CONTRACT MARRIAGE[MJHT] Part14-15 pg 52 28/6 - Page 15

Hey forgot......

ok..i might have read your mind before but have to admit this time you caught me off guard..like how you mess with our instincts...😉 if you know what i mean..

when the part started i was glued and i thought this might be one of the best..well it only got better...quite filmy too.. well only disappointment was gunjan ready to marry again... i was thinking she might decide to rear the child by herself...our perceptions didnt quite match with her character there..

waiting for the next one...awesome as usual...you raising your own bars every time

For mayur readers..??

I couldnt include anything in these part as it was not atall concerned with them. sajan are just thinking...for including there scenes i want them together at some place...then only i will be able to include it...Let them meet again...that time you will get mayur...!!!

Rohit

heyy...

Originally posted by: hgrhr

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Hey

Nice part! Now I've got SO many questions that I need the answer for....but I have a feeling you won't reveal anything now!

What exactly happend between Sajan anyway, why did they even have a contract marriage..? I can't seem to actually find a plausible answer....and their seperation, accidents...? SO many questions...

I guess that's what takes to get one hooked on a story!

So in general, Are Mayank and Nupur engaged in the present situation...? You mentioned something like that in that scene...

Hmmm....Gunjan's scene was cute too...her talking to her child! Who's Sahil...her boyfriend...?

Ohkay...R-rated scene...I see no one commented on that...well, it was nicely written but make sure not to make it too long, ...enough for the story to progress...and it would kind of get awkward to read that on our fav characters. lol So I was right about there being a MB scene...😉

But it was kinda weird to read romance between the parents....um, not used to that. But that;s just my opinion.

Wow...so no editing mistakes in this one!

But yaar, please add more Mayur... know its a Sajan story but if they're present in the fic, I can't help but want to read them.

All in all an interesting part!! Looks like you have all the story planned out...

Nidhi

i have the same doubt whos sahil n are mayank n nupur engaged ???????

Awesome update! Thanks for the pm! Do continue soon!

awesome rohit i really loved it do continue soooooonnnnnnnn and thanks for the pm

awesome parts i was very much busy cant read thses part before finally i readed 4 parts today and it was reaaly soooooo much nice i enjoyed it very much bcoz ek sath sare parhne me maza bpohat aaya