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hey wow mahak
lovely update
i loved reading it
pls continue soon
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hey wow mahak
lovely update
continue soon
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hi everyone.thank's 4 all ur lovely comments.that's really sweet of all of u to appereciate my work.i am now quiet well.i tried to give a long update and i hope u all will like it. here's the next part.

PART6:

nupur comes after changing her clothes and go to sleep.

NEXT MORNING(DAY1,WEEK1):

AT MAYANK'S HOUSE:

IN SAMRAT'S ROOM:

MM:uth beta kitna kaam hain ghar main.

S:mom sune do na tang kyun kr rahin hon.

MM:acha.......tu raat ko bhushan family k samne bare dailogue mar raha tha k main sab sambhal lon ga.

S:mom vo tu chashmish aur us ki family ko impress karne ki ek trick thi😉.

MM:vah vah................yahan khud ko sambhalna nahin ata aur vahan.

S:mom...........kyun class le rahin hon..............plz jao na aur mujhe sone do.

MM:dafa hon................soya reh...........pta nahin tera kya hon ga....................gunjan per kabhi bra tars ata hain per kar bhi kya sakte hain😆.

S:mommmmmmmmmm😡.

MM:theek hain so ja..........main ja rahin hon.

IN MAYANK'S ROOM:

mayank was watching nupur's pic and was smiling😳.

MM:mayu.

mayank hide the pic and turns.

M:maa...............ap yahan.

MM:vo mujhe tuj se kehna tha k aj main ne nupur ko ghar bolaya hain...................vo jeweleries dikhani thi.socha k try kr le aur pasand bhi kr le.jab vo aye to tu mujhe bta dena.main zara busy hon na.plz beta.

M(happily):sure maa...................vo jese hi aye gi main bta don ga😛.

mayank's mom goes from there.mayank think's about nupur and smiles.

M(naughtily):tu miss bhushan a rahin hain.

mayank khirki k saath khara hota hain.achanak ek hawa ka ghonka guzarta hain.

M:nupur.

mayank khirki se nupur ko ate hove dekhta hain.mayank bhag k darvaze per khara hon jata hain.

M(loudly):mom nupur a gayi.

mayank ki mom ati hain.nupur darvaza kholti hain.vo ander ane lagti hain k mayank pao age rakh deta hain aur vo slip hon jati hain aur mayank use pakar leta hain😳.their is an eyelock.mayank was mamerized by her beauty.

MM:ab meri bahu ko ander ane bhi de ga ya ese hi pakar kr rakhe ga😉.

both came back to their senses and stand.

M:pta ni maa................jab dekho giti rehti hain😆.

M:tu rehne de.................khabar dar meri bahu ko kuch bhi kaha😳...............nupur beta to esa kr mayank k kamre min ja main jewelry le kr ati hon.

N:ji maa.

mayank's mom goes from there.mayank was about to go but nupur hold his hand and stops him.mayank turns.

N(wisper's in his ear):main is liye girti hon mr.mayank sharma kyun k main janti hon k mujhe sambhalne wala koi hain..........................jo mujhe kabhi girne nahin de ga😳.

she blushes and runs from there.mayank smiles.

IN MAYANK'S ROOM:

nupur room main enter hoti hain.she loves the room.achanak us ki nazar bed k upper diwar per lagi pic per perti hain.it's maur's pic.

N:hamari photo.

mayank comes from behind and hold her tightly.

M:han.............hamari photo..............kesi hain.

N:bohat payari.

M:lekin mujhe is photo main sirf ek hin cheez achi lagti hain.

N:vo kya?

M:tum😳.

nupur blushes.

N:vese ye room tum ne decorate kiya hain.

M:han.........tumhain pasand tu hain na.

N:bohat payara hain......................bilkul tumhari tarha.

M:acha.

N:hm.

mayank holds her more tightly.

N:mayank kya kr rahain hon.

M:kya kr raha hon?

N:koi a gaya tu....................are maa tu ati hi hon gi.

M:vo ane se pehle knock kre gi.

N:tumhe kese pta.

M:meri maa hain.................vo janti hain jab do love birds ek band kamre main akele hon to kuch to chal raha hon ga😉.

N:mayank(nupur hit's him playfully)

M:tum bhi na mayank.................kabhi nahin sudhro ge.

suddenly,mayank's mom knock at the door.

MM:kya main ander aa sakti hon.

M:sure maa...............a jao.

she comes in.

MM:i hope galat time per nahin ayi😊.

nupur blushes.

N:esa kuch nahin hain maa.

MM:i am really sorry beta...........decoratio valo ko bhi abhi hi ana tha.........tum ye sab try kro main thori der tak ati hon.......tum sab try kr lon agarkuch pasand na aya to bta dena.

M:kyun nahin aye ga pasand...................after all choice kis ki hain😉.

MM:han han..........teri hain...................tu idhar hi reh agar use kuch help chahiye hovi to kr dena..........aur vo boor bhi nahin hon gi.

M(HAPPY 4OM INSIDE):theek hain maa.............jesa tum kahon.

now mayank's mom goes from there both r alone in the room.

nupur mirror k samne bethti hain aur mayank bed per late kr nupur ko dekh raha hota hain.nupur sare necklace try karti hain ab last reh jata hain.bohat mushkil se akhri set tie karti hain.ye full daimond set hota hain.

M:nupur.

N:hm.

M:ye set kesa hain.

N:bohat acha.

M:tumhein pta hain ye set mujhe baki sets se bohat acha lagta hain.

N:vo kyun?

M:kyun k ise pehan to khud sakte hain per............

N(confused):per kya.

M:utar nahin sakte.

N:kya?...........kya keh rahain hon mayank.😲

nupur use utarne ki koshish main lag jti hain per vo khulta hi nahin.mayank bed se uth kr nupur k pass jata hain.

M:relax..................main hon na.

nupur stop's.mayank ahista ahista us k pass jata hain.nupur ki dharkene tez hotijati hain😳.mayank nupur k bohat pass khra hota hain.vo ahista se nupur k bhaal hatata hain.ek ajeeb si leher nupur k ander se guzarti hain.dono mirror se ek dosre ko dekh rahain hote hain.mayank ahista se us k aur kareeb hota hain aur us ka set utarta hain.

N(hesitating):thank..............thanku.

mayank just smiles.

M:tum theek hon na.

N:han...............kyun mujhe kya hova?

M(wispers in her ear):tumhari dil ki dharkane mujhe yahan tak sunai de rahin hain aur tum..........😳

nupur blushes and was about to go but mayank holds her dopatta.

N:mayank................chodo mujhe jana hain.

M:nahin chodo ga.

N:plz.....................jane do na.

M:un hun.

N:sam.............tum yahan khirki per.

mayank get shocked😲.mayank know's that sam can do any thing.he leaves her dopatta and turn.but there is no one.he turns back.nupur was standing near the door.

M:nupur.

N:mayank and laughs.😆

mayank too laughs.😆

N:byeeeeeeeeeee.

M:abhi kahan.

N:matlab.

M:matlab ye sweetheart k ap ko ghar hum chode ge😳.

N:acha................tu theek hain maa ne kahan tha k ghar jaldi ana............tu chale.

M:chalo.

nupur meets mayank's mom.

MM:theek hain beta................apna khayal rakhna..............mayu ise sambhal kr le jana and she leaves.

M:don't worry maa..................ise main apni jaan se bhi zada sambhal kr rakhon ga😉.

nupur blushes

M:chale.

N:chalo.

mayank leave's nupur at her house and comes back.

that's it for today.hope u all like it. do comment.it really encourages me.i will try to continue soon.but i will update u little late.thanks

luv u all

mahak

Edited by mahakmev - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
gr8 update yaar
it wz relli sweet
do cont soon
Luv
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85

awesome update yaar specially jewellary vowwwwwwwwwwwwww

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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
Very cute n nice update
loved it dear

mayur r awesome

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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
lovely update
specially loved the girne wala part n the pic
sho shweet

wwaiting for ur next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
awwwww.....this is so sweet, i was smiling like an idiot, especially mayank's dialogue..."pata nai her waqt girti rehti hai"...😆, and i love the emoticons u use...they really add flavour...keep it up!...👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
mayur r fab
loved the part
😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
hey nice again dear...i like that girne wala scene...
ye mayank bhi na ...kya dialog hai 😛
loved it...do cont soon 👏

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