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Fiza

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Posted: 15 years ago

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YESSS ME FIRST..... once again 😉

yaar mehak u totally rocked dis update wz brilliant

do cont soon

luv

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

jo socha tha wo hi hua........mayank has fever nd nupur come to home...........thanx mehek for update early........eagarly waiting for next part

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

Mehak dear

very beautiful update

Maynk is in love with nupur
But he thought nupur didnt love her

nupur was remembering their closeness

mayank ko bukahr hai- koi baat nehi nupur hain na.?

i loved sam here
he is very smart

good update mehak

but this part was too short

plz next time try to make longer

Take care dear

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ardhana

@ardhana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

yaar u rock

it was fabulous now the masti will begin

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

Samrat toh bahut intelligent ho gaya hain... nice update....

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aswathy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

both the updates were mindblowing.........

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@Jenny..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

loved this part

so finally nupur mayur will be spending quality time

thnx alot 4 pm

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Radha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

awesome part!!!
loved it!!
really amazing..
cont soon

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Nirvrithi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#99

Lemme guess - Samrat door pe kalash rakhega jisse nupur by mistake gira degi..right? I know im thinking too filmy ..Kya kare story mayur ki hai tho , filmy tho hogi na?

I love your superfast love story 🤗

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Fantasia.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#100

thank u guys..😊 and yay!!!!!..above 2000 views...🥳

PART 13:

Samrta wanted to welcome nupur with all the rituals but that was not possible. He could not show her that he knew about the marriage, but he wanted to make her first entry special.

S..kuch tu karna pare ga!..

He went to the kitchen and put some raw rice in a small packet and placed it in fornt of the door. He made sure that as the door is opend from outside th erice should spread. He gave it try two three times., everytime he used to put the rice and then go out from the window and then check whether rice spread or not, but he was succesful

The next step was kumkum..The enterance had a step, after opennng the door there was a step and then the longue, he spreaded some kumkum on that step.

He was now perfectly ready, He saw nupur coming, he immedieterly jumped out of the window and stood in front of the door..

S.,..hii

N..hi

S..thank u so much, ap yahan ayain

N..its ok

Nupur was about to open the door when samrat shouted

S,....nahiii...ik minute..

N..kia hua?

S...ummm ap ko joti utarni pare gi...

N..kia?

S...haan wo hamre morena main kehtey hain k agr ghr main kisi ko bhukhar ho tu joti pehn kar nahi jana chaiye...abshugan hot hai..dekhiye main ne bhi nahi pehni..

He pionted towrds his feet.

N..haan lekin main ne kabhi nai suan is bare main,..

S..ye sirf morena k logon pe applicable hai..plz joti utar lijiye ..main bhai ki health pe koi risk nahi le chahta,..

Nupur took of her sandels and held them in her hands.

Nupur opened the door and the rice spread,

Nupur was shocked and samrat smile but he normalised soon

S..ye ramo kak bhi na..kuch bhi kahin bhi rakh detey hain..i am sorry , ap ander chaleiyen

Nupur was confusedt hat why would someone put rice on at the door step?

N..lekin chawwal aise darwaze per

S..ye tu kuch b nahi hai,,ramo kaka tu kabhi kabhi cooker tv pe pakne k liye rakh detey hain....unhain bholne ki bimari hai..shiyed ghar k darwaze ko kitchen cabinet ka darwaza samjh liya hoga.

Nupur smiled and now she was heading towards the step where samrta had spread the kumkum

S..ouch..

N..kia hua?

Nupur looked at samrat and her without looking put her feet into kumkum..

N...ye kia hai?

S..umm main ne batya na ramo kaka..

N..oh

S..chalyen...

Nupur started walking inside and her footsteps were being printed in her house due to the kumkum on her feet.

S..agr ap chaho tu paon saaf kar lo..ye kum kum

N..nahi...meri maa kehti thi k agr paon pe kum kum lag jaye tu dhona nahi chiaye...abshagun hota hai..

S...thek hai..bhai ka kamra uper hai..ap jayein...main clg chalta hon..

N.ok bye

S..umm...agr ho sake tu nhai k liye halwa bana di jiye ga...uesey bht pasnd hai..

N..halwa?

S..haan...wo kitchen hai..

N..umm..ok..

Nupur was moving towards the stairs, when samrta again called

S..nupur..thank u very much.

N..its ok samrat..

S..no its not ok..ap bhai k liye itna soch rahi hain..bht bari baat hai...after all ap ka bhai se koi rishta tu nahi hai...

He emphasied on his statement and nupur's face gave hurt expressions..SHE WAS HIS WIFE!!

Nupur smiled and went upstiers..

Samrat was standing there smiling...

S..bhai i hope tumhain mera surprise psnd aye...

Samrat left and nupur entered the room.

the lights were dim and mayank was sleeping,

She clamy wnet close to him, he was looking so innocent, nupur placed her hand on his forehead, ndit was hot,

So she started water treatment

After about 10 to 15 times, nupur observed that the fever had reduced..

N..mujhe lagta hai muhe halwa bana lena chiye...is k uthne se pehle..

She went to the kitchen and all the ingriedeints were placed on the cabinet,

N..zarror samrat ne rakha hoga..nice boy...bht pyaar karat hai apne bhai se...

Maynk had woken up in his room, he saw the water strips and thought it would have been samrat. He was feeling much better.he want to change adn when he came back It was NUPUR SITTING IN THE SOFA...

N..good morninjg..

Maynak rubbed his eyes...

M..Tum sach main ho?

N..mtlb?

..He came close to her nd touched her..

M..wow tum waqai sach main ho...

N..haan!...samrat ne bataya k tumhari tabiyat thek nahi hai, aur us k atest tha tu main tumhare pass ruk gayi...

Mayank knew his brother very well..

M..hmm..wow, aur tumahre atey hi main bilkul thek ho gaya..

N..haan lekin tumhe ye halwa khana pare ga..garm garam hai, tumhare liye acha hai..

Myank came a bit close to her.,.

M..tum ne banaya hai?

Nupur got confused

N..haan..

M..chalo raat ko tumhre hath ka soup nahi pi saka,, ab halwa hi ahi..

Nupur suddenly remenberd what happened at night. Mayank was observing her exrpessions. He finished his halwa..

M..bht acha tha...

N..kiya?

M..halwa..

N..oh..

M..aisa karte hain neche chalte hain..chalen...

Mayank wanted to ease nupur, she was geting uncomfortable..

N..haan chalo..

Mayank and nupur were comig down satris when nupur slipped down the stairs..

M..nupur!!..

N..ouch!..

M...oh God utho..

Maynk brought her to the sofa..

M..thek ho?

N..haan..bus

M.. nahi tumhe thori chot ayi hai..

He bought the first aid box

N..mayank nahi main..

M..nupur chup..

Nupur was very scared..

Myank slighthy removed her hair from her forhead as there was scratch and he saw NUPUR WAS WEARING SINDOOR!...

HE LOOKED AT NUPUR BUT SHE LOWERED HER EYES

Mayank put the small handy bandage...

there was scratch on her neck and he slightly removed the collar of her shirt and he saw manglsutr's thread...

Mayank was silently putting badage and nupur didnt knew what to do..HER BIGGEST SECRET WAS REVEAED!!..

N..umm..ab tum thek ho gaye ho..main chalti hon...

Mayank was staring her. She put her shoes on...and was about to leave..

M..ruko nupur..

Nupur stopped, she knew that now mayank was giong to ask her questions of which she herslf had no answer!...

Do comment..😊

Edited by mehak03 - 15 years ago

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