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hello ppl ....am posting a small gunur scene d way i perceive it should have happened yest.
I didnt like gunjan's way of talking to nupur and neither nupur's way of demanding gunjan not to goon date without explaining. I think their inherent characteristics the way we have seen so far does not gel well with the way they portrayed the two characters yest. Frankly i have always been a big fan of their sisterly bond and d way each one complements the other, so it was a lil hard for me to digest yesterdays scene. Where Gunjan raised her voice to show her protectiveness yesterday for sam I wonder why she never did that when bui tried to talk bad about samrat or bauji was pushing nupur into a marriage against her choice. The point that Gunjan decided to stand up for her loved one should have been portrayed right from the start and that wud have shpaed her character like that and the fact that she always boldly stands up for her loved ones would have made us believe n convince us of the tone she used with nupur yesterday. this is jus my pv, so pls no offense to neone
Similarly d way Nupur demanded that Gunjan listen to her without telling her concern was way out of track. Nupur has always been an instantaneous character and would speak first n then think so why did she not voice her concern and instead talk in riddles to her own little sister -be it pointing out she's siding bauji or going on date with samrat.
So all this made me imagine of a nice lil pyaar bhara confrontation bet d lovable sisters (gunjan still defends samrat in my scene but in her style) and here goes the same. it starts when nupur goes in search of gunjan from locker room
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Kya Di jijaji ko dhund rahi ho
"woh sab chod gunjan yeh bata tu aaj samrat ke saath date pe ja rahi hai kya
blushing profusely gunjan replies " haan di"
nahi aaj tuje date pe jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai
shocked gunjan looks up n asks in a timid voice "magar kyu di, mai kyu nahi samrat ke saath date pe ja sakti?"
acha tu ab itni badi ho gayi hai ki apni di se ulta sawal kar rahi hai....tu jaanti bhi hai tu kya karne ja rahi hai?
gunjan hurt by sister's tone n now with sheen of tears in her eyes n lump in her throat says"nahi di mai tumse ulta sawal nahi kar rahi hun, mai bas itna jaane ki koshish kar rahi hun ki tumhare mana karne ki wajah kya hai, tumhari choti aur ladli behen hone ke naate itna haq to bannta hai ki mai wajah jaan saku".
by now nupur is melted and is sad n hurt that she has unknowingly hurt he lil sister with d harsh tone "dekh gunjan mai jaanti hun tuje mai jo bol rahi hun acha nahi lag rah but mai teri bhalai chahti hun, mai nahi chahti ki tu samrat ke pyar me itna badal jaaye ki apni pehchan khode"
gunjan gives her a puzzle look. "Han janti hun ki pyar ke rang me dhalna bahut acha lagta hai magar itna bhi nahi ki hum apna astitva kho de. Muje tere date pe jaane se koi aitraaz nahi hai magar samrat ka woh gft pehenke jaane me aitraaz hai. samrat kaise aise gift de sakta hai tuje.....aur yeh jaante hue ki tu kitni seedhi saadhi ladki hai.....kya woh suhani ko aise halter neck waale dress pehne dega?...nahi na tho wo tujse kaise aise expectations rakh sakta hai?...nupur is really red with red now and trying to calm down as she cannot simply withstand anybody taking advantage of her lil sister and will fight anybody who tries to be it mayank or be it samrat or anyone in d world
gunjan totally shell shocked and confused beyond her understandings gasps " gift...halter neck dress...samrat?...di tum yeh kya keh rahi ho mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai....samrat ne toh mujhe "S" initial wale pendant ke saath juda ek platinum chain present kiya hai....tum kya bol rahi ho mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha"
nupur is totally dismayed "toh woh black halter neck dress jo girls locker room me rakha woh kya hai, "for my princess" likha tha uspe...samrat ne mujse kudh kaha tha ki usne woh gift girls locker room me rakha hai"
"di kaha tha par samrat ne irada badal diya aur usne khud mujhe woh chain pehnaya rest room me thodi der pehle. woh joh dress tumne dekha woh kisi aur ka hai." (nupur is totally bewildered how she cud have gone so wrong n regrets instantly for mistaking n doubting samrat's intentions.)
"di dukh toh is baat ka hai ki tumne samrat ko itna galat samjha...di yad hai jab tum ghar se bhag gayi thi toh wapas tumhe wohi ghar laya kyunki woh nahi chahta tha ki bauji aur tumhari izzat par koi ungli uthaye, bhala woh samrat mujhse kaise aise ummed rakh sakta hai"
(nupur is totally ashmed of the mistake and gunjan's reminder burns her even more in shame....she remembers more than anything samrat has been such a dear friend ....chahe woh adhiraj se peecha chudaewala episode ho, ya mayank ke saath galatfaimiyian door karne ki baat ho yaar phir mayank aur meri shaadi ka kissa ho.)
the turmoil of her father's rejection, gunjan not siding her n on top of it not trusting samrat creates a havoc in her mind , tears start pouring from her eyes and d intensity of her guilt and shame overwhelms her and escapes in d the forms of a sob
"gun gunjan mai kitni buri hoon na , tunmhara boyfriend hai woh toh doosri baat hai magar maine apne us us dost ko go ga-galat samja jisne zzzindagi ki har katin mo mod pe me mera ssath nibaya....mai bahut buri hun gunjan, pehle bauji ka dil dukhaya, kal tera dil tod diya aur aur aaj apne pyar dost ka bharosa todh diya.....bbhagwan mujhe kabhi ma maaf nahi karenge...ssamrat ne yeh baat sunli hoti tttoh woh kya soochega mere baare me...mai kitni galat hun ( she is talking amidst crying n hence trembling n stuttering)
(gunjan is immediately heart broken to see her sister feeling so bad n woh bhi rone lagti hai)
"di tum kaise buri ho sakti di....tum to mere wajood ka ek hissa ho di....tum buri kaise ho sakti ho...(gunjan thinks back to past briefly) ".mujhe maa ke baare zyaada kuch yad nahi hai di magar bachpan se maine maki ki chavi tumhare pyaar me paaya hai,woh pyaar aur mamta se bara meri di ka dil bura kaise ho sakta....jab bachpan me sab bache mujhe chedte the aur mai apne daar ke karan saham jaati thi, un bacho ke saath mere liye ladnewali meri protective di buri kaise ho sakti,(gunjan holds nupur 's shoulders n looks into her eyes, ) tears are now flowing freely from both their eyes," jab samrat sheena se pyaar kartahai jaanke mai toot gayi thi, mujhe apne pyaar se sambhalne wali di galat kaise ho sakti hai.....jab samrat ko tumne mere pyaar ka ehasaas dilane ki khoshish ki thi, mere ehsaas aur pyaar ko banaye rakhne ki himmat dene waali woh di kaise galat ho sakti hai...nahi di tum buri yah galat nahi ho....tum bas ek galat faimi ka shikar thi....aur muje bilkul bura nahi laga aur na hi samrat ko bhi lagta kyunki use bhi maalum chal jaata ki iske peeche kitna pyar bhara, caring, protective di ka dil chup hai....mai bahut khush naseeb hun di ki muje aisi di mili hai".....(luks up to god/sky n prays with both hands ) "thank u god,...aapki yeh gift main zindagi bhar sambhalke rakhungi..."
(amidst free flow of tears nupur says) "gunjan tu jaanti hai tu world ki sabse best sister hai, tu nahi hoti toh yeh zindagi mere liye kuch mayine nahi rakhti,mujhe maaf karde gunjan kal bhi maine tera dil dukhaya aur aaj yeh misunderstanding....woh kya hai na mere ko tere unconditional love ki aadat ho chuki hai... tera pyaar, understanding mere wajood ka aham hissa ban chuka hai...bachpan se leke abtak mai shaayad zindagi me mile problems ko kabhi paar nahi kar pati agar tera saath nahi ho tha toh.....isliye mai bahut hurt ho gayi thi jab maine suna ki tu bhi muje aur mayank ko galat samajti hai bauji ki tarah....duniya, kyun bauji ka nazariya aur berukhapan bhi mai seh sakti hun, magar meri apni behen,mera wajood mujhe galat samraj rah hai jab pata chala ....mai toh toot hi gayi thi gunjan...laga ab duniya me kiso safai dekhe kya faida.....kisko kuch samjake kya karoongi"
(gunjan is shocked that nupur has misunderstood her totally, in hurry to convince her, she starts panicking and talking) "par di...par di...mai maine aap ko kbhi galat samja hi nahi....aap apne jagah har modh pe sahi thi, mai bas yahi kah rahi ti ki ki bbauji ka bhi apna ek nazariya hai....aur mai apni di ko galat kaise kaise samaj sakti hun di...tumne yeh yeh soch bhi kaise liya di??"
"jaanti hun, jaanti hun gunjan (wiping hers and gunjan's tears away n bringing a beautiful smile on her lips n sparkiling shine to her eyes) but ab muje koi shikwa nahi hai, mai apni saari galat famiyan door kar chuki hun, mai bhi kaisi paagal hun by god, apni choti si behen ko galat samajne chali.....jisko mujme koi galati aur kami hi nazar nahi aati"....(nupur gives gunjan a tight hus for 5 seconds which gunja reciprocates in equal measure) ...
(nupur looks up n says) "chal bas kar ab yeh rona dhona, bygod tu toh soap serials ki heroines ki tarah rulati hai "
"di pehle tum toh rona bandh karo (she wipes nupurs tears which r still flowing amidst her smiling face)....aur jaldi se muje pyaari si smile do"
(nupur widens her lips n smiles sweetly ) "le kaafi hai.....bygod ab baatein hi karte rahna hai ya chalna bhi hai..... hum toh late ho rahe hai jaldi chal, tujhe date ke liye bhi toh taiyaar karna hai, dekna aaj samrat tuje dekhe fulttoos mast aur pagal ho jaayega aur haan boldeti hun woh behosh ho gaya tho mai uski zimmedar nahi hun bygod (gunjan is blushing and turns a shade of pink)
nupur says "chale ab (nestles her hand with gunjan's)...gunjan nods
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n hence we all await a beautiful sajan date scene amidst all hullaho of gunjan makeover by d lovely sisters.
i know it became a bit too long, as usual got carried away while imagining n writing.....but pls pls do letme know frankly what do u guys think of my imagination??
cheers,
Meenakshi
I didnt like gunjan's way of talking to nupur and neither nupur's way of demanding gunjan not to goon date without explaining. I think their inherent characteristics the way we have seen so far does not gel well with the way they portrayed the two characters yest. Frankly i have always been a big fan of their sisterly bond and d way each one complements the other, so it was a lil hard for me to digest yesterdays scene. Where Gunjan raised her voice to show her protectiveness yesterday for sam I wonder why she never did that when bui tried to talk bad about samrat or bauji was pushing nupur into a marriage against her choice. The point that Gunjan decided to stand up for her loved one should have been portrayed right from the start and that wud have shpaed her character like that and the fact that she always boldly stands up for her loved ones would have made us believe n convince us of the tone she used with nupur yesterday. this is jus my pv, so pls no offense to neone
Similarly d way Nupur demanded that Gunjan listen to her without telling her concern was way out of track. Nupur has always been an instantaneous character and would speak first n then think so why did she not voice her concern and instead talk in riddles to her own little sister -be it pointing out she's siding bauji or going on date with samrat.
So all this made me imagine of a nice lil pyaar bhara confrontation bet d lovable sisters (gunjan still defends samrat in my scene but in her style) and here goes the same. it starts when nupur goes in search of gunjan from locker room
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Kya Di jijaji ko dhund rahi ho
"woh sab chod gunjan yeh bata tu aaj samrat ke saath date pe ja rahi hai kya
blushing profusely gunjan replies " haan di"
nahi aaj tuje date pe jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai
shocked gunjan looks up n asks in a timid voice "magar kyu di, mai kyu nahi samrat ke saath date pe ja sakti?"
acha tu ab itni badi ho gayi hai ki apni di se ulta sawal kar rahi hai....tu jaanti bhi hai tu kya karne ja rahi hai?
gunjan hurt by sister's tone n now with sheen of tears in her eyes n lump in her throat says"nahi di mai tumse ulta sawal nahi kar rahi hun, mai bas itna jaane ki koshish kar rahi hun ki tumhare mana karne ki wajah kya hai, tumhari choti aur ladli behen hone ke naate itna haq to bannta hai ki mai wajah jaan saku".
by now nupur is melted and is sad n hurt that she has unknowingly hurt he lil sister with d harsh tone "dekh gunjan mai jaanti hun tuje mai jo bol rahi hun acha nahi lag rah but mai teri bhalai chahti hun, mai nahi chahti ki tu samrat ke pyar me itna badal jaaye ki apni pehchan khode"
gunjan gives her a puzzle look. "Han janti hun ki pyar ke rang me dhalna bahut acha lagta hai magar itna bhi nahi ki hum apna astitva kho de. Muje tere date pe jaane se koi aitraaz nahi hai magar samrat ka woh gft pehenke jaane me aitraaz hai. samrat kaise aise gift de sakta hai tuje.....aur yeh jaante hue ki tu kitni seedhi saadhi ladki hai.....kya woh suhani ko aise halter neck waale dress pehne dega?...nahi na tho wo tujse kaise aise expectations rakh sakta hai?...nupur is really red with red now and trying to calm down as she cannot simply withstand anybody taking advantage of her lil sister and will fight anybody who tries to be it mayank or be it samrat or anyone in d world
gunjan totally shell shocked and confused beyond her understandings gasps " gift...halter neck dress...samrat?...di tum yeh kya keh rahi ho mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai....samrat ne toh mujhe "S" initial wale pendant ke saath juda ek platinum chain present kiya hai....tum kya bol rahi ho mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha"
nupur is totally dismayed "toh woh black halter neck dress jo girls locker room me rakha woh kya hai, "for my princess" likha tha uspe...samrat ne mujse kudh kaha tha ki usne woh gift girls locker room me rakha hai"
"di kaha tha par samrat ne irada badal diya aur usne khud mujhe woh chain pehnaya rest room me thodi der pehle. woh joh dress tumne dekha woh kisi aur ka hai." (nupur is totally bewildered how she cud have gone so wrong n regrets instantly for mistaking n doubting samrat's intentions.)
"di dukh toh is baat ka hai ki tumne samrat ko itna galat samjha...di yad hai jab tum ghar se bhag gayi thi toh wapas tumhe wohi ghar laya kyunki woh nahi chahta tha ki bauji aur tumhari izzat par koi ungli uthaye, bhala woh samrat mujhse kaise aise ummed rakh sakta hai"
(nupur is totally ashmed of the mistake and gunjan's reminder burns her even more in shame....she remembers more than anything samrat has been such a dear friend ....chahe woh adhiraj se peecha chudaewala episode ho, ya mayank ke saath galatfaimiyian door karne ki baat ho yaar phir mayank aur meri shaadi ka kissa ho.)
the turmoil of her father's rejection, gunjan not siding her n on top of it not trusting samrat creates a havoc in her mind , tears start pouring from her eyes and d intensity of her guilt and shame overwhelms her and escapes in d the forms of a sob
"gun gunjan mai kitni buri hoon na , tunmhara boyfriend hai woh toh doosri baat hai magar maine apne us us dost ko go ga-galat samja jisne zzzindagi ki har katin mo mod pe me mera ssath nibaya....mai bahut buri hun gunjan, pehle bauji ka dil dukhaya, kal tera dil tod diya aur aur aaj apne pyar dost ka bharosa todh diya.....bbhagwan mujhe kabhi ma maaf nahi karenge...ssamrat ne yeh baat sunli hoti tttoh woh kya soochega mere baare me...mai kitni galat hun ( she is talking amidst crying n hence trembling n stuttering)
(gunjan is immediately heart broken to see her sister feeling so bad n woh bhi rone lagti hai)
"di tum kaise buri ho sakti di....tum to mere wajood ka ek hissa ho di....tum buri kaise ho sakti ho...(gunjan thinks back to past briefly) ".mujhe maa ke baare zyaada kuch yad nahi hai di magar bachpan se maine maki ki chavi tumhare pyaar me paaya hai,woh pyaar aur mamta se bara meri di ka dil bura kaise ho sakta....jab bachpan me sab bache mujhe chedte the aur mai apne daar ke karan saham jaati thi, un bacho ke saath mere liye ladnewali meri protective di buri kaise ho sakti,(gunjan holds nupur 's shoulders n looks into her eyes, ) tears are now flowing freely from both their eyes," jab samrat sheena se pyaar kartahai jaanke mai toot gayi thi, mujhe apne pyaar se sambhalne wali di galat kaise ho sakti hai.....jab samrat ko tumne mere pyaar ka ehasaas dilane ki khoshish ki thi, mere ehsaas aur pyaar ko banaye rakhne ki himmat dene waali woh di kaise galat ho sakti hai...nahi di tum buri yah galat nahi ho....tum bas ek galat faimi ka shikar thi....aur muje bilkul bura nahi laga aur na hi samrat ko bhi lagta kyunki use bhi maalum chal jaata ki iske peeche kitna pyar bhara, caring, protective di ka dil chup hai....mai bahut khush naseeb hun di ki muje aisi di mili hai".....(luks up to god/sky n prays with both hands ) "thank u god,...aapki yeh gift main zindagi bhar sambhalke rakhungi..."
(amidst free flow of tears nupur says) "gunjan tu jaanti hai tu world ki sabse best sister hai, tu nahi hoti toh yeh zindagi mere liye kuch mayine nahi rakhti,mujhe maaf karde gunjan kal bhi maine tera dil dukhaya aur aaj yeh misunderstanding....woh kya hai na mere ko tere unconditional love ki aadat ho chuki hai... tera pyaar, understanding mere wajood ka aham hissa ban chuka hai...bachpan se leke abtak mai shaayad zindagi me mile problems ko kabhi paar nahi kar pati agar tera saath nahi ho tha toh.....isliye mai bahut hurt ho gayi thi jab maine suna ki tu bhi muje aur mayank ko galat samajti hai bauji ki tarah....duniya, kyun bauji ka nazariya aur berukhapan bhi mai seh sakti hun, magar meri apni behen,mera wajood mujhe galat samraj rah hai jab pata chala ....mai toh toot hi gayi thi gunjan...laga ab duniya me kiso safai dekhe kya faida.....kisko kuch samjake kya karoongi"
(gunjan is shocked that nupur has misunderstood her totally, in hurry to convince her, she starts panicking and talking) "par di...par di...mai maine aap ko kbhi galat samja hi nahi....aap apne jagah har modh pe sahi thi, mai bas yahi kah rahi ti ki ki bbauji ka bhi apna ek nazariya hai....aur mai apni di ko galat kaise kaise samaj sakti hun di...tumne yeh yeh soch bhi kaise liya di??"
"jaanti hun, jaanti hun gunjan (wiping hers and gunjan's tears away n bringing a beautiful smile on her lips n sparkiling shine to her eyes) but ab muje koi shikwa nahi hai, mai apni saari galat famiyan door kar chuki hun, mai bhi kaisi paagal hun by god, apni choti si behen ko galat samajne chali.....jisko mujme koi galati aur kami hi nazar nahi aati"....(nupur gives gunjan a tight hus for 5 seconds which gunja reciprocates in equal measure) ...
(nupur looks up n says) "chal bas kar ab yeh rona dhona, bygod tu toh soap serials ki heroines ki tarah rulati hai "
"di pehle tum toh rona bandh karo (she wipes nupurs tears which r still flowing amidst her smiling face)....aur jaldi se muje pyaari si smile do"
(nupur widens her lips n smiles sweetly ) "le kaafi hai.....bygod ab baatein hi karte rahna hai ya chalna bhi hai..... hum toh late ho rahe hai jaldi chal, tujhe date ke liye bhi toh taiyaar karna hai, dekna aaj samrat tuje dekhe fulttoos mast aur pagal ho jaayega aur haan boldeti hun woh behosh ho gaya tho mai uski zimmedar nahi hun bygod (gunjan is blushing and turns a shade of pink)
nupur says "chale ab (nestles her hand with gunjan's)...gunjan nods
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n hence we all await a beautiful sajan date scene amidst all hullaho of gunjan makeover by d lovely sisters.
i know it became a bit too long, as usual got carried away while imagining n writing.....but pls pls do letme know frankly what do u guys think of my imagination??
cheers,
Meenakshi
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