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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: falak01

mayur scene:

Mayank n nupur r reading their scripts bt nupur is not able 2 focus on them,she is thinking about gunjan and the pain through which she is going right now...
Mayank(instead of looking at nupz):
chalo nupur jaldi se aaj hi hume saari lines yaad karni hogi...kyunki main nahi chahta ki hum dono mein so koi bhi apni lines bhoole aur haan tum please apni taraf se koi extra lines add mat karna..
then he turns 2wards nupz n finds her thinking something...
he mutters 2 himself:
are waah mayank sharma!!!lagta hai aaj suraj pashchim se nikla hai..tabhi toh aaj tujhe nupur ke saamne apni poori baat kehne mili hai...
then he puts his hand on nupz shoulders and asks:kya hua nupur?koi problem hai kya??tum bahut khoyi khoyi lag rahi ho...
nupur:nahi toh...
mayank:kuch toh baat hai....tum mujhe bataa sakti ho..ho sakta hai koi solution mill jaaye tumhaari problem ka...
nupz:wo main...
suddenly miss tamanna comes and alots classrooms 2 each couple 4 practicing....
MAYUR in the classroom-
MAyank:ab yahaan koi nahi hai...tum mujhe apne dil ki baat bataa sakti ho..
nupur:main gunjan ke baare mein soch rahi thi..samajh mein hi nahi aa raha hai ki kyaa karoon...
mayank:gunjan ke baare mein???kya hua hai usko???maine bhi notice kiya hai ki wo aajkal bahut khoyi khoyi rehti hai..
nupur:ye pyaar cheez hi aisi hai...achhe khaase insaan ko kyaa se kyaa banaa deti hai...
mayank:nupur ye tum keh rahi ho???tumhe to pyaar par bahut vishwaas tha...ab kyaa hua???
nupur:haan mayank mujhe aaj bhi pyaar par bahut vishwaas hai par gunjan ke pyaar par bilkul vishwaas nahi hai...
mayank:gunjan ka pyaar???nupur ye kaisi baatein kar rahi ho??seedhe seedhe bataao ki hua kyaa hai??/
nupur:gunjan ko pyaar ho gaya hai..
mayank:kya?kisse?kab?kaise?
nupur:samrat se...
mayank:apne samrat se???
nupur:haan apne samrat se...
mayank:ye samrat to bada chhupa rustam nikla...
nupur:nahi mayank,tum galat samajh rahe ho...samrat to iss baare mein jaanta bhi nahin hai..
mayank:kyaa???
nupur:haan..samrat sirf gunjan ko apna dost maanta hai aur gunjan ye maan ke baithi hai ki agar usne samrat ko kuch bhi bataaya to unki dosti toot jaayegi...aur issi liye wo samrat aur sheena ko sath sath dekhkar ghut ti rehti hai...mujhe to samajh hi nahi aa raha ki main uska kya karu..
mayank:uska maahaul(atmosphere) change karo..
nupur:kya?
mayank:haan..kal sunday hai..tum aisa karo..kal tum aur gunjan mere ghar aa jaana wahan main,tum aur maa milke uska mood thik karne ki koshish karenge..
nupur:thanx a lot mayank...hum kal zaroor aayenge...

Nupur & gunjan in their room:
gunjan thinking of sammy-sheena..Nupur notices her...
Nupur:Aaj ka din to bahut hi achha tha byy goddd...tera kaisa tha gunjan??
Gunjan:pata nahi...
Nupur:kya pata nahi???tu bol kya rahi hai??
Gunjan:kuch nahi di...tum batao..tumne kya-kya kiya???
Nupur:apni problem ka solution dhoondha...
Gunjan:kya???
Nupur:kuch nahi...tu so jaa...kal hume jaana hai...
Gunjan:kahan jaana hai??
Nupur:wo main tujhe kal hi bataaoongi...
NEXT MORNING:
Nupur n gunjan gets ready and leaving the house 4 mayank's home...
Suddenly samrat comes...
Samrat: hey chashmish kahin jaa rahi ho kya??
Gunjan:haan...
Samraat:kahaan??
Gunjan:pata nahi...
Samrat:pata nahi..matlab...
Nupur:matlab ye ki wo abhi tak ek secret hai...achha samrat kal milte hain...
Samrat:kal??par main to chashmish se abhi milne aaya tha...
gunjan:i m sorry samrat....
samrat:sorry kyo bolti ho chashmish...bhool gayii..friendship mein
NO SORRY & NO THANKU...O.K. then kal milte hain...
GUNJAN & NUPUR in autorikshaw 2wards mayank's home...
Gunjan:di mujhe samrat ke liye bahut bura lag raha hai...wo mujhse milne aaya aur hum iss tarah chale aaye...
Nupur:samrat ko to bura nahi lagta jab wo sheena ke saath chipakta hai...phir tujhe bura kyon lag raha hai...aur waise bhi mat bhool ki wo tera sirf dost hai..
Gunjan:achha di chhodo uss baat ko...ab to bata do ki hum kahan jaa rahe hain??
Nupur:mayank ke ghar...aunty ne bulaya hai...
BOTH REACHES MAYANK'S RESIDENCE...
MAYANK'S MOM OPENS THE DOOR WITH A SMILE ON HER FACE...
NUPUR:namaste aunty!!!
mayank's mom: namaste beta...aao andar aao...
nupur:ye gunjan hai aunty...meri behan...
mayank's mom:bilkul tumhari jaisi hai...pyaari...
nupur:mayank kahan hai aunty???
mayank's mom:so raha hai...kitna jagaaya par uthaa hi nahi...
nupur:gunjan tu baith main usko jagaa kar aati hoon...
mayank's mom:aur beta kaisi ho?
gunjan:thik hoon...
mayank's mom:nupur ne bataya ki tumhe cooking kaa bahut shauk hai...to chalogi mere saath breakfast banaane??
gunjan:sure aunty...
SCENE SHIFTS 2 MAYANK'S BEDROOM...
HE IS STILL SLEEPING...DREAMING ABT NUPUR...
IN THE DREAM:
Mayank sleeping n nupur comes with wet hair wearing a saree with a cup of tea....
she keeps the tea on the table and drying her wet hair....suddenly some drops of water frm her hair falls on mayank's face and he opens his eyes ...
Nupur:utho mayank...subah ho gayo...
Mayank:bas 5 min aur...
Nupur:bahut ho gaya...uth jaaoo...
Mayank holds nupurs in his arms and opens his eyes and they both lost in each others eyes...
suddenly he realises dat this happening in real...
Mayank:tum....tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho....
Nupur:kya kar rahi ho matlab???tumhi ne to bulaaya hai...ab chup chap uth jaoo aur breakfast karne aa jaao....
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Posted: 16 years ago
well what about the song

"Jaddo hai tera hi jadoo" from Gulam for MaYur?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: falak01

Nupur & gunjan in their room:
gunjan thinking of sammy-sheena..Nupur notices her...
Nupur:Aaj ka din to bahut hi achha tha byy goddd...tera kaisa tha gunjan??
Gunjan:pata nahi...
Nupur:kya pata nahi???tu bol kya rahi hai??
Gunjan:kuch nahi di...tum batao..tumne kya-kya kiya???
Nupur:apni problem ka solution dhoondha...
Gunjan:kya???
Nupur:kuch nahi...tu so jaa...kal hume jaana hai...
Gunjan:kahan jaana hai??
Nupur:wo main tujhe kal hi bataaoongi...
NEXT MORNING:
Nupur n gunjan gets ready and leaving the house 4 mayank's home...
Suddenly samrat comes...
Samrat: hey chashmish kahin jaa rahi ho kya??
Gunjan:haan...
Samraat:kahaan??
Gunjan:pata nahi...
Samrat:pata nahi..matlab...
Nupur:matlab ye ki wo abhi tak ek secret hai...achha samrat kal milte hain...
Samrat:kal??par main to chashmish se abhi milne aaya tha...
gunjan:i m sorry samrat....
samrat:sorry kyo bolti ho chashmish...bhool gayii..friendship mein
NO SORRY & NO THANKU...O.K. then kal milte hain...
GUNJAN & NUPUR in autorikshaw 2wards mayank's home...
Gunjan:di mujhe samrat ke liye bahut bura lag raha hai...wo mujhse milne aaya aur hum iss tarah chale aaye...
Nupur:samrat ko to bura nahi lagta jab wo sheena ke saath chipakta hai...phir tujhe bura kyon lag raha hai...aur waise bhi mat bhool ki wo tera sirf dost hai..
Gunjan:achha di chhodo uss baat ko...ab to bata do ki hum kahan jaa rahe hain??
Nupur:mayank ke ghar...aunty ne bulaya hai...
BOTH REACHES MAYANK'S RESIDENCE...
MAYANK'S MOM OPENS THE DOOR WITH A SMILE ON HER FACE...
NUPUR:namaste aunty!!!
mayank's mom: namaste beta...aao andar aao...
nupur:ye gunjan hai aunty...meri behan...
mayank's mom:bilkul tumhari jaisi hai...pyaari...
nupur:mayank kahan hai aunty???
mayank's mom:so raha hai...kitna jagaaya par uthaa hi nahi...
nupur:gunjan tu baith main usko jagaa kar aati hoon...
mayank's mom:aur beta kaisi ho?
gunjan:thik hoon...
mayank's mom:nupur ne bataya ki tumhe cooking kaa bahut shauk hai...to chalogi mere saath breakfast banaane??
gunjan:sure aunty...
SCENE SHIFTS 2 MAYANK'S BEDROOM...
HE IS STILL SLEEPING...DREAMING ABT NUPUR...
IN THE DREAM:
Mayank sleeping n nupur comes with wet hair wearing a saree with a cup of tea....
she keeps the tea on the table and drying her wet hair....suddenly some drops of water frm her hair falls on mayank's face and he opens his eyes ...
Nupur:utho mayank...subah ho gayo...
Mayank:bas 5 min aur...
Nupur:bahut ho gaya...uth jaaoo...
Mayank holds nupurs in his arms and opens his eyes and they both lost in each others eyes...
suddenly he realises dat this happening in real...
Mayank:tum....tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho....
Nupur:kya kar rahi ho matlab???tumhi ne to bulaaya hai...ab chup chap uth jaoo aur breakfast karne aa jaao....



excellent scene falak😳
😳😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey guys!
any new mayur scoops???
PD said she would give us one 2dy....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Falak g8 very nice.Write more of sajan pls.
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg!!! gr8 scene pm it to pd!! falak u av a gr8 mynd!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: falak01

Nupur & gunjan in their room:
gunjan thinking of sammy-sheena..Nupur notices her...
Nupur:Aaj ka din to bahut hi achha tha byy goddd...tera kaisa tha gunjan??
Gunjan:pata nahi...
Nupur:kya pata nahi???tu bol kya rahi hai??
Gunjan:kuch nahi di...tum batao..tumne kya-kya kiya???
Nupur:apni problem ka solution dhoondha...
Gunjan:kya???
Nupur:kuch nahi...tu so jaa...kal hume jaana hai...
Gunjan:kahan jaana hai??
Nupur:wo main tujhe kal hi bataaoongi...
NEXT MORNING:
Nupur n gunjan gets ready and leaving the house 4 mayank's home...
Suddenly samrat comes...
Samrat: hey chashmish kahin jaa rahi ho kya??
Gunjan:haan...
Samraat:kahaan??
Gunjan:pata nahi...
Samrat:pata nahi..matlab...
Nupur:matlab ye ki wo abhi tak ek secret hai...achha samrat kal milte hain...
Samrat:kal??par main to chashmish se abhi milne aaya tha...
gunjan:i m sorry samrat....
samrat:sorry kyo bolti ho chashmish...bhool gayii..friendship mein
NO SORRY & NO THANKU...O.K. then kal milte hain...
GUNJAN & NUPUR in autorikshaw 2wards mayank's home...
Gunjan:di mujhe samrat ke liye bahut bura lag raha hai...wo mujhse milne aaya aur hum iss tarah chale aaye...
Nupur:samrat ko to bura nahi lagta jab wo sheena ke saath chipakta hai...phir tujhe bura kyon lag raha hai...aur waise bhi mat bhool ki wo tera sirf dost hai..
Gunjan:achha di chhodo uss baat ko...ab to bata do ki hum kahan jaa rahe hain??
Nupur:mayank ke ghar...aunty ne bulaya hai...
BOTH REACHES MAYANK'S RESIDENCE...
MAYANK'S MOM OPENS THE DOOR WITH A SMILE ON HER FACE...
NUPUR:namaste aunty!!!
mayank's mom: namaste beta...aao andar aao...
nupur:ye gunjan hai aunty...meri behan...
mayank's mom:bilkul tumhari jaisi hai...pyaari...
nupur:mayank kahan hai aunty???
mayank's mom:so raha hai...kitna jagaaya par uthaa hi nahi...
nupur:gunjan tu baith main usko jagaa kar aati hoon...
mayank's mom:aur beta kaisi ho?
gunjan:thik hoon...
mayank's mom:nupur ne bataya ki tumhe cooking kaa bahut shauk hai...to chalogi mere saath breakfast banaane??
gunjan:sure aunty...
SCENE SHIFTS 2 MAYANK'S BEDROOM...
HE IS STILL SLEEPING...DREAMING ABT NUPUR...
IN THE DREAM:
Mayank sleeping n nupur comes with wet hair wearing a saree with a cup of tea....
she keeps the tea on the table and drying her wet hair....suddenly some drops of water frm her hair falls on mayank's face and he opens his eyes ...
Nupur:utho mayank...subah ho gayo...
Mayank:bas 5 min aur...
Nupur:bahut ho gaya...uth jaaoo...
Mayank holds nupurs in his arms and opens his eyes and they both lost in each others eyes...
suddenly he realises dat this happening in real...
Mayank:tum....tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho....
Nupur:kya kar rahi ho matlab???tumhi ne to bulaaya hai...ab chup chap uth jaoo aur breakfast karne aa jaao....



great one falak ... may be they can use it 😉
👏👏👏... i esp like the dream part and that nup was really there after this scene ... both Mayu and Nups can take Gunjan some places to make her smile and all...👏



I truly hopes Pd read this one ...

pm it to her 😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

shammy ka mast sc ho gaya abhi...

at their first date: what ever sheena asks him, his answer has chashmish in it... she tries to change the topic... but no avail... finally she says something and calls gunjan chashmish... and samrat corrects her... u CANT call her chashmish... she is chashmish only for ME...
sweet it is.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: PARADOX 1

shammy ka mast sc ho gaya abhi...

😆😆😆
at their first date: what ever sheena asks him, his answer has chashmish in it... she tries to change the topic... but no avail... finally she says something and calls gunjan chashmish... and samrat corrects her... u CANT call her chashmish... she is chashmish only for ME...
sweet it is.
thats gud!!👏👏👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
what ever sheena asks him, his answer has chashmish in it.

pd this will make all sajan fans happy 😆
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