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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: aahana86

hello 🤗
hmm shd i say Your friend is delighted and hence jumped at the chance to have the first post here 😆😆 or as your agent i was scared you would fire me if i reported late and hence confirmed the first place possible here 🤣

Agent aahana, no worries, your job is still safe!!! 🤣

first of all i so hope u have this random urge more often 😃 cos it was amazing 👏

Diya that is simply the most beautiful OS i have read truly 👏
aww, thanks so much hon 😳 so glad you liked it!

hun the way you have dealt with the situation is so SaJanish and real .. i loved how you made use of AdhaNi here 😉😆😆 clearly an example so befitting with the situation in context - that of a lie
while I was writing, it just struck me - the similarities of the two situations ... like I said earlier, Adhani were useful ... somewhat ... 😆

loved how the whole way it turned up that despite of the hurt of a lie her heart made her see that he came in front of her on his own 😳 and mostly how still his smile is vital to her 😳
I really hope that happens ... and he unmasks himself on his own, without her finding out any other way ... the Synopsis already had me anxious, and the precap just made it worse ... but when I thought about it, I realised that is the best way for it to happen.

the whole Palat essence retained in the end 😍 awwieeee i loved it ❤️ and what a perfect closing with Sammy's flying kiss to his Dude 😉
aww, thanks again, aahana 🤗

Diya thank you for this ... Love your work as always hun 🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
wow... awesome amazing fantastic.... toooo goood.i just loved it.... i mean superb yaar.. it was so touching soo nice ssoo sweet. so janubale so sajanish.... and the way u have portrayed those feelings its mind blowing...... i mean u really one of the bestest writers...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
Diya..🤗 u wrote an OS after so long??😲 aww..I just love ur OSes too the same way I love ur FF !! U Rock Diya..love u for this !! Again u made me literally speechless with this OS too..such a beautiful one !! and must say it was completely SaJanish !!! I just hope CV's read this and show something like this..*fingers crossed for tonight's epi*
My fav. ones from this are Suhaani plot u put in..the palat and ofcourse the 'thanks dude' one as well..its so cute..loved it so much!! Thanks a ton for writing this lovely OS Diya !! I'm so glad after reading this.. 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
Amazing Diya👏👏👏👏
The whole OS was just great.Now this is what i call a perfect Sajan Scene⭐️
You are an amazing writer dear.The way you had described Sajan,s feelings and anger is just too good.You simply reminded me of the old sajan who use to be together as friends and then as lovers.

The incident of suhani you mentioned was the best point.From that incident she was able to relate herself with SAmrat,s postion at that time.And i love that palat scene in the end.It wsa really a sajanish one.
Lovely OS.
I always love reading these things from your side.
Love
Ash
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

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What An OS 👏, Truly Diya This Was Jus Outstanding, When It Comes To This Gorra Say Your Very Imaginative Your Ideas Are Always The BEST ! I Liked How Gunjan Didn't Shout At Him She Was Calm As Always 😆, This OS Was Meaningful As Well As Beautiful, The Situation Was Very Well Described And Her Feelings Towards Him STILL Shows She Loves Him ALOT !
Mayank-Gunjan Convo Was Really Sweet, Loved Him Explaining It To Her, It Was Realistic !
The End Was My Fav 😍, They Don't Need To Say Anything As Their Eyes Speak For Each Other,
i Love You For Including The 'Palat', We Havnt Had One Since Ages, And His Kiss Toward His Dude 😳 ! Love You And Thank You For Writing This For Us 🤗, It Made My Day ! Hope Something Like This Happens !
LoveYou: S a n i y a :) x
Edited by MoNayaKiDeewani - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
beautiful and fabulous os.......i loved it sooooo much
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
awesome os loved it fantastic
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
WOW! cant believe I missed this! Diya this is like bang on! soo SG! i'd be surprised if this didnt happen! lolzzz Everything was perfect and in character! Awesome writing!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Diya,The OS was great.I loved the FB dialouge used to convey the feeling.Hope Cv's take this as inspiration for their story. 👏 ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
Finally Made it...I mean read it 😆 ok now ...

Hallmarks..

Reference to context...Adhani and Esp THE MOVIE..you very well know how I felt about that..and I know you share the sentiments..Good arguments..

Mayank..and his approach..too close to character..Gunjan and her reaction...almost there 😆

Now the best part...the END...lovely..u know m a sucker for subtleties..and whats left to imagination...which of course in my mind is the Jordan of Key of K..messing around with her mind indulgently..

Concerns: Did you really think I would let it go 🤣

what was a hallmark is Also a concern..while I loved the argument.. I just could not picture Samrat saying it in this scenario..coz for one he doesnt command that equation with her yet..certainly not the authority..so while I could bring myself to relate to him say half of it like Its your take and I wont stop you.. I just couldn't see him bring the movie reference yet..he has been way too meek and calm with her..and dont see an about turn yet..but I do see him manipulate situations to advantage..and you of all ppl know now what I mean by it..and also step in for his responsibilities and show the real man he has becomes.. (Again hoping..)

Gunjan: almost the reaction you would expect...but you overlooked the real intention..of her being here..Ash and also that Mayank's the one who extended the offer..and Sam had nothing to do with it..So again I am hoping besides SSC her little time with the students and seeing their needs would also play a part in the decision.. n not be completely self absorbed (Again hoping)

All in all loved it..but you know me..my brain works overtime..while my heart hibernates..also that doesn;t stop me from acknowledging creative liberties and suspension of disbelief from my end.. thats the strength of your narrative.. 😉
Edited by sonali.19281 - 15 years ago

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