SaJan SS Together Forever Update on Pg 10! Do read

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Posted: 15 years ago
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A big Hi from me to all my friends and readers! Ok. Let's just get to the point. (I could continue to blabber forever. See! I'm already going off topic!). Some of u may know that i have just finished writing an SS called 'Main Gunjan Aur Woh'. I also got a lot of requests in the thread asking me to write another SS. And frankly speaking, I really enjoyed writing my last short story. So I figured I might as well write another one! Anyhow, in the show, there are a lot of tracks which have not yet been explored so I thought I could use those tracks in my SS. But seriously, I don't know if it will be any good or not, so plz read it and comment! Thx a lot guys!

The only thing I heard was gunjan's pained scream. My heart thudded in my chest. I was scared to turn around...afraid of what I might find. I tried to find the courage in myself to turn. I grimaced as I heard another scream. this time, she called out my name.
'Samraaat!! Aaaa!'
I turned abruptly. There she was, writhering on the ground in profound pain. I dropped my cell. My hands shook profusely.
' Chashmishhh!!!' I hollered. I ran to her side. I was numb. I kept hearing the faded sound of her scream in my mind. I couldn't feel anything. Only the neverending stabbing in my heart was consistent.
I kneeled down beside her. She was shedding blood incessantly.
The driver who had caused her accident, pushed his way through the gossiping crowd.
'Hatho! Hatho! Jaldi se!'
He bent down beside me and shook her firmly as I sobbed uncontrollably.
There was a part of me that was in great fury. Why did such things only happen to my Chashmish???! I wished that I had had the accident instead of her.
My blood boiled as I saw the man shaking Gunjan, trying to wake her.What right did he have? He was the one who had hurt her in the first place!! I stood up and grabbed his collar. I felt all the blood rush to my face.
'Agar usse kuch ho gayya na, tho bhagwaan bhi nahi jaanta ke tumhaara kya haal hoga'
He seemed shocked. Good. Very good. No one hurt my Chashmish and got away with it.
I bent down next to her again.
'Chashmish...please...utho na? Please Chashmish...mere saat aisa mat karna! Main tumhaare bina jee nahi paonga!'
She was a deathly still. I break into sobbs once more. Suddenly, I felt someone's warm hand on my shoulder. It was Suhaani, my...my sister.
'Bhai, tum chinta mat karo. Gunjan ko kuch nahi hoga. Maine ambulance ke liye phone kar diya hai. Woh abhi aate hi honge.'
Before I know it, I have wrapped my arms around my sister.
'Dekho na Suhaani?! Chashmish uth nahi rahi hai. Woh mujhse baat bhi nahi kar rahi hai. Please usko bolo na ke mujhse baat kare? Usko uthao na? Please Suhaani?! Kuch karo na?'
I had never felt so emotional inmy life. Not even when my parents had left me. Not even when I lost Suhaani. Never. I had a sinking feeling in my Stomach. I needed Gunjan. I needed her.
'Bhai, apne aap ko sambhaalo. Maine kaha na? Gunjan ko kuch nahi hoga. Main hoon na tumhaare saat?'
Somehow, her words didn't convince me. A feeling of sheer dread wrapped around me. I didn't want to lose Gunjan. I couldn't. We were meant to be Together Forever.
That's it for now! I know it was kind of stupid but please comment to let me know what u thought of it! I will only continue if u guys are interested in reading more!!
Edited by dreamer2305 - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Its really amazing....Please continue soon.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey .. thanks for the pm .. great start and cant wait for you to write more ... x
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey!!!
Great start!!!
I hope nothing happens to Gunjan
Continue Soon!!!!!
And add me to ur PM list
THANKS!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG brilliant! Lol what a great, emotional, touching and sweet beginning dear. Definitely update soon. Loved how you expressed every single feeling of Samrat.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it ws amazinggggggg...
awesomeeeee... fabulous..
luved it to d core..
pllzzzzzzzzzz continue soon..
n pm me wen u continue dear...

love
jyotika
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very good start. Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wonderful yaar 👏👏👏 quite an intense start 😲 pls UD soon & pm me 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this sounds supurb (sorry for my spelling mistakes)
I cant wait to red more of this ff it's totaly awesome.
👍🏼👏
oh and so far i rate this ff⭐️
and "mein gunjan aur voh"⭐️
P.S. thanx 4 the PM XD
Edited by miiroxxsweet - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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reserved. will read later and comment. thanks for starting a new one. i love hw u put different pov to the tracks.

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