sleep. Samarat opened the door half asleep finding Mayank at the door samrat became full awake. Sam looked at the clock on the wall behind him it was 1: 00 o clock. Sam: "Mayank dude tu yahan kya kar raha hai is waqt , aur aaj tu engagement pe kyun nahi aaya after all terei girlfriend ki engagement thi". Sam was really pissed at Mayank and was taunting him. Mayank : "sam atleast andar bula ke meri ek baar baat to sun le". Sam let Mayank in. Mayank: "sam nupur kahan hai mujhe usse baat karni hai". Sam: "Mayank yeh sahi time nahi kaafi khoshish ke baad nupur thodi relaxed hui hai tumhe dekheke woh kaise react karegi". Before Sam could finish the door to gun and sam room opened Nupur walked out gun right behing her. Nups walked up to Mayank and Bam she slaped Mayank out of anger, frustration, sadness, believing his lies. Mayank didn't say anything but Sam and Gun were shocked. Then nupur did another suprising thing she hugged Mayank and started crying. Nups: "kyun Mayank akhir kyun kara tumne mere saath aisa……… tumne hi toh mujhe apne pyar pe bharosa karna sikaya aur khud hi…………mera bharosa tod diya….. Kyun Mayank….Kyun?" . Nupur fell on her knees crying her hands covering her face. Mayank also bent down on his knees he was upset too, he never wanted this but it was the circumstances. Mayank took nupurs face in his hands. Mayank: "shshhhh please Nupur Don't cry meri majboori thi Nupur, isliye main yeh engagement nahi tod paya". Just as Mayank mentioned engagement nupur came back to her senses she got up from her knees anger overtaking her once again. Nups: "kya majboori Mayank aisi kya problem thi ki tum nahi aa paya". Mayank: "kyunki main chahata tha ki yeh engagement ho jaye". Sam, Gun, Nups were shocked. Sam: "Mayank dude tum yeh kya keh rahe ho". Mayank: "haan yehi sach hai main chahata tha ki Rahul aur Nupur ki sagai hojaye". Gun: "kyun". Anger building up in Gunjan as it was the matter of her sister. Nupur was too shocked to say anything she was holding Gunjan's arm to hold herself up. Mayank: "kyunki Rahul mera bhai hai".

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hey riya..
part 7 ws really heartbreakin...😒
cant c my MN lyk dis!😭

but 1 doubt.. nups fiance Rahul hai ki Rohan?😕
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O my God what a twist hila ka rakh dia .But plz mayur ko zada sad mat rakhna jaldi se un ka sath kuch happy kao na plz.

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