CONTRACT MARRIAGE[MJHT] Part14-15 pg 52 28/6 - Page 16

Originally posted by: nazdean

great...amazing ........fabulous work...keep it up......loved it

Originally posted by: red rose!

ohh so sad gunjan doesnt know about samrat in coma..! nyc update.. continue soon..! 😛

Originally posted by: hgrhr

*reserved*

edited

Hey

Nice part! Now I've got SO many questions that I need the answer for....but I have a feeling you won't reveal anything now!

What exactly happend between Sajan anyway, why did they even have a contract marriage..? I can't seem to actually find a plausible answer....and their seperation, accidents...? SO many questions...

I guess that's what takes to get one hooked on a story!

So in general, Are Mayank and Nupur engaged in the present situation...? You mentioned something like that in that scene...

Hmmm....Gunjan's scene was cute too...her talking to her child! Who's Sahil...her boyfriend...?

Ohkay...R-rated scene...I see no one commented on that...well, it was nicely written but make sure not to make it too long, ...enough for the story to progress...and it would kind of get awkward to read that on our fav characters. lol So I was right about there being a MB scene...😉

But it was kinda weird to read romance between the parents....um, not used to that. But that;s just my opinion.

Wow...so no editing mistakes in this one!

But yaar, please add more Mayur... know its a Sajan story but if they're present in the fic, I can't help but want to read them.

All in all an interesting part!! Looks like you have all the story planned out...

Nidhi

Originally posted by: Anjalika Khanna

wow awesum update......

continue soon...............

Originally posted by: KaSh_Monaya

wow rohan ur ff is fab, amazing

just read all ur parts in a go

wow dude it's simply outstanding

plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

& add me in ur PM list plzzzzzzzzzz

Originally posted by: khushali16

*fainted* *got conciousness and read ur ff again* *again fainted* god..ur ff is sooooo cool.....continu soon and thanx for ur pm's....

luv,

khushali...

Originally posted by: styleislife13

Hii....

Nice......

Keep it up......

I dont think that kind of contnet is allowed here....

Anyways.......nice part.....very long....

Originally posted by: styleislife13

Hey forgot......

The thoughts u mention r nice.....

I really like it....

Keep it up......

Where's MayUr!...

Want more more more MayUr!