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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
😈 LD spot light fell on u 🤣 ..
u wld faint..and naughty gal from whre did u get those lines abt luv huh 😆 😛
on the whole it was lovely 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: afshanafreen

😈 LD spot light fell on u 🤣 ..
u wld faint..and naughty gal from whre did u get those lines abt luv huh 😆 😛
on the whole it was lovely 😉

kya karu dee.........real life mein toh ho nahi sakta....isliye ficitous hi sahi.........
And abt the love lines.......im very intelligent u knw......😆
but glad tht u like it........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
awwwwwwww the Arti Os was totally rocking !!
thanks for the pm

loads of love
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
awesomeee OS Komz!! it was so real...😍 loved every bit of it...keep writing more
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: KomaliciousXOMN


</div>kya karu dee.........real life mein toh ho nahi sakta....isliye ficitous hi sahi.........
<div>And abt the love lines.......im very intelligent u knw......😆

but glad tht u like it........





😆 ok
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
superb job
awesome os
kash k this happen!!!

thnx 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
Awesoommee!!! Sorry for the late reply :P
Komzz, aise ideas kaise tapakte hai tere dinagh mein :s
Anyways write more and keep writing!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: 2112ization

Awesoommee!!! Sorry for the late reply :P
Komzz, aise ideas kaise tapakte hai tere dinagh mein :s
Anyways write more and keep writing!

woh kya hai na ayeshu....free time mein mein sirf mayur/arti ko hi imagine karti rehti hun.........😆........and jab songs sunti hun tab bhi............tab hi aise ideas tapakte hai.😆.
Anyways.thnxx for liking it dear............and thnxx to every single people for appreciating my work.........🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
wowwwwwwwwwwwww...awesome part komal...kaasssssssshhhhhh aisa hota.....it would be like so so so wonderful and awesome yeah??
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Posted: 15 years ago
[Mayank & Nupur are having fight]
Mayank: Tumhare wajah se mujhe scholarship nahi mili...
Nupur: Mere wajah se?? Mayank maine kya kiya???
Mayank: Na toh mein pregnancy ki baat ko lekar pareshan hota or nahi mere haath se yeh scholarship jaati.
Nupur: Maine toh tumhe kabhi nahi kaha ki mein pregnant hun.....toh isme meri galti kaise hui?
Mayank: Bas mein or kuch nahi sunna cahta......
Nupur: Mayank dekho mein jhagda nahi karna cahti.....par..........
Mayank: Toh mat karo na maine bola hai.......pehle tumne mujhse meri scholarship le li or ab meri shaanti bhi leni hai kya?
Nupur: Mayank humare pyaar ke beech mein hum ot tum kaha se aagaya.....hum toh ek dusre ke liye jeetein the na....toh yeh hum tum......
Mayank: Nupur jab sapne dhoondle dikhayi padte hai toh hum or tum beech mein aa hi jaate hain..
Nupur: Toh thik hai....humare iss problem ka sirf ek hi solution hai hum kuch dino ke liye ek dusre se dur rehte hain....
Mayank: Jaise tum thik samjho.
[Nupur felt realy by his comment......She wantedhim to deny the solution but it breaks her heart when he gets agree with her........Tears were rolling down from her eyes......]
[Then Mayank left............]
[In the other side.....Samrat was driving crazily....He reached to the college but the body guard didnt let him to enter.]
Samrat: Mujhe andar jana hai.
Body guard: No sir, aap nahi ja sakte ander shooting chal rahi hai or sir ne kisi ko bhi enter karne s e mana kiya hai........
Samrat: Mein kuch sunna nahi cahta mujhe jana hai...
BG: Sir mainek aha na nahi.........
Samrat: Mujhe andar jane do mujhe meri GF se milna hai.....(get voilence)
Bg: Sir please...........
Samrat: Mujhe jane do..........
[He started fighting.....then the body guard threw him out...........Samrat get all in anger........There were two body guar ....one was handling Samrat and another went inside to inform Niel.]
[Niel and Gunjan are doing the scene but the BG interupt]
BG: Sir bahar problem hogayi hai.....
Niel: Kaisi problem?
BG: Koi ladka ander aane ki zid kar raha hai or khud ko Gunjan ji ka bf bol raha hai..
[Gunjan was shocked...........]
Gunjan: Samrat..........
[Niel and Gunjan ran outsdie to see.............Gunjan get shocked as she saw Smarat beating the BG very badly......He was behaving like a totally mad person...Gunjan sohutd 'Samrat' here eyes fill with tears........Smarat stopped himself as soon as he listen Gunjan's voice......]
[Niel and Gunjan came..........Niel hold the BG and tell the other BG ot take him to the hospital....Smarat is standing with all the anger......Niel started scolding him........]
Niel: Yeh kya pagalpan hai Samrat??? WOh marr jata toh?
Samrat: Mar jata toh mar jata......mujhe koi fark nahi padta .....uski himmat kaise hui mujhe rokne ki chashmish se milne se........
Niel: WOh ab tumhari chashmish nahi hai....woh ab Gunjan hai Gunjan the star.....
Samrat: Gunjan the star woh tumhare liye hogi.......Meri liye nahi....chalo chashmish....
[He hold Gunjan's hand to go...but Gunjan didnt move.......]
Samrat: Chashmish???
Gunjan: Nahi Samrat.....Mein tumhare saath nahi aaungi........
Samrat: Lekin kyun chashmish?
Gunjan: Mujhe yahan kaam hai..........
Samrat: Oh mein samajh gaya......tumhe bhi glamour ki hawa lag gayi hai.......
Gunjan: Samrat yeh tum kya bol rahe ho?
Samrat: Sahi bol raha hun.......Pata nahi chashmish yeh tumhe kya hogaya ha ijab se tum..(pause and looked at niel).......FOrget it...........
Gunjan: Samrat tum meri baat toh suno.......
[He left.......]
[Mayank is walking on the road......Lost in his thoughts.......Samrat was passing by he saw Mayank and stopped his car.....]
Samrat: Mayank.....
[Mayank looked at him.........]
Samrat: Tum yahan???
Mayank: Kuch nahi......
Samrat: Aao ghar chod deta hun......
Mayank: No thanks mein - mein ghar nahi ja raha hun.........
Samrat: Koi problem hai kya?
Mayank: Zindagi.........Zindagi hi sabse badi problem hai.......
Samrat: Sahi kaha dude......Zindagi hume itne dukh kyun deta hai?
Mayank: Pata nahi....? tum kyun pareshan ho?
[Samrat moved forward and sat on the side of the road..........]
Samrat: Pyaar ne sabko pareshan kar rakha hai...
[Mayank came and sat beside him]
Mayank: Sahi kaha......Yeh pyaar hota hi kyun hai.
Samrat: Aaj pehli baar maine apni chashmish ko khud se itna dur paya.........Woh mere samne hi thi pr phir bhi aisa laga ki bohot dur hai.........itni dur ki use mein chu bhi nahi sakta......Jabse chashmish ne iss nayi duniya mein kadam rakha hai tabse bohot alag alag behave karni lagi hai......mujhse sorry bulvaya jabki meri galti thi hi nhi.....Pata nahi kyun chashmish humare pyaar ke imtahan le rahi hai.......
Mayank: Nahi Samrat Gunjan nahi.......bhagwaan le raha hai...sirf tumhara hi nahi hum sabka..Par iss me tumhari bhi galti hai........
Samrat: Meri galti kaiise???
Mayank: Gunjan ne abhi abhi nayi duniya mein paon rakha hai.......tumhe usse support karna cahiye tha.......jaise tumne humesha kiya hai......
Samrat: Par Mayank.........
Mayank: Tum khud hi socho jo ladki tumhare bina reh nahi pati thi..........jo ladki khud se pehle tumhare baare mein sochti thi..........aaj tumne ussi ka saath chod diya........jab tum jail mein the woh gunjan hi thi jisne tumhe sabse zyada tumhe support kiya tha...or tumne use hi chod diya akele un rahon pe jahan uska koi apna nahihai....
Samrat flashback every moment he shared with gunjan........]
Samrat: Tum sahi keh rahe ho Mayank....Mujhe chashmish se baat karni hogi........by the way tumhe scholarship jeeta
Mayank: Nahi......
Samrat: Oh........
Mayank: Nupur ne jeeta.
Samrat: Nupur??/ oh wow thts a gr8 news.....tum toh bohot khush hoge.(smiling)
Mayank: Hmmmmmmmm......(sadly)
Samrat; Par tum khush lag toh nahi rahe ho.......kya baat hai Mayank???
Mayank: Nupur mere sapne kaise jee skati hai.........mein iss scholarship ke liye kitna mehnat kar raha tha..........or jeeta koun Nupur........
Samrat: Tohhhhhh?
Mayank: Toh yeh Samrat.......Nupur mere sapne kyun pure kar rahi hai.......mujhe accha nahi lagta jab koi or mere sapne pure karta hai.......
Samrat: Nupur koi or nahi hai woh tumhari patni hai...........tumhara pyaar hai..........
Mayank: Par Samrat...........
Samrat: Mayank tum bhool gayi woh din jab Nupur ne apna sab kuch chod diya tha sirf or sirf tumhare liye........Nupur khud se pehle tumhare baare mein sochti hai.....agar tumhe woh dekhe na toh uska din accha nahi jata...shayad tumhe nahi pata par maine uski aankhon mein tumse dur rehna ka dard dekha hai........jab tum puri raat bahar the tab ek bhi aisa pal nahi tha jise nupur ne enjoy kiya ho.......woh party mein bhi ukhdi ukhdi hui thi.....iss tension mein thi ki tum thik toh ho.........ab tumhi socho Mayan kya aisi ladki tumhara bura cahegi..........
Mayank: Baat yeh nahi hai Samrat baat mere sapno ki hai.........
Samrat: Sapne..........Kya tumne yeh socha hoga.....ki usse kitna bura laga hoga jab uska sapna usiki aankhon ke samne uski behen jee rahi thi..........woh sapna jo usne bachpan se dekha tha...woh koi or jee raha tha.......woh fame.......woh har ek chiz jiske liye woh sapne dkeha karti thi woh koi or jee raha tha........par phir bih yeh sab janne ke baad bhi usne uffff tak nahi kaha........oolta usne apni behen ko support kiya....uska confidence level badhaya.....or jahan tak baat hai tumhare sapno ki.............toh nupur unhe chura nahi rah ithi.......unhe pura kar tumhe khush karna cahti thi........woh cahit thi ki tum khush rahon......woh cahti thi ki tumhe kabih apne life mein kuch regret na karna pade........or khashkar tumlogon ka pyaar.........woh nahi cahti thi ki tumhe koi looser kahe.........woh bas ek chiz cahti thi.....or woh hai tumhari khushi.......bas or kuch nahi.........Toh yeh chori thodi na hua......yeh toh pyaar hua na........or pyaar mein kabhi hum ot tum nahi dkeha jata....pyaar mein sirf pyaar dekha jata hai.............
[While hearing the last line he flashback the moment where Nupur has said the line.]
[Mayank realise his fault........]
Mayank: Tum sahi keh rahe ho Smarat....mujhe Nupur se aise baat nahi karna cahiye tha.......Mein usse milne jaa raha hun.......
Samrat: Or mein chashmish se.......
Mayank: Samrat strange na ki hum khud ki toh life nahi suljha paate par dusron ki life jhat se sooljha dete hai..........
Samrat: Isse hi toh understanding kehte hai..........
[They smiled and left.........]
[Nupur is packing for Delhi........Nupur has informed the company that she want to leave for Delhi now........The company agree with her and booked an air ticket for Delhi........]
[Nupur is packing herstuff......then she took the photoframe of her and Mayank........]
Nupur : Sab kuch kitna badal gaya hai Mayank.......Bhagwan pata nahi humare saath hi aisa kyun karta hai..........kher chodo..
[She put the photoframe in her briefcase..........ANd locked it.......]
[She was just to leave but then ................]
[Mayu enters the house.........And saw the lights off.......He put on the lgihts.............And the saw tht the house was empty......Nupur was not there........He searched for her everywhere.....then he realsie that she left..........]
Mayank: Kyun Nupur tum mujhe kyun chod kar chali gayi...? Aakhir kyun??? Kya mein itna bura tha.........? Then he saw a letter in the table.......He sat on the chiar and open the letter....it was from Nupur......]
Letter........
Mayank mein janti hun tum mujhse baat nah ikarna cahte par mien sirf ek baat batana cahti hun ki mein Delhi ja rahi hun Scholarship ke liye......Mein janti hun tumhe yeh pasand nahi aayega....par tumhare sapno ko mein aise adhure nahi chod sakti.........Mujhe maaf karna agar mujhse koi galti hui ho.......Mera vishwas karo mein tumhare sapne chinna nahi chati thi.........mein to unhe pura karna cahti thi sirf tumhare liye............
Or haan khana fridge mein rakha hai kha lena.....or zada der jaagna mat....
Mein tumhe miss karungi..........
Tumhari
Nupur........
[Mayank flet realy bad.......Tears were rolling from his eyes.......]
Mayank: Maine bohot der kar di............😭
[In the other side......Gunjan is crying and Niel is consiling her...............]
Niel: Gunjan rone se kuch nahi hoga.......Smarat ko jana tha or woh chala gaya......Ab bhool jao usse.....
Gunjan: Kiase bhool jaun Niel.........Maine usse pyaar kiya hai or yeh koi khel nahi hai.........woh mujhse aise kaise baat kar sakta hai??
Niel: Shayad woh tumhe kabhi samajh hi nahi paya.......
Gunjan: Aisi baat nahi hai......woh mujhse bohot pyaar karta hai....par pata nahi usse aajkal kya hogaya hai.......woh aisa kyun kar raha hai Niel kya mujhse koi galti ho gayi hai kya??/Bolo na Niel.............
[Niel hold her into his arms,.............]
Niel: Nahi Gunjan tumse koi galti nahi hui hai..........tum sahi ho.........
Gunjan: Mein usse bohot pyaar karti hun.......mein nahi jee sakti uske bina..........I love him.....Niel...thank god tum mere saath ho varna meintoot jati.
[Samrat was listening .............He flet very bad while hearing the last line she said.......Tears came out from his eyes.........He turned back........Try to control his tears but cant........]
Samrat: Maine bohot der kardi.........😭
The End............
Hoep you'll like it.........
And do comment guys.........
And guys dont worry i'll try to write the secong happy ending part..😃
Edited by KomaliciousXOMN - 15 years ago

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