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Great update. It was really sweet.
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continue soon yar..........i m dieing 4 next part..........great work..........keep it up n add me in ur PM list........
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PART 7:

AFTER 3 WEEKS:

TODAY IS MAYUR

'S WEDDING.THE DAY MAYUR WERE EAGERLY WAITING FOR.HER KOI TAYAR HO RAHA HAIN.

AT BHUSHAN HOUSE:

sari tayariyan pori ho chuki hoti hain.nupur naha kar ati hain aur apne baal dy kr rahin hoti hain.tabhi gunjan room main ati hain.

G:ye raha tumhara wedding dress...............vaise di manna pareh ga jiju ki choice ko tumhare liye kya dress pasand kiya hain.

N:tera kya matlab hain us ne jab mujhe pasand kiya tha tab tu tu ne nahin kaha k kitni achi choice hain aur aj dress ko dekhte hin.....

G:diiiiiiiii meri payari di main tu dress ka keh rahin thi aur vaise bhi meri di tu lakhon main ek hain use koi kese pasand nahin kare ga😊.

N:theek hain rehne de.............zara vo hair lotion tu dena.

gunjan nupur ko lotion pakrati hain.

G:vaise di.

N:hm.

G:tum raat bhar soyi kyun nahin............mujhe dar hain kahin mandap main behosh hon gayi tu😆.

N:tu nahin sudhre gi.........aj bhi shuru hon gayi..............jab teri shadi hon gi tu pta chalein ga tujhe..........raaton ki neendh kese ur jati hain pta hin nahin chalta bas ek ajeeb si khushi hoi hain😳.lekin ek baat hain ye akhri 24 ghente 24 saal ki tarha guzarte hain😡.

G:diii.acha ab jaldi se dress pehno phir main tumhein apne hathoon se tayar karon gi.

N:jo hukam meri shehzadi...............do min ruk main abhi ayi.

G:theek hain di.

after sometime nupur come's 4om inside.gunjan was stunned to see her.

N:kya hova ese kyun dekh rahin hain😕.

G:di tum bohat sundar lag rahin hon.

N:per main tu abhi tak tayar bhi nahin hovi.

G:vohi tu di...............tum abhi tak tayar bhi nahin hovi aur itni sundar lag rahin hon jab tayar hon gi tab kya hon ga😲.

N:kya hon ga?

G:di jiju tu kaam se gaye😳.

nupur blushes.

N:acha ab mujhe ese hi dekhne ka irada hain ya tayar bhi krein gi.

G:han kyun nahin.............aj main apni di ko itna sajaon gi k dekhne walon ki ankhein phati ki phati reh jayein gi.

N(smiling):tu na hoti tu mera kya hota.

G:main na hoti tu.......................

N:tu kya?

G:main na hoti tu tumahara mayank phir bhi tumhare saath hin hota.

both laughs.

G:ao di main tumhein tayar kar deti hon.

nupur sits in front of mirror and gunjan starts makeup.

AT SHARMA'S HOUSE:

HER KOI APNE ROOM MAIN TAYAR HON RAHA HAIN.SAMRAT MAYANK K ROOM MAIN HOTA HAIN.MAYANK NE WHITE AND GOLDEN SHERVANI PEHNI HOTI HAIN AUR MIRROR K SAMNE KHRA HO KAR BAAL BNA RAHAN HOTA HAIN.

S:bro aj tum bohat handsome lag rahain ho😉.

M:thanks sam.

S:vaise tum tu tayar hon.........pta nahin nupz tayar hovi hon gi ya nahin.

M:nupz?😲

S:han.........nupur aur kon😉.

M:xcuse me .......vo teri hone vali bhabhi hain...............koi nupz nahin.

S: is main jealous hone vali kya baat hain?...................nupz hi meri hone vali bhabhi hain aur meri hone vali bhabhi hi nupz hain..........farq kya parta hain.

M:o hello..............i am not jealous ok.

S:tu phir chehra kyun lal hon raha hain...........................ya phir bhabhi ka naam sun k sharma rahain hon😆.

M:sam😡.

mayank give sam an evil look.

S:ok..............ok...................relax main tu bas mazak kar raha tha.

M:that's better.................ab kya tu 2 min k liye chup hon sakta hain.

S:why not bro...............tumhare liye kuch bhi😊.

after 2 min

S:vaise bro main soch raha tha k.

M(thinking):o god.................ye phir shuru hon gaya😆.

S:tum lag tu handsome rahain hon per............

M:per kya?........................dekh main agey hi itna nervous hon aur tu........

S:per

M:per kya sam?

S:per sirf bhabhi ki kammi hain ek bar vo a jaye tu sab perfect hon jaye ga😉.

M(smiling):janta hon.........kabhi socha nahin tha k nupur mere liye itni khass hon jayein gi k us k bina jine ka main soch bhi nahin sakta😳.............like true soulmates................humdono ek dosre k bina adhore hain😳.........jese

S(interrupts):jese sitaroon k bina asmaan khali khali lagta hain.............right

M:right.

both smile.they r busy in talking,myank's mom comes.

MM:mayu.

she enters and watch mayank.

MM:mayu tu to bilkul sheh............

S(interrupts):shehzada nahin badsha.

M:badsha?😕

MM:tu phir shuru hon gaya sam😆.

S:dekho bro.............agar tum apni shadi per shehzade lago gein to ye seat tum reserve kr lon gain jis ka matlab ye huva k main apni shadi per vazeer lagon ga..................kyun k jo bi hon hon tu ap se chota hin na😆.

M(laughing):sam tu bhi na..............kya kya sochta rehta hain😆.

MM:dekh na mayu.............kya karon is ladke ka jab dekho ulti phulti baatein karta rehta hain.............kuch samaj nahin ati................ab tere baad is ki bari hain aur harkatein bilkul bachon ki tarha.

S(thinking):kya karon mom................chashmish ko main ese hi acha lagta hon😳.

MM:chal mayu teri arti utar do....................sab bahir hamara intezaar kar rahain hain.

M:ji maa.

going from there mayank hits sam playfully.

M:sudhar ja nautanki😃.

mayank ki mom us ki arti utarti hain.mayank ko sehra pehnaya jata hain.

MM:mayu dekh beta...........aj teri nayi zindagi ki shuruwat hone ja rahin hain...............aj se ye zindagi sirf teri hi nahin balke nupur ki bhi hain............use hamesha khush rakhna,kabhi koi kami mehsoos na hone dena aur use dheeeeeeeeeeeeeer sara pyar dena😳 k use kabhi apne ghar valon ki kami mehsoos na hon.vo apna sab kuch sirf aur sirf tere liye chor kar a rahin hain.us ka dehan rakhna.

M:maa main pori koshish karon ga..................aur jahan tak rahin baat pyar ki tu pyar tu main nupur ko khud se bhi zayada karta hon😳............mere liye us ki khoshi hin sab kuch hain😊.

MM:jeeta rahein beta hamesha kush rahain.

mayank takes ashirwad from his parents.

IN CAR:

S(in nautanki):bro mujhe ashirwad do😆.

M:ashirwad?😕

S:han bro....................ashirwaad.

M:per kis liye sam?

S:kyunki aj meri tuition ka pehla din hain.

M:tuition?.........................tu theek tu hain na kahin sar pe koi cheez tu nahin giri😆.

S:main bhi theek hon aur mera sir bhi.............................vo kya hain na tuition lene se pehle teacher ka ashirwad le lena chahiye.

M:teacher?aur vo bhi main?.....................main tujhe kon i tuition de raha hon?😲

S:tum de nahin rahain bro.....................main le raha hon.

M:sam...........tu saaf saaf bataye ga kya hova?

S:dekho bro..................main ne soch liya hain aj se jo jo tum karon ge main vo sab seekhon ga.actually shadi se pehle aur baad k pyar main fark hota hain aur aj tumhari shadi hain..................main aj se hi experience lena shuru karon ga.ta ke shadi k baad mujhe koi pbl na hon.😊

M:dekh sam................aj k din tu mujhe baksh de mere bhai...................tu mujhe kyun pagal karne per tulla hain........................dekh aj meri shadi hain aur agar tu ne ye sab continue rakha tu main zaroor pagal hon jaon ga aur mujhe pori umeed hain k nupur k parents kisi pagal ko apni beti ka haath nahin dene vale😆.

S:bro main tu bas.....

M:shutup sam...................dekh muj per taras kha mere bhai.

suddenly car stops.

S TO DRRIVER:kya hove car kyun rook di?

DRIVER:sir vo dulhan ka ghar a geya.

mayank looks at samrat with his eyebrows up.

S:oh ghar a geya...................dekha mere saath waqt kese guzzar geya pta hi nahin chala.

mayank still looking at him.

S:kya hova bro ese kyun dekh rahain hon tum......

saying this he gets out of the car.mayank car se nikalta hain again sab kharein hote hain.maynk ki arti hoti hain aur rituals pore hone k baad mayank aur sab ander jate hain.😊

that's it for today.thanks all of u for such lovely comments.i have taken leap because i dont understand what should i do more in this?sorry 4 that .hope u all will enjoy this part.do comments and encourage me.it really helps me alot.luv u all

mahak

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Plzzzz continue yaar............Its just awesome

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