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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
very nice update plz cont soona and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Great update! I just loved the way SaYank and GunUr were talking... Samrat's dream girl ke sapne... Gunjan's logical and straightforward outlook.. You're awesome in writing! 🤗
Update soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
very nice and sweet update!
continue soon....
thanks for the pm!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
very nice yaar👍🏼 do update soon i want to know what will happen next 😃plzz han and thank u for ur pm love u take care😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
really very nice talk
do cont sooonnnnnnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
awsome update
sajan and mayur are so oppisit from each other
but then again oppisit attreck right😉
loved the update
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
awwww...cuteeee...loved every bit of it..👏

btw why dont u PM me?.😕

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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
loved all ur updates ...gunur entry was jhakkas...awesome yaar ...too good
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART - 6

thanks all for appreciating and motivating to share more...........😊

wen gunur comeback to home in the evening , they find shashi bhushan & ratna ( bui ) discussing something very seriously . nupur enters in a playful mood but sees that gunjan have noticed that nupur's bauji were very serious & tell her to calm down.

nupur : kya hua gunjan tu itna ghabra kyun rahi hai , maine tujhe kitni baar kaha hai mere hote hue tujhe ghabrane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.......

SHASHI BUSHAN SEES THEM AND CALL THEM

sb : aao beta hum tumhara hi intezar kar rahe the .
nupur : kya hua bauji ? ( a little concerned )
sb : kuch nahi beta , humne socha hai ki , tum dono ki aage ki padai ke liye hum tumhe mumbai bhej denge .
nupur : MUMBAI !!!!!!! 👏
gunjan : MUMBAI !😲 ( shocked)
sb : ( holding gunjan's face ) beta tumne muje apna bauji mana hai na?
gunjan : ji bauji , peechle saal bauji ke guzar jane ke baad ........😭
sb : ( wiping gunjan's tears ) to bas , maine apni bachiyon ke liye sabse sahi faisla liya hai ....
bui : par shashi akele ladkiyon ko itne bade shehar mein..
sb : nahi didi , maine bahut soch samajh kar faisla liya hai , woh shehar mere sanskaro se bada nahi hai , aur ye nupur ke chacha ke saath rahengi .....
nupur : thank u bauji , hum kab ja rahe hai !!!!!!!!!!!😊👏
sb : do din baad .......
nupur : itni jaldi , pata hai mujhe kitani tayari karni hai , saamaan bhi kharidna hai , aur tailor se .........
sb : bas ! bas ! beta ab saans bhi lo aur apni packing karo ........

GUNUR TOGETHER : ji bauji !!!!!!!!!
TWO DAYS LATER GUNUR KEEPS THEIR FOOT DOWN FROM THEIR TRAIN IN MUMBAI , NUPUR TAKES A DEEP BREATH ..................

nupur : sapno ki nagri mein sawagat hai nupur bhushan...........
gunjan : ( looking out the whole place ) sab theek to ........
nupur : haan baba sab theek hi hoga ab chale ........
gunjan : bauji hume chodne kyun nahi aaye ?
nupur : woh dhood ki bottle ghar par bhool gaye the na isliye ....... uf ! ho ! gunjan , bauji bhi jante hai ke hum bache nahi hai aur main bahut baar chachaji ke ghar aa chuki hoon..........

STANDING ON THE BEACH

gunjan : pata nahi mujhe darr kyun lag raha hai ........
nupur : arey ! hawa bhi tere baal uda de to tujhe darr lagat hai ........
gunjan : mujhe is badlav se darr lag raha hai , pata nahi yahaan zindagi kya mod legi .......?
nupur : by god ! gunjan teri gol gol batein , tu sedhe sedhe baat kyun nahi karti ...?😕

THE WAVES TOUCH THEIR FEET AND GUNUR ENJOY THE FEELING OF THE WATER TOUCHING THEIR FEET AND SAND MOVING BELOW THEIR FEET

nupur : khair jaane de is pal ka mazaa le , kyunki is naye shehar mein zindagi dil khol ke aur bahein faila ke humara intezaar kar rahi hai..........

AFTER SOME PLAYFUL TIME AT THE BEACH

GUNJAN'S THOUGHTS : kyun yahan mujhe itna darr lag raha hai ? kya ye apni pechlee zindagi ko chod kar nayi shuruaat karne ka koi ishara hai ? kya ye shehar vakai meri zindagi badal dega ?

GUNJAN CLOSES HER EYES & NUPUR OPENS HER EYES

NUPUR'S THOUGHTS : teri zindagi badalne wali hai nupur , yahan ki hawain bhi yahi paigaam layi hai ki ab darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai ..............

A COOL BREEZE BLOWS & WE SEE GUNUR SITTING ON ROCKS WITH THEIR EYES CLOSED ,HAIR BLOWING & SMILING ...............😊

😊do comment 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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VERY NICE PART DEAR PLZ CONT SOON and thx alot for the pm

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