~*Mayur Paradise #133*~Mit JaaNi he Yeh Dooriyan - Page 45

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Posted: 15 years ago
mera scene to poora one shot banta ja raha hai 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Sorry just realized had to go bye sorry aj!

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello Everyone!!
How are you?
What is the discussion today?
Edited by Gaganjot.S - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
continue -
mayank get up an looks at her for the first time since she came in. he thinks to himself....she is looking so beautiful....!!!!
smiles an takes her hand in his....
M - thanks nupur
N - kisliye mayank
M - mere poore din ki thakan 10 min. mein nikalne ke liye...
nupur blushes....
he sits next to her quitely still holding her hand.
N- tumne din bhar mein kuch khaya mayank.
M - mujhe bhook nahi hai nupur.
N - mayank main abhi tumhare liye kuch le kar aati hun....
M - nahi yahin baitho mere pass...
N - nahi mayank pehle kuch kha lo fir baithenge.
M - tum banaogi (an gives a sarcastic smile)
N - haan main hi banaugi....aur tumhe khana bhi padega...and goes into the kitchen....
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Posted: 15 years ago
ok ye scenes kuch zyada hi lambe ho gaye 😆
sorry for torturing u guys....kya karoon mood ban gaya....aajkal show par to kuch dekhne ko milta nahi... 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi gagan
we r just writing romantic scenes on MN 😆
Edited by muskan19 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Anthara and Muskan!!!!
oh i see
Mayur scene.. i am just going to read then ROFL
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Posted: 15 years ago

Is AJ here or gone??

I made something for her and the all the mayurians who had requested a sig on the rain scene after their confession... last time i was on paradise
I hope you all like it ..
i tried my best...but please feel free to let me know if you all didnt like it.. i can try to make another one 😆 ...
Edited by Gaganjot.S - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
it's awesome gagan......beautiful!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok muskan...AJ...tumse inspire hoke maine bhi likh dala...
here is what I imagine for next part...
Nupur and gang reaches mumbai. Mayank goes to college and tells his professor that he's looking for a part-time job to help his mother and asks for any on-campus job that he can do. Professor gives him someone's contact and he leaves rightaway. He's desperate to see Nupur in college...but he decides that duty comes first...and leaves...he misses Nupur a lot...wants badly to see her smile...but decides that he'll come back after meeting the contact person.
Nupur doesn't go to college...she wants to avoid Mayank as she does not have courage to face him...she makes up a reason that she's not feeling well and wants to take rest...gang goes to college...they meet Mayank in college...he's on his way to somewhere...he sees the gang...but doesn't see Nupur...asks them where is Nupur? they tell him that she's not feeling well. He get worried for her. Dia asks Mayank why he left Morena all of a sudden...Mayank tells her the whole story...she gets surprised...tells Mayanks what Nupur had told them...Mayank understands why Nupur told them that they are seperated...he knows...that she is shattered...she didn't get his letter...she's thinking that he left her...he understands why she told them they broke up....he understands why she didn't come to college...his eyes get watery...he says bye to the gang...
Mayank's mind is not into searching for a job anymore...he's too disturbed...is not able to think of anything but Nupur...he knows what she must be feeling...what she must be going through....decides to go to her house...
A maid opens the door...Nupur is in her room...looking through the window outside...lost...thinking about Mayank...her tears rolling down her cheeks...she lets them out...quietly...Mayank enters the room...sees Nupur from behind...her tears are shining in the sunlight...yet she looked so beautiful...calm...and lost somewhere...he approaches her quietly...touches her shoulder quietly...and turns her face towards him...she is startled to the touch...sees him in front of her...doesn't know if it's real or not...is he really here...looks into his eyes...his eyes are watery...he wants to say so many things...he wants to say sorry...his eyes are urging her to forgive him...his eyes are telling her that he still loves her...she's lost in his eyes...reads everything that's unspoken...the softness in his touch...the depth in his eyes...tells her everything that he's trying to say...in seconds...she hugs him forgetting eveything....both cry...hold each other tight...Mayank lets his tears flow...holds Nupur close to his heart tight...finally they are together....
Edited by MayurByGod - 15 years ago

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