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@Jenny..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

mayur married but shilpa aunty no more

it was a sad part

loved it

& thnx alot 4 pm

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@kiarathediva

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

plz pm me....

and it was awesome..........

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@Jenny..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

loved this part it was so sad

sorry for late reply b'coz my net was not working

thnx alot 4 pm

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@Jenny..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#84

tihis was fabulous update

loved it update ur next art soon

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#85

hahahah...guys u all right such cute comments...😆, thx a lot...🤗

PART 11:

M...nupur ander bula lo please, yahan bht sardi hai...

N...haad ho gai mayank, aao ander., ye kia ho raha hai...itni barish main tum..

M..wo actually...*aaaaaacccchooooo*

N...ther jao, apni kahanni baad main suna lena...

She bought a towel..

N..tum khare ku ho, beth jao..

Nupur started drying his hair with the towel,

M..wo main aur rahul film dekhne aye they, aur phir hum ne thori shpoping ki, pihr rahul k dad ka phn a gay k foran ghr aao, bechra bht dar gaya tha, tu is liye mian ne us se kaha k tum ghr chaley jao, mian khud chala jao ga, per phir muhe ko auto mia hi nahi...

N..tumhe sharm nahi ati rahul k sath ghomne main

M..nupur rahul ik larka hai..

N..v funny, pata hai mujhe, per pata hia kitna selfish hai, koi zarorat nahi us se milne ki, bus door raho us se..

M...*aaaaaacccchoooo*

N...tum change kar lo nahi tu sardi lag jaye gi..lekin tum pehno gey kia?

M..merey pas kapre hian,

He pionted toward the packet ..

M..bataya tha na shopping kar k aya hon..

N..thek hai main geaser on kar deti hon, gram pani se naha lo...

Mayank went to change, and when he came out nupur was there with lemon tea..

N..ye lo, sardi k liye..isis jaldi jaldi pe lena..thandi ho jaye gi..

M..nupur main samrat ko phn kar deta hon, wo mujhe lene a ajaye ga..

N..samrat k pas helicopter hai?

M..nahi..

N..tu phir wo nahi a sakta..bcz sara traffic block hai, abhi news main bataya hai k baghier zararat k ghar se bahir mta nikliye..

She imitated the newscaster..

M..oh, tu ab..

N..tu ab kia...mayank main kha nahi jao gi...

M...nahi mera mtlb wo nahi tha.

N..acha waise main ne tu apne liye soup banya tha, tumhe kuch aur khana hai tu bata do main bana deti hon...

M..nahi soup thek hai

N,.paka?

M..haan..

N..thek hai main le k ati haon

M..ther jao, abhi itni garam chai, uper se garam soup...mujhe jalaney ka irada hai

N..main apne lane lane ja rahi hon

Mayank held her hand

M..rehne do na,..thori dair baad sath pe len gey..

nupur was still for a moment but then mayank left her hnad...

N..thek hai..

Mayank went to the dining table where shilpa was sitting when he came last time for the dinner, he gently touched the chair, he had teary eyes...

Nupur was watching news when mayank came

M..nupur mujhe ye news wagaira bilkul psnd nahi hai..kuch acha lagao...

N..ache se tumhara mtlb?

M.,..koi film lagao..

N..mayank tum

Maynk tried to snatch the remote but nupur didnt allowed him to..

N..hehehe...itna asaan nhai hai muhe ullo banna

M..nupur ye change karo please...

She changed the channel and on the next channel there was an intimate scene giong on in the film..Nupur got embarrsed for a moment.

M..waise ye bhi change kar do..

Nupur started laughing and so did mayank..

M..kiya hia..kar do..laga do news...waise mian ne aksar notice kiya hai..news hi sab se safe channel hota hia...

BOth of them were laughng when lightening started...

N..ye barish tu rok hi nahi rahi..

M...tu is mian kiya hia...tum kabhi barish main nahai ho..

N..nahi..

M..kiya tum ne kabi barish feel nahi ki?

N..nahi...

Mayank held her hand

M.chalo

N...mayank main koi barish main bhegne nahi wali...

M..thek hai, khirki se hath nikal kar barish feel tu kar sakti ho na...

He opened the window and pulled nupur hand outside. Water drops were falling on her hand.

N..mayank mera sweter gela ho jaye ga..

Mayank pulled her sleeves a bit

M..ab thek hai..

N..mayank tum

'M..nupur ankhen band kar lo

He placed her hands over her eyes..and held her hand whch was wetting in rain.

M..ab feel karo, barish k katre hath par par rahe hain

N..haan

M...kaisa lag raha hai...

Nupur herself was confused how to describe this feeling, it was great

N...aisey jaise kisi sokhe patey pe pani gir raha hai..

M...ab dil cha raha hai k barish khatam ho jaye..

N..nahi...

Mayank held her hand tightly, entagled his fingers between hers's.

N...asia lag raha hia jiase achanak kuch pura ho gay hai...

Mayank and nupur were standing very close.

Npur was completely lost into the feeling of rain drops falling onto her hand, it was the first time she had felt rain, mayank sudenly realised that how close he was to nupur.

He could feel the fragnance of her hair. He closed his eyes and wanted to feel this closeness.

thier hands were still in rain

Mayank opened her hair, they started flowing. Nupur opened her eyes and when she saw mayank so close to her, she was still.

Nupur's hair were flowing on her face, mayank removed them with his wet hand that was drenching in rain.The water drops flowed on nupur's face.

Nupur closed her eyes on the touch of mayank.It was feeling as a biss,.

Maynk brushed his fingers in her hair, and her hair were also damped a bit becuse some rain was coming on them due to the window.

Mayank brushed her fingers over nupurs' cheeks.

Nupur was standing there with closed eyes, trying to feel the heavenly bliss of mayank's closeness.

Mayank was looking at nupur....He himself closed his eyes and moved more close

They were so close that their breaths were entangling with each other. Mayank could hear nupur's incresed heart beat.

Mayank was about to kiss her when a lightening bolt brought both of them thier senses...

Mayank moved away and nupur opened her eys.

Maynk couldnt belive that what was he upto, nupur had a disbelief in her eyes..

M..umm...barish rok gayi hai...main chalta hon

Nupur was silent, she herself was shocked at what had happened.

Mayank didnt wait more , he left, He strated walking towards his home, it was raining and maynk was thinking about what happened.

He was so close to nupur, her hair, her eyes, those water drops flowing on her face ...SHE WAS BEAUTIFUL...her incresed pulse...the way she herself couldnt resist when he was so close to him

He looked at his fingers which he brushed into her hair. He could still feel the essence...

He reached home, again completely drenced..

S...tum bahir kahan se arahe ho..mujhe tu laga tum apne kamre mian ho..kahan they..

Mayank was silent...he was still thinking about how it felt being so close to nupur...Samrat was constantly asking him questions and he was quiet, whne suddenly he spoke up....

M..I LOVE HER...

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Edited by mehak03 - 15 years ago

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Fiza

@mayurian-artian

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Posted: 15 years ago

#86

res EDITED

mme first me first

dis update wz truly wonderful i enjoyed it thouroughly except 4 de lightning urghhhh... y does de lightning or de currrent alwz cum between the 2 of dem anywz i hope nupur also realizes soon dat she luvs him

hope it happens soon

luv

Fiza

Edited by mayurian-artian - 15 years ago

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

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Posted: 15 years ago

#87

i have no words to describe how beautiful it is...........🤗🤗update as soon as possible

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pari sharma

@kiarathediva

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#88

loved it.....

\thnx for the pm

do pm me next tym also..

and after that also

and aftre that also.....

and i hope you understood that you hav to pm me all the tym......

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ardhana

@ardhana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#89

yaar it was too gud kaash nupur bhi jald hi apni feelings samajh paaye toh kitna acha hoga

ps:thanks for the pm

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#90

thank u guys..🤗

PART 12:

S...kia?...kya kaha tum ne?

M..I LOVE HER...

Samrat smiled,

S...finlaly tum ne maan liya...mujhe tu bht pehle se pata tha...tu janab apni begam shaiba se mil kar a rahe hain..

M..samart ab main kia karon?

S..arey tum tu aisey pereshan ho rahe ho jaise tumhe koi bimari ho gai hai...

M...lekin wo mujh se pyar nahi karti

S..aur ye tumhe kaise paat

M...mian ne kabhi us ki ankhon mian pyar nahi dekha..

S...tum ne kabhi us ki ankhon main pyar dhoondha hai?

Mayank understood what samrat said, he himself realised his love at the moment and only once he saw a dream in her eyes and never ever looked onto her eyes agian.

M..tu thek keh raha hai..pyar dikhao ga tu hi pyar nazr aye ga na..

S..exactly!...acha ab tum naha lo main geaser on kar deta hon nahi tu thannd lag jay gi

Mayank renmbered nupur, she said the same thing, he started smiling..

S..oh mR. romeo, utho chalo..

Mayank took the bath gain, he was smiling that it is this second time in two hours...

M..shiyed pyar man aisa hi hota hai...

S..ye lo chai, aur is k sath ye medicine..

M...thanks

S..ab so jana...ok..nahi tu bemar ho jao gey..bhabhi k bare main subha sochna ...good night.

Samrat left and mayank slept thinking about nupur.

Nupur on the other hand was still confused over what happened. She knew maynk was so close to him but she didnt resisted, WHY??...She shouldnt have dont it, it was wrong...but HE IS HER HUSBAND!
sHE SUDDENLY STOOD UP.

N..nupur please is rishtey k barey main sochney ka koi haq nahi hai tujhe....jo bhi hus wo hua ik accident tha...hmari shaadi aur aj jo bhi hua...it was nothing else!!..

Nupur was trying to normalise that it was a mistake they were about to commit due to the atmosphere.

Next day nupur entered clg but she didnt find MAYANK!...She was afriad, after the first class, She called him

N..mayank?

S..Nahi samrat, ap nupur bol rahi hain

N..haan, wo main ne pochna tha k mayank aj clg nahi aya?

S..haan wo bhai ko bht teez bukhar ho gaya hai..kal barish main bheg raha tha na...

N..main ne mana bhi kiya tha...ab kaisa hai

S...thek hai, pani ki patiyan karni hain, aur mera aj test hai , clg jana bht zarori hai..mujhe tu samjhh nahi a raha..per koi baat nahi..main wapis a kar kar don ga..tab tak bulkhar man hi soya rahe ga,..koi baat nahi...5 ghantey se tu kuch nahi ho ga na?

N...5 ghante??..nahi samrta tum test rehne do..ghr pe raho mayank k sath

S...wo possible nahi hai...meri grading ka problem hai..waise agr ap free hain tu ap a jayei

Nupur as confused.

N..umm..main?

S..nahi thek hai, koi baat nahi bhai 5 ghante tu bukhar mai reh len gey.

N..nahi main ati hon, address?

Samrat told her the address.

Mayank did had fever but samrat didnt had any test, he faked all this bcz he wated mayank and nupur to spent some more time. Mayank was sleeping due to the anti biotics.
Samrat ahd been successfull. He said to himself

S..chal samrat tyaari shoro kar dey...dulhan pehli baar ghar a rahi hai!!

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Edited by mehak03 - 15 years ago

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