OS on current Sajan track - Page 2

Amaaaaazing OS Diya. U're not only my FF queen, but are also the OS queen now 🤗

Lovely OS Diya!! You described the situation perfectly, and I think, or at least I hope, Gunjan's reaction is shown as something like this. I really loved the simplicity of the whole scene......

The Mayank-Gunjan convo was so real. Mayank would have explained Gunjan exactly like this, and I never realised that this situation is so similar to the Suhaani-Samrat one. And obviously, the rest was amazing.

Loved the ending. How they both understand each other without saying a word. How she turns back while leaving... And the small smile on her lips in the end is the highlight for me.

Thank you so much for this. You write SO well. Loved it!!

thank you so much for an utmost beautiful piece of fiction it delighted me that you stayed true to the characters and their essence in the show am amazed at your amazing prose and writing indeed thanks once again for that wonderful treat would have posted a longer comment but have a meeting so must leave

Very nicely written as always.. Hats off to u! Lovd the OS! :)

Sum..

edi:
hey diya...first of all loadsssssssss of hugggggssss to u for this beautiful treat u have given to us🤗...cant tell u how it feels...wowwww mann i am again in sg heaven!!😍 😳
just luved the way u potrayed everything diya...and yes ofcourse the suhani angle was so befitting...just like gunjan lied to samrat for a single reason that she cares for him....samrat too lied for the same reason....and the best part u made the most perfect person say this...MAYANK...coz he always works on logics...and thats where he hits just perfectly!!
and the last scene...gosh i skipped a beat at that...i will not lie but u reminded me of the scene when gunjan gives her speech in the college very confidently and samrat smiles at her...and she after such a long time for the first time smiles back at him slightly😳....i just luveddd that scene...and after that its this....thnx soooooooooooo much diya for this lovely os....its simply veryyy BEAUTIFUL..👏 👏 👏


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Originally posted by: ar4evr

heyyy
awwwwsum os
i lovvvd it..
realy d cncpt was also interstng..😊

thanks, hun ... just want gunjan to stay on in Excel ...😃

Originally posted by: aarthi.ramani

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Diya 🤗

i dont have words even to reply now, speechless 😲👏,its so so beautiful so sajanish.😳😍

OMG want it to go exactly like this way each and every thing right from the resort Gunjan anger, Mayanks nods letting out so much, making her realise thru Suhani fiasco that what Samrat did was for her wellbeing.

The Gunjan determination to resign, her arguments, her battle between mind and heart through the FBs and then her decision of staying back....

Each one is so outstanding diya.. Exactly as we want in show.. loved how u kept that essence of Samrat not forcing anything on her ... god it reminded me of the old one where he convinces her to act in the movie..... And Gunjan being stubborn and mayank being the one to make her see thru... the change which Sam has brought thru SSC..

And in the end the Palat thing and Samrat s talk with his dude... And ones i would really want CVs to ape it exactly each and everything... i loved how u have used adhani here...😆😆

thanks so much, aarthi ... I know a lot of people want a SG lost in jungle track, but even if that happens, I dont see Sajan getting together so soon ... and i don't want it so soon either 😉 ... I want to see a mature Sam tackling a slowly melting Gunjan ... so for that she has to stay at Excel ...
Adanji kuch to achcha kar gaye 😆 ... the Suhani track and how Gunjan was the one to hide the truth from Samrat ... and I want a Palat ... I demand a Palat ... 😆 I want each of those small SGish touches back for their making up track ... 😳
thanks for liking it, aarthi!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: charmee_sammy

awwwwwwww diya🤗
awesome OS hun....really loved it...d smaller d cuter😛
and ur way of writing is too gud...
full of positiveness..i hope samrat reveals d truth himself in d show too.....
nd i love d 'dude' paret always..where samrat symbolizes to god..!!dats too unique...nd my fav😃

hey charmee ... from the precap, i hope sammy does reveal himself, and not wait for gunjan to find out from anywhere else ... and i love his 'thanks dude' too .. it's so sweet 😳
thanks for liking!

Originally posted by: mads

OMG !!!! this is BEYOND AMAZING !!! EXACTLY like we had imagined it to be ... sam not letting gunjan have her way when she is being extra stubborn .. telling her off when need be .. n its soo amazing how u made her see it via suhaani n sam n M is making her see it..its really really REALLY BEAUTIFUL !!!

wud cum back later wit detailed comment ... but thanks a TON for this .. 🤗 no matter whatever happens in the show now..I wud always always always cherish this .. its sooo beautiful !!!

n the best part is..they still arent together.. but ther is hope .. cuz she turns back n looks at him..n thats reason enuf for him to kno that she is getting there..somehow..n some day, she will b there completely..that place which is their home ..

love u for this diya !!! 🤗

awww, mads 🤗thanks for liking ... after ALL our discussions, this is just what I could visualise, and i'm so glad he seems to be telling gunjan himself in the precap ... the first step to a more mature firm sam ...
My first step was for Gunjan to stay back in Excel ... and not make up very soon ... 😆 ... let's what happens, then I might continue this ... but yes, there is always hope ... they're Sajan and they can never live apart ...

Originally posted by: myownarea

once a fan always a fan 😆 I like the way u write diya :)

Thanks so much, divya ... 😃 really sweet of you to comment here! Thanks for liking!