coming clean - sajan one shot

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi guys this is rhea (i am new)

i was really bored yeterday so i ended up writing a very random one shot on sajan.
Its very random and pretty short 😆
i have tried to write the one shot keeping gunjan's character in mind but the gunjan in my fic is a little diffrent 😊

Coming Clean

She sat on the window sill, looking at the cloud covered sky. It had been a particularly normal day for Gunjan bhushan . Wake up at home, mom off on a business trip so she was alone, go to school, hide her true feelings from her best friend, and go home, do homework, go to bed, and repeat.

You see Gunjan was best friends with Excel's King, Samrat sehgal . No one understood why they were friends, but they had been friends for so very long.

As Gunjan continued to stare out the window, she was interrupted by her cell phone ringing. The first thing she did was checked the caller ID. It was her other best friend Nupur "Hey Nupz ," she greeted her.

"Hey gunji ! So when are you going to tell samrat ?" nupur asked.

"What are you talking about?" she asked nervously, no one knew her true feelings, and she hadn't planned for anyone to find out either.

"Tell him that you love him." she told her. Gunjan was shocked. There was no way any one knew about this, or was she that obvious?

As she just sat there thinking about what was just said Nupur cut her off. "We all knew about it Gunjan , everyone except Samrat . I bet if you left now you get to his house without either of his parents home yet. Good luck and call me when you get back with the details!" And with that Gunjan just sat there with the phone up to her ear, hearing only a dial tone.

She quickly hung up the phone, grabbed her car keys and a jacket and raced outside. After starting her car she quickly drove to Samrat's house. Over and over again she was thinking of what to say to Samrat . Should she just say right away, or wait and talk for a little bit? This was so confusing.

Much to Gunjan's disbelief she had arrived at Troy's house. There weren't any cars in the driveway, thankfully, but she parked across the street near a park anyways. It would be much more awkward if Samrat's parents had been home.

As she made her way up to the front door, she kept replaying what she was going to say her in mind, while a slight drizzle had started overhead. But before her hand reached the doorbell, she saw Samrat through the window. But what had upset Gunjan most was who was with him. On of the cheerleaders from school was all over him. She really hoped he was trying to get her off of himself, but couldn't tell through the tears forming in her eyes.

She turned away, trying to leave before he noticed, but her elbow hit the door bell. Noticing this she ran off. Not knowing were to go, Gunjan just ran down the street. The rain started to fall harder, blending with her tears. She could her name being called, but never turned around once.

Samrat started chasing after her, being on the basketball team had really helped him catch up to her. "Chashmish , what's the matter?" he asked while grabbing her arm.

"Nothing," she replied as she turned around to wipe her tears so Samrat wouldn't notice.

"It doesn't look like nothing," he said, trying to get her to tell him what was the matter. You see even though the two were from different groups, Samrat knew he was falling for Gunjan and falling hard

Gunjan knew she had two options. One, don't tell him and never have a chance to tell him again, or two, tell him and maybe he feels the same. After the long pause she finally broke it.

"I couldn't stand seeing you in there with another girl. I know we're best friends and we're not supposed to be anything more, I just feel there's more to it, like I…I might love you. I understand if you don't feel the same." she told him. Gunjan turned her back to Samrat and started walking away with more tears running down her face, she had finally told him her feelings. After crossing the street she started to walk faster, she didn't want to face him again.

Samrat stood there trying to take in what she had just said. She loves him. Wait… she loves him! It had finally clicked to him. She really loves him. Samrat quickly ran to her, not wanting to lose her.

When he caught up to her, he grabbed her arm and spun her around. "Do you really mean that gunjan ? Everything you just said?" he asked.

She nodded her head, not making eye contact and answered softly, "Every word of it."

Samrat stood there for a moment before pulling her into a kiss. "I love you too Gunjan ." he said before capturing her in another kiss. And I always will

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Rhea, Anu here....awwwwwwww.....its sooooo sweeet!!!!!!! 😳yeah, gunjunn is a bit different here(but our gunjunn has changed too.. 😉 ) , but who knows.....maybe it ll happen the same in the serial?! 😃 Do make more of these!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely babez it was gr8.......................hope dis cud happen soon in d show aswell.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey rhea . nice one. keep making more. hope to see some in mjht.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kayamath_fan2

Hey Rhea, Anu here....awwwwwwww.....its sooooo sweeet!!!!!!! 😳yeah, gunjunn is a bit different here(but our gunjunn has changed too.. 😉 ) , but who knows.....maybe it ll happen the same in the serial?! 😃 Do make more of these!!!

hey
thanks a lot 😃
i was not really sure about the one shot see when i read it the first time i found it kinda a lame but since you like it i take it is good 😊
I'll try writing more one shots
but hey thanks man this is my 1st one shot 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: AttractiveAdya

lovely babez it was gr8.......................hope dis cud happen soon in d show aswell.........

hey
thanks a tonne for likin it.
it means a lot its my 1st one shot.😊
hope the sajan confessing scene is way cooler though.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: talkativetaurus

hey rhea . nice one. keep making more. hope to see some in mjht.

thanks
well i will try making more 1 shots for the time being i am thinking of writing a sajan ff😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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^ thts kool ... will love to read! tc
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Posted: 16 years ago
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perfectttt!awesome job!!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsarah13

perfectttt!awesome job!!😊

thanks a lot 😃😊😊

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