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Fiza

@mayurian-artian

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Posted: 15 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: mahakmev
same from me.u can't do this this is not fair.dying to read next part plz update

me 2222 plz abhi update do na pleashhhh

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gurpreet

@preety88

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Posted: 15 years ago

#172

part 20 was fantastic.........cont soon

Edited by preety88 - 15 years ago

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#173

great update dear..pls continue soon.............

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stuti

@stuti123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#174

mehak i just finished reading part 19 nd 20 both were awesome ...... cant wait for da next updat jaldi update karna plz .........

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Jessie

@jes_jade

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Posted: 15 years ago

#175

Part 19

Awesome....All of them are so busy...
Samrat is really naughty...

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Jessie

@jes_jade

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Posted: 15 years ago

#176

Part 20

Mind blowing update!!👏
Candle light dinner, Nupur in sari...woww...😳😍😍
Update it soon...😊

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 15 years ago

#177

wowowowo mehak both 19th nd 20th parts are mind blowing cant wait to read whts gonna happen next plxxxxxxxx update soon

thx for the pm

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#178

LOL...u guys are complete sweethearts...🤗

PART 21:

M...ye kia ho raha hai?

Nupur was shocked..

N..ummm..kk..kuch nahi..

M..hmm..tu bahir ayen gi..

N..haan..

Nupur came out of the corner behind he cupboard..

An as she came out she was so shy that she didnt even looked at mayank, she was looking all side ways. Mayank really loved nupur, he was so touched by her attitude

M..nupur main table pe nahi tumhare same khara hon..

This really made nupur looka t him and mayank was spell bounded...She was really looking beautiful..her hair flowing, and her sari was looking awesome...the slightly nervous look on her face and that shyness over which mayank gave his heart away...

He took a few steps towards her and then said in her ears

M..mujhe mera prize acha laga nupur..

Nupur closed her eyes, she always was so nervous by his closeness...

Suddenly mayank moved away..

Nupur was herself looking at him with shovk..

M..nupur kuch jal raha hai..

N..kia..

M..haan..

Mayank immedietely looked around the room as there were candles all around but everything was fine...

N..oh noo!...

M..kia hua?

N..mera khana!!..

M..kia?

Nupur ran down stairs and mayank was shocked that what happened..he followed nupur and nupur ran in the kitchen and all her food was burnt she was about to open the cover but mayank held his hand,...

M..kai kar rahi ho...hath jal jaye ga...

mayank opened the exhaust so that the fumes went out..

N...hath jal jata per khana tu bach jata...

M..ye kia bachpana hai nupur...

Nupur had tears in her eyes..

M..oh ho is main rone wali kaunsi baat hai...

N..mujhe yaad hi nahi raha..main itni confuse ho gai thi...

she literally started crying...

M..nupur ye kia hia..chalo bahir..

He bought her to the lounge and made her sit on the sofa and he himself sat down on his knees on the floor..

M..is main rone wakli kaunsi baat hai nupur..koi baat nahi...kabhi kahbhi ghalti ho jati hai..

N..nai mayank, mujhe se hamesha tumhre sath hi ku ghalati hoti hai..

M..phir wohi baat..

N..nahi mayank, tum itne ache ho...hamesha tumne mera itna khyal rakha hai..jis din se mujhe miley ho us din se tum ne mujhe apni palkon pe bitha kar rakha hai..aur main ne kia kiya hai..

M..nupur tum ye sab kia..

N..plz muhe kehne do mayank...her waqt tum ne meri maddad ki,, mian ne mana kiya phir bhi tum ne maddad ki...kabhi bhi mujhe akela nahi chora aur ik main hon jaise apni hi feelings kehni nahi ati...i am sorry mayank,,,tum ne pehli baar mujh se kuch manga aur main wo bi thek se nahi kar payi..

M..nupur tum ye..

N..tum ne tu mujh se shaadi tak kar li..sirf meri maa k kehne per...tum ne mujhe pe itney ehsaan..

M..bus nupur bht ho gaya hai...MAKE ONE THING VERY CLEAR MAIN NE KOI EHSAAN NAHI KIYA TUM PE.mai ne tum se shaadi ki ku k main tum se pyar karta hon..

Nupur looked at mayank immedietly...this was the first time he had said that...mayank held nupur's hands.

M..main tum se payr karta hon nupur..aur us din bhi jab aunti ne mujh se kaha k agr aj tum shaadi nahi karo gi tu kabhi nhi karo gi ..u main dar gaya tha...tab shiyed mujhe ehsaas nahi tha k ye pyar hai..lekin tumhe khone ka ehsaas itna bur tha k mujhe tumhe apnane k ilawa kuch samjh nahi aya..
Nupur agr sirf tum se hamdardi hoti tu kabhi tumhe shaadi k baad akela nahi chorta...tum se pyar karta tha is liye tumhari marzi ka intezar kar raha tha..

Nupur was looking at mayank with teras, he gently kissed her hands and then wiped off her tears...

M..ab dobara hum ye baat nahi karn gey...ok!..

He stood up and was about to move to a bit away when nupur held her hand...Maynk tuned towards her and looked into her eyes,..he understood that she is giong to confess, her eyes told him..

N..i love u mayank,...

Maynk smiled and she hugged him...

This was the first time they hugged, nupur could feel mayank so near to him, mayank also hugged her back, his hands between her open hair, nupur could feel mayank's arm partially touching her bare back..she even more held him close...

After a moment or two..mayank slighly got away, and again wiped her tears...

M..ab rona band karo , main khana bhair se order ar deta hon...waise mujhe tu bhook nahi hai lekin...

Mayank was about to head toward sthe tele phone but nupur again held his hand...

Maynk turned...

N..maynk uper kamre main main ne candles is liye nahi jalayi thi k wo khud hi bhuj k kahtam ho jayen...

Mayank couldnt believe his ears...he started smiling..leaned a bit close to her and said

M...oh!...tu tumhe bhi flirt karna ata hai...

Nupur looked into hes eyes...this was the first time nupur herself wanted maynk to read her eyes...she wanted him to undersatnd what she meant..and ofcourse mayank did...

N..i want to submit myself to u ...i love u mayank...

Mayank could read th eintencity in her eyes..

He lifted her in his arms and took er to thier room...

The room was perfectly romantic...

Mayank mde her sit on the bed and then gently brushed away all the hir on her face, and gently kissed her, it felt as if both of them had completed something

Maynk's phyical touch was so gentle, he touhed her, carresed her, kissed her, brushe his fingers on her as if she was made of glass...Nupur couldnt belive maynk loved her so much

that night completed their relation, their love and their lives...

..a princess who hereslf feared love found a prince who taught her how to love..and they lived happily ever after...

Do comment guys..
and here i end my OS..this was the last part...hope u all enjoyed it reading as much as i did writing...😊...

Edited by mehak03 - 15 years ago