~*Mayur Paradise #133*~Mit JaaNi he Yeh Dooriyan - Page 46

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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok I got one......

mayu 's mom got a job...and Mayu starts tutoring other guys who need help.......Nupur sees how much he is working hard and she wants him to have fun one night.....She tells him she needs help...And finally he agrees come and help...

He comes and Nupur wears a nice simple white dress...seedha saadha...open hair....he ringd the bell and she opens the door.....he lloks at her and forgets everything......she understands this ans says...aise hi khade rahoge ya andhar aakar kuch padhaadoge bhi? in her nautanki style........

He flusters and comes in.....Nupur doesn't pay attention to him at all...her old nautanki style..talking about random things......he holds her lips together with his fingers.and shuts her mouth.....ek shabd aur nahin he says.......she pretends to get upset....he sees this and melts and says acchaa chalo baat karo...che nahin chodo...mujhe nahin karni hain...jab dekho daaant te rahate ho in khafa muh.......he says soory and he says ok we will do what you want to do...she says she wants to watch tv... and he has no choice now......she switches on adn Accha ji mein haari chalo song is playing......she wraps her arm around his arm and rest her head on his shoulder...he rest his head on hers......he enjoys her company..and he is more relaxed now and starts enjoying the song with her while she is giggling and showing expressions of madhubala....he is watching her expressions and smiling...he asks her..Nupur howcome you never apologize so sweetly ....she replies because I am never wrong..really he asks really she says.....agar mein galat hoon bhi tum mujhe se kabhi naaraaz nahin hoge naa mayank she asks him innocently......he slowy turns her towards him and says....aaj ke baad kabhi naaraaz nahin hoonga Nupur....I promise you...tumhe maaaloom hain mujhe bahut jaldi gussa aajata hain...lekintumhari aise pyaari chahara dekhkar mera jitna bhi gussa ho woh door ho jaata hain..aur thakaan bhi....

Mujhe maaloom hain...you just wanted me to relax so you wanted me to help you..so thank you..adn she smiles sweetly and says you are welcome...and he says...aur mujhe yahin dekhna tha....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaganjot.S

Is AJ here or gone??

I made something for her and the all the mayurians who had requested a sig on the rain scene after their confession... last time i was on paradise
I hope you all like it ..
i tried my best...but please feel free to let me know if you all didnt like it.. i can try to make another one 😆 ...



Gagan JI *jhappis*...Thank you ji...I am soooo downloading this.........🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
dude gagan i need to knw how u do the shiny shiny stuff on siggies...

i dont do them and im usually self taught so blank
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful jess.....loved it !!!!!! very sweet 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaganjot.S

Hello Everyone!!

How are you?
What is the discussion today?



writing romantic / emotional scenes we want to see but are never going to get.🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago

@Muskan: thank you sooo much sweets!!! really appreciate it!!

@Jess: That was soo beautifully written ..
okay now i am being selfish .. can you please write more lolzzz
oh i loved this..
did you all write more? do i have to go search through paradise now? 🤣
Edited by Gaganjot.S - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
here is mine altogether....so gagan no nee to go paradise hunting....

mayank is in his room. he is really tired and stressed as he went out all day to look for house or part time job .....nupur comes over and finds the door open so walks in. mayank is sitting on the bed but falls asleep. nupur calls for him but he doesn't listen. she looks into the room and find him sleeping. she walks upto him and look at his tired face. she moves her finger into his hair very slowly and sits next to him. her touch wakes him up but he doesn't open his eyes. Knowing it was nupur he slowly slides and keeps his head on her lap. slowly his stress starts to fade away......
nupur starts to run her fingers thru his hair. he doesn't say anything as he always does when someone touches his hair....infact he loves it. his stress starts to melt away and a faded smile takes over. after few minutes nupur in a low voice asks him....kuch kaam bana? mayank replies - an hnn....
N- koi baat nahi mayank kal fir koshish karenge kuch na kuch zaroor ho jaayega.....ma kaisi hain...? (nupur asks in a very concerned tone)
M - noticing that she called his mom ma for the first time his smile widens. he says " theek hain....thodi udas hain bas"
N - jaante ho mayank jab main pehli baar aunty se.....mayank interupts - ma hi bolo tumhare mooh se ma sunna acha lagta hai...
nupur smiles and realises that she said ma the first time as it was totally unintentional.
she continues .....pehli baar jab tumne mujhe ma se milane ke liye ghar bulaya tha to main bahot dari hui thi. mann mein kitna kuch chal raha tha...pata nahi kaisi hongi, bahot strict to nahi hongi.....aur tumne bhi to mujhe dara diya tha....mayank smiles to this...(still eyes closed head on her lap) ...par milte hi unse laga ki agar meri ma hoti to bilkul aisi hi hoti....itni hi pyaari....
M - tumhe ma mil gayi nupur aur woh tumse bhi utna hi pyar karengi jitna mujhse karti hain....
N - janti hoon...isliye to aisa lagta hai jaise aajtak bhagwan se jo bhi maanga sab mil gaya.....tum....ma....
mayank get up an looks at her for the first time since she came in. he thinks to himself....she is looking so beautiful....!!!!
smiles an takes her hand in his....
M - thanks nupur
N - kisliye mayank
M - mere poore din ki thakan 10 min. mein nikalne ke liye...
nupur blushes....
he sits next to her quitely still holding her hand.
N- tumne din bhar mein kuch khaya mayank.
M - mujhe bhook nahi hai nupur.
N - mayank main abhi tumhare liye kuch le kar aati hun....
M - nahi yahin baitho mere pass...
N - nahi mayank pehle kuch kha lo fir baithenge.
M - tum banaogi (an gives a sarcastic smile)
N - haan main hi banaugi....aur tumhe khana bhi padega...and goes into the kitchen....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaganjot.S

@Muskan: thank you sooo much sweets!!! really appreciate it!!

@Jess: That was soo beautifully written ..
okay now i am being selfish .. can you please write more lolzzz
oh i loved this..
did you all write more? do i have to go search through paradise now? 🤣


Hey Gagan, beautiful pictures of MN in the gallery.......

Do you know anything about new promos coming out....The last 2 ones are already over so....
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Posted: 15 years ago
ur scene AJ - verry cute and soooo like nupur!!!
gud job 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thank u Gagan.....nicely made MAyur siggy....🤗'
And thank you for your comments....we all are amatured writers....crazy about Mayur...wants to see some emotional stuff...some cute romance...toh paradise mein aake sapne dekhte hain...

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