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Posted: 16 years ago
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HIIII!! JUST FINISH TO READ UR FF!!!!
AND I LOVE IT!!! SO CUYEY!!!
ALL PARTS ARE FABOULOS!!!
CONT SOON WHEN U HAVE TIME!!
SEE YAA!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 8

GUNJAN-di woh….

Suddenly the phone rings….Gunjan ran to pick it up,thinking it was an indication that she shouldn't tell her..

SAMRAT-hello chashmish

GUNJAN-tum!tumhein kaise pta maine phone uthaya hai..

SAMRAT-hayye..hum toh aapke rag rag se waakif hain…mockingly-chashmish jahaan,main wahaan..

GUNJAN-koi kaam tha

SAMRAT-nahin,bus apki aawaz sunne ka mann tha

GUNJANshe did not know how to react..she just kept quite….

SAMRAT-arrey chashmish..ghabraa kyun gayi..maine sirf tumhein goodnight kehne ke liye phone liya tha..afterall tum meri dost ho..

GUNJAN-ji…goodnight…

SAMRAT-goodnight chashmish..

GUNJAN goes back,to find her di sleeping….never mind..she thought..kal bta dungi..ya shayd nahin btana chahiye…

SAMRAT,on the other hand,did not know why he called her..he had just randomly dialed her number,and hearing her voice made him feel peaceful…array uski aawaaz meethi hai,he said….tabhi…itni meethi aawaz hai,shayad chashmish gaana bhi gaati ho…who knows…

NEXT DAY

Mayank was sleeping peacefully…when he heard nupurs voice..

NUPUR-goodmorning Mayank!she was at his place,and had come to wake him up with a cup of tea

MAYANK-mumbling..Nupur..sone do na..

NUPUR-utho Mayank…bohot der se so rahe ho…

MAYANK-Nupur tum bhi na..bus paanch minute…aise baat ho rahi thi,as if he was used to this…

Just realizing the whole conversation,he wakes up,startled,n jumps out of the bed

MAYANK-NUPURRR!TUM!TUM YAHAAN KaAISE??ITNI SUBAH…Main sapna dekh raha hu?

NUPUR-she just turned away and started giggling..he was bare chest,and she was so embarrassed..even though he was looking umm….never mind

Mayank realized that,and rushed to get his shirt…

NUPUR-mayank..sapna nahin dekh rahe..aur tumne he toh mujhe bulaya tha…cultural meet ki discussion ke liye..bhool gaye kya?

MAYANK-arrey haan…sorry..tum bahar jao,main fresh ho kar ata hu..

MAYANK came,and looked hot..black shirt,messy hair…..NUPUR even whistled…she couldn't control herself..later said she was humming a song…

MAYANK-nupur,main yeh dono events sambhal lunga…par mujhe dance nahin karna…kya hum iss event ko chhod nahin sakte

NUPUR-nahin mayank…dance toh karna padega..please…

MAYANK-par nup

NUPUR-par war kuch nahin..dekho kitna simple hota hai…main morena ki madhuri dixit hu…excel ki bhi ban jaungi…she started singing kajra re and started dancing..Mayank looked horrified,since they couldn't be doing this for an inter college competition…he knew how to dance,just didn't like to..

MAYANK held out his hand to her…she thought he would join in,but he grabbed her by the waist….and brought her close..she skipped a hearbeat…she was shocked at his reaction,and the way in which her body was obeying his actions…he quietly made her whirl around,and then went in for a quick drop…….his eyes never left hers,she did not blink either…..wow…

NUPUR-mayank…tum..

MAYANK-sssshhhhhhh……..

THE PRESENT TRACK

Samrat had rushed Gunjan to his place…she had fainted infront of his eyes….he was so scared…even after an hour of medication,she had not gained consciousness….he just lay there on her bed,holding her hand,and remembered one of the most special day of his life…when they had first hugged…

He had not acknowledged his feelings for her,neither had she…they were only very good friends,but that day, their friendship moved on step further…

Excel versus Xavier's…..and Gunjan Bhushan versus arpita sharma…

The two stars of excel,both in for competitons..

Samrat had a basketball match,Gunjan had a singing competition…

BENJI-am sure dude,excel he yeh match jeetega…

SAMRAT-Benji…mujhe apne match ki koi tension nahin hai dude….Aaj Gunjan ka singing competition hai…aur m sure who bohot nervous hogi..main usse mil bhi nahin sakta..BEnji,tu jaakar usse meri side se wish karde na

BENJI-dude!kal tu saara din use motivate kar raha tha..m sure who theek hogi..agar itni tension lega,toh hum game har jayenge..

SAMRAT-to hell wid the game!Benji..Gunjan se zyada kuch important nahin hai!

BENJI-relax dude..main jaata hun…gussa kyun hota hai

SAMRAT-thanks dude..aur usse bolna dat wo bilkul nervous na ho,main uske saath hu,aur who zaroor jeetegi…

BENJI-fine dude…

Gunjan,on the other hand was a nervous wreck…two reasons-her competition..no problem,samrat ne jo kaha tha,wo yaad rakhungi…second reason-Samrat ka aaj bohot important match hai..meri wajah se woh practice bhi nahin kar paya…mujhe jo help kar raha tha…I hope woh yeh match zaroor jeete…

BENJI-hi Gunjan….Tumhare liye tumhare best friend ka ek msg hai…

GUNJAN-samrat ka msg!there was a huge smilee on her face..benji noticed..and told her that itna khush toh benji tom and jerry dekh kar bhi nahin hota,jitna khush gunjan iss news se hai….

BENJI-sharmana band karo Gunjan….aur suno..usne apne best wishes bheje hai,aur kaha hai wo tumhare saath hai,ghabrana mat

GUNJAN-hamesha ki tarah….a huge smile comes across her face…thanku Benji..aur please,Samrat se kehna ki who acche se khele,puri concentration ke saath,aur jaise he meri turn khatam ho jayegi,main match dekhne ayungi…

BENJI-okay best friend ki best friend…

GUNJAN-bye benji

Benji goes back to Samrat,who was getting ready for his big game.praying for gunjans well being

SAMRAT-dude…wo theek hai?tumne usse keh diya?wo nervous toh nhi hai na?kya usse meri zaroorat hai?main jau kya?

BENJI-DUDE!!Relax!!haan…Gunjan nervous toh hai…par khud se zyaada teri game ke liye!ky dosti hai umhari..tu yahaan uske liye pareshan.wo wahaan tere liye

pareshaan…nazar na lage

SAMRAT-as usual..meri chashmish hai he aisi…apni fikar kabhi nahin karti..

BENJI-meri chashmish????

SAMRAT-chhod yaar,match start ho raha hai…

GUNJAN-all the best samrat…

SAMRAT-all the best chashmish….

The match begins with full enthu and speed,and so does the singing competition…Nupur quickly hugs gunjan,Gunjan thinks once about Samrat,and goes for her turn..she was the first contestant..

Deep breaths Gunjan…deep breaths…aur hamari pehli contestant hain excel ki singing sensation GUNJAN BHUSHAN….

The lights go off….the whole auditorium was silent…she could see nothing,hear nothing…she closed her eyes…and when she opened them…she saw him…smiling at her sweetly…his eyes fixed on hers,his smile only for her….she took one last deep breath and sang..it was one of his favourite songs……

As soon as the competition got over,she ran to the game….it was the last quarter of the game,and excel was lagging behind with just one basket….the coach demanded a break,and at that exact moment,gunjan walked in….

He saw her….she couldn't see him in the huddle of the players,but he saw her….there was a sudden boost of energy that he felt..mujhe jeetna hai…Chashmish ne kaha tha…main uske liye zaroor jeetunga…

The last quarter began….and it was amazing…the way samrat was playing,unbelievable…

COACH-Samrat jis josh se khel rhe ho,staium toot jayega

SAMRAT-shouts back-yahi toh main chahta hu coach!

Aur phir hona kya tha..they won….by 16--10…it was one of excels biggest victories…Gunjan was sooo happy…..he had won….not the world cup gunjan..but still he had won..he had kept his promise….

She ran to congratulate him…she had been more nervous for him than he himself…there had been a huge crumple in her stomach,but as soon as she heard people cheering him and saw the huge smile on his face after the final basket,she relaxed….onfact,she was on cloud nine…

but he was crowded by fans…she could not see him…she was disappointed….koi baat nahin,she thought..atleast woh jeet toh gaya na..and as soon as she turned around,there he was..standing,looking at her..exhausted but happy….he held out his arms for her..he hoped she wouldn't reject, he was dying to hold her in his arms……she did not even give it a second thought,and ran into his arms………………time stopped…no one moved…it felt as if they were the only two people present in the auditorium…his grip was very hard..they wanted to stay like this forever..no one felt anything,no one said anything….only a mere 7 seconds had passed,and it felt they were locked in each others arms since forever…they knew they belonged there..

Gunjan suddenly woke up from her dream land and realized she was in an audi with hundreds of people…she broke the hug…she was red,from head to toe..

GUNJAN-congratulations Samrat…

SAMRAT-thanks chashmish…….aur congrats ke liye BHI thanks….

GUNJAN-she blushed even more…who main

SAMRAT-chhodo…yeh btao,result kya aya..

GUNJAN-oh!main toh bhool gayi,mera result abhi hai..mujhe jaana hai…

SAMRAT-saath chalet hain

GUNJAN-tum thak gayye hoge,tum ruko,main abhi aati hu

SAMRAT-meri toh saari thakaan dur ho gayi…thanks to u..chalo chalein

they reached,and the host was announcing the result…she didn't care,she had won already…he squeezed her hand…she skipped a heart beat again..

HOST-excel mein hote huye,excel ki star na jeete,yeh toh ho he nai sakta..the winner is-MISS GUNJAN BHUSHAN!!

Edited by qqqqqqqq2 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: _Monu_

HIIII!! JUST FINISH TO READ UR FF!!!!

AND I LOVE IT!!! SO CUYEY!!!
ALL PARTS ARE FABOULOS!!!
CONT SOON WHEN U HAVE TIME!!
SEE YAA!!


hey....thanks a lot.....im trying!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
hey honey all your parts were awesome and the way mayur danced, oh gosh it was just tooooooooooo good man. Can we please have more mayur. I am sorry if i haven't commented after each part. I just love your ff. Do update soon. God bless. Great work.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
@qqqqqqqq2 it was really a gr8 prt........I loved all sajan prts........they r just written so romantically..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
nd yea even the mayur prts r written well........plz cont. asap........
Luv Adya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
omg omg sweety wat a mindblowing part yaar.........really luved it........aur Sajan ka 1st hug.... man that was simply outstanding, rocking luved to core plzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
hey nic part......lukin forward 4 more.....lyked whn samm said...chashmish jahaa ....main waha,....hehehehe
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Senny

hey honey all your parts were awesome and the way mayur danced, oh gosh it was just tooooooooooo good man. Can we please have more mayur. I am sorry if i haven't commented after each part. I just love your ff. Do update soon. God bless. Great work.


hey...thanks a lot...m just balancing mayur and sajan equally...its always in alternate parts....next will be a mayur oriented part and so on...thanks for ur appreciation ...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
Opps! i need to read last 3part as i missed it :(
"ll read as fast as i can then 'll comment :)
Love
piya.

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