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in past few days i have read many new versions of my fav show, i even liked few ..............😊
some were good & some were terrific & my mjht buddies r so talented that they inspired me tooo to share my version with u guys hope u'll like it.................😊
MILEY JAB HUM TUM
this is a story of 2 brothers , 2 sister like best friends & most importantly it's a story about love coz love makes the world go round. a young love story of 4 college students and a roller coaster rideof their emotions.................
the story starts with 2 brothers ( sayank) there's no shortage of money but their father doesn't have time for them , after their mother's death sayank's father got too busy in life . samrat feels the emptiness in their family whereas mayank understands the situation or at least pretend so for his kid brother.................
A TYPICAL morning in shergil house , we see mayank taking a shower to get ready for college . he steps out of the shower room , pulls a towel and wipes his back , shakes his wet hair , put on a green shirt & after getting ready moves towards another room..... where on a king size bed samrat is sleeping with a wrinkled bed sheet over him , mayank opens the curtains & samrat hides his face from pillow........
MAYANK - uth jao sam subah ho jayi hai
SAMRAT - ( lazily smiling ) to vo kaunsi nayi baat hai , vo to roz hi hoti hai.........
MAYANK - ( sarcastic smile) haan aur tumhe uthane ke liye drama bhi roz subah hota hi hai.........aur main hi tumhe uthata hoon........
SAMRAT - 😊 to usme kaunsi badi baat hai ,tum kaunsa is ghar se shadi karke jaa rahe ho....
MAYANK - samrat tumhare issi behaviour ki vajah se da tumse naraz rahte hai.........
SAMRAT- relax bro tum to ppb hona , to dad tumse kaunsa impressed rehte hai...........
MAYANK - ppb😕.?
SAMRAT - " pairi pauna beta " 😊 vaise hum subah subah hitler ki batein kyun kar rahe hai , vo to apni kisi meeting mein busy honge na , aur agar unhe hitchki aa gayi to bolenge tumhari vajah se mera nuksaan ho gaya ( in a heavy and taunting voice)
MAYANK - sam dad ko hitler mat bulao ( picks up sam's books and desk them )
SAMRAT - mayank plz hitler ko dad mat bulao..............
MAYANK - tumhe sudharna impossible hai.........
SAMRAT - i know ( keeps his elbow on mayank's shoulder ) perfection ko sudharna impossible hi hota hai............😉
MAYANK -aur tumhe lagta hai tum perfect ho 😊..........
SAMRAT - correction, mujhe aisa lagta nahi hai mujhe log kehte hai.............
MAYANK - aur ye log kaun hai ....? ladkiyaan......?
SAMRAT - kyun ladkiyon mein feelings nahi hoti kay........?
MAYANK - hoti hai , par dimag nahi hota aur jinme dimaag hota hai vo to tmhe........😉
SAMRAT - woh bhi mijhe like karti hai.........!
MAYANK - tum aajtak kisi sahi ladki se mile hi nahi ho .........( he leaves the room )
SAMRAT - ( saying it loudly ) vo bhi mujhe pasand karegi , dekhlena ...........
ON THE BREAKFAST TABLE
SAMRAT - raghu kaka meri plate se sare apple pcs nikal do ..........
( raghu kaka separating the apple pcs from samrat's fruit plate )
MAYANK - ( eating his fruits ) kyun tumhe apple kyun nahi khana.........
SAMRAT - woh! kyunki ! an apple a day keeps the doctor away .
MAYANK - ( curious to know ) aur tumhe dr. rastogi ke pass kyun jana hai...........
SAMRAT - bhai tumhe hospitals mein sirf doctor hi kyun dikhte hai, vaise isse muhe yaad aaya ki world kitna unfair hai na........
MAYANK - kyun.........?
SAMRAT - dekhona na jaan na pehchaan aur itni beautiful girls ko sister bulana padta hai.............
SAMRAT PHONE RINGS
MAYANK - dekh lo ! benji ka hi hoga ( getting up and leaving ) i'll see u in colloge.............
SAMRAT - ( picking up his phone ) hello ! what ! kyun ? kahan ? kaise ?
HE LEAVES ON HIS BIKE
do comment ...............😊
part -2 page 2 , part -3 page 3 , part -4 page 5 , part -5 page 7
part-6 page 9 , part -7 page 10 , part -8 page 12 , part -9 page 14
part-10 page 16 , part -11 page 17 , part -12 page 19 , part-13 page 21
part-14 page 22 , part - 15 page 24 , part -16 page 26 , part-17 page 28
some were good & some were terrific & my mjht buddies r so talented that they inspired me tooo to share my version with u guys hope u'll like it.................😊
MILEY JAB HUM TUM
this is a story of 2 brothers , 2 sister like best friends & most importantly it's a story about love coz love makes the world go round. a young love story of 4 college students and a roller coaster rideof their emotions.................
the story starts with 2 brothers ( sayank) there's no shortage of money but their father doesn't have time for them , after their mother's death sayank's father got too busy in life . samrat feels the emptiness in their family whereas mayank understands the situation or at least pretend so for his kid brother.................
A TYPICAL morning in shergil house , we see mayank taking a shower to get ready for college . he steps out of the shower room , pulls a towel and wipes his back , shakes his wet hair , put on a green shirt & after getting ready moves towards another room..... where on a king size bed samrat is sleeping with a wrinkled bed sheet over him , mayank opens the curtains & samrat hides his face from pillow........
MAYANK - uth jao sam subah ho jayi hai
SAMRAT - ( lazily smiling ) to vo kaunsi nayi baat hai , vo to roz hi hoti hai.........
MAYANK - ( sarcastic smile) haan aur tumhe uthane ke liye drama bhi roz subah hota hi hai.........aur main hi tumhe uthata hoon........
SAMRAT - 😊 to usme kaunsi badi baat hai ,tum kaunsa is ghar se shadi karke jaa rahe ho....
MAYANK - samrat tumhare issi behaviour ki vajah se da tumse naraz rahte hai.........
SAMRAT- relax bro tum to ppb hona , to dad tumse kaunsa impressed rehte hai...........
MAYANK - ppb😕.?
SAMRAT - " pairi pauna beta " 😊 vaise hum subah subah hitler ki batein kyun kar rahe hai , vo to apni kisi meeting mein busy honge na , aur agar unhe hitchki aa gayi to bolenge tumhari vajah se mera nuksaan ho gaya ( in a heavy and taunting voice)
MAYANK - sam dad ko hitler mat bulao ( picks up sam's books and desk them )
SAMRAT - mayank plz hitler ko dad mat bulao..............
MAYANK - tumhe sudharna impossible hai.........
SAMRAT - i know ( keeps his elbow on mayank's shoulder ) perfection ko sudharna impossible hi hota hai............😉
MAYANK -aur tumhe lagta hai tum perfect ho 😊..........
SAMRAT - correction, mujhe aisa lagta nahi hai mujhe log kehte hai.............
MAYANK - aur ye log kaun hai ....? ladkiyaan......?
SAMRAT - kyun ladkiyon mein feelings nahi hoti kay........?
MAYANK - hoti hai , par dimag nahi hota aur jinme dimaag hota hai vo to tmhe........😉
SAMRAT - woh bhi mijhe like karti hai.........!
MAYANK - tum aajtak kisi sahi ladki se mile hi nahi ho .........( he leaves the room )
SAMRAT - ( saying it loudly ) vo bhi mujhe pasand karegi , dekhlena ...........
ON THE BREAKFAST TABLE
SAMRAT - raghu kaka meri plate se sare apple pcs nikal do ..........
( raghu kaka separating the apple pcs from samrat's fruit plate )
MAYANK - ( eating his fruits ) kyun tumhe apple kyun nahi khana.........
SAMRAT - woh! kyunki ! an apple a day keeps the doctor away .
MAYANK - ( curious to know ) aur tumhe dr. rastogi ke pass kyun jana hai...........
SAMRAT - bhai tumhe hospitals mein sirf doctor hi kyun dikhte hai, vaise isse muhe yaad aaya ki world kitna unfair hai na........
MAYANK - kyun.........?
SAMRAT - dekhona na jaan na pehchaan aur itni beautiful girls ko sister bulana padta hai.............
SAMRAT PHONE RINGS
MAYANK - dekh lo ! benji ka hi hoga ( getting up and leaving ) i'll see u in colloge.............
SAMRAT - ( picking up his phone ) hello ! what ! kyun ? kahan ? kaise ?
HE LEAVES ON HIS BIKE
do comment ...............😊
part -2 page 2 , part -3 page 3 , part -4 page 5 , part -5 page 7
part-6 page 9 , part -7 page 10 , part -8 page 12 , part -9 page 14
part-10 page 16 , part -11 page 17 , part -12 page 19 , part-13 page 21
part-14 page 22 , part - 15 page 24 , part -16 page 26 , part-17 page 28
part -18 page 29 , part- 19 page 31 , part -20 page 34 , part -21 page 36
part -22 page 37 , part- 23 page 41 , part -24 page 43 ,
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