FF:PYAAR KI MANZIL..(updated:part14/pg no.30) - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
its awesome.........I just read it completely today!!! plz continue soon..... I'm eagerly w8ing for a update........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72
NICE PART....
granny eager to meet gunji..
imao...im waiting to read fiurther..

continue soon...
Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Pyaar ki manzil(sweet si love story)

Part :9.

A boy: hey dia?u looking gorgeous..

Dia: (smiles) thanxx!! ( the boy leaves)

2 girls talking..

Girl 1: who dono ko toh dekho!! They look too awkward?

Girl 2: haan dekho ..puri party main kisi bhi youngster ne inke jaise behanji type kapdey nahi pehney hai!!

Nxt scene..

A boy: wahh! Dude un do ladkiyon ko toh dekh!! Sab se alag toh hai par they look lyk heaven angels?.

Boy 2: saach!! Dude!!

Girl 1: par just see? who do ladkey undono ke hi barey main baath kar rahey hai!!!

Sammy: kyunki babes they r different..

Girl2: ohh samrat!!!

Sammy:xcuse me babes!!

Sammy goes to dadi?..

Sammy: dadi aap ne dekh un dono ko??

Dadi: kahan tuney toh milaya hi nahi..woh phate kapdey walon ko mila hay par in pariyon se toh nahi milaya..:(

Sammy: ooooohkay!! Toh main miladoon??

Dadi: neki aur pooch pooch?mila?

Sammy: aabhi aya..bas yungay aur un dono ko leke aaya?

Sam goes to nup& gunji..who r standing aside..

Nupur: by god gunjan?kaise boring party hai na?is party aur morena ki party ko hum compare karengey toh morena ki party ki baat hi kuch aur hogi..par yeh..

Just then sam comes?

Sam: hey babes ..

Nup: oh!! Samrat!!

Sam: nupur tumhey yeh party boring lag rahi hai?

Nup: haan ba?nahi..toh kitni acchi party?

Sam:kaise hoti hai party tumhare morena main???

Nup:who toh bas pooch hi math..kitni acchi hoti wahan mki party..sablog ek dusre ke saath celebrate kartey hai?naach gaan ahota hai..par yahan toh sab apney main hi hai..

Sam:oh!!!waise ek minute mujhe tum dono kisse se milana hai..

nup:kisse??

Sam: hmmm..hai koi..

Nup: kon?? Girlfrnd??

Sam: haan girlfrnd hi samajhlo..woh bhi 1st girlfrnd?

Nup: okay..chalo?

Sam: gunjan ji aap nahi chalengey??

Gunjan: n?.

Nup: aarey ..samrat chalo who aayegi hi..gunjan chal na mujhe yahn thaire thaire bore ho rah hai..

Gunji:thik hai di chaliye..

Nupur nd gunji go with sam?they go to..dadi

Sam:nupur gunji yeh meri girlfriend meri sweet si sexy dadi?

Nup/gunji:namstey..

Sam:dadi yeh hai who angels..nupur aur gunjan..

Dadi:sam main aaj tak tere kitna saarey phatey kapdey doston se mili hoon aaj pehli baar tere kise acchey doston se mili hoon?

Sam:dadi samrat?ki choice hi sab se alag hoti hai..

Dai:haan?..tum dono Mumbai kit oh nahi lagti..

Nup:haan hum yahn ke nahi hum morena ke hai..

Dadi:nupur beta tum hamesha itna hi baat karti ho???

Nup:arrey..da..main aapko dadi keh sakti hoon na??

Dadi:areey yeh bhi koi poochne waali baat hai??

Nup:toh dadi waise main actually itna nahi issey kai zyada baat karti hoon..by god yahn toh bahut kam baat kartey hai log jaise baat karenge toh muh se moti jhadd ne lagengey?aur gunjan ki oh poochoi hi math yeh bahut kam bolti hai..

Dadi: haan ..dikh bhi rahi hai yeh gunjan..bhaut kaam bat karti hai..

Nupur: aur dadi aap ko pata hai?(she tells dadi something)

Sam: bas yeh dono ko ek dusrey ki company ki hi kami thi?.woh bhi puri ho gayi?ahh gun?chashmish?

Gunjan see samrat..

Sam: aab yeh dono bandh nahi honey waley hai ..tum toh baat bhi nahi karogi..aur baat karengey toh bas yeh dono hi toh..tum mere saaath chalo..warna yahn baithey baithey boreeee hojaogi?.

Gunjan see nup nd dadi talking..nd she is confused..nd gives a lil smiles?

Gunjan: haan chalo?

Sam & gunjan goes ?

Gunjan is quite?.

Sam thinking.: kya behnen hai?bilkul opposite??ek itna baat karti hai ki samney wala kuch bol hi na paye..aur dusri aapni hi padayii main aur ek baat bhi nhi bolti hai..hmmmm?

On the other side???

Dadi & nup talking nonstop?..

Nup: dadi ek baat poochoon??

Dadi:haan poochu beta?

Nup: aap kahan ki ho??????matlab?aap Mumbai ki ho ki kahin aur ki jaise hum morena ke...

Dadi: aarrey beta main bhi morena ki hi hoon..main yahan meri shaadi ke baad ayii hoon?.

Nup: arrey wahh!! Aap bhi morena ki hoo??

Dadi smiles?

Nup: phir toh humari bahut jamegi?

Dadi: haan..waisey bhi yeh Mumbai walon main toh tameez naam ki cheez hi nahi hai..kuch bhi bolo ladkon ko chipakti hai?

Nup: bye god!!!

Dadi: aabhi do min ke andar dekh?samrat ke paas jayengi puri ladkiyann?

Nup: haan dadi ji yahn ki ladkiyon ka koi bharosa nahi?aur dadi ji aap ko pata hai uaday hai na who na humari class ki ek ladki pe marta hai?

Dadi: ladki??? Aur who bhi uday us pe marta hai?? Who kon hai laki?? Yahan aayii hai kya??

Nup: dadi aap to mere se bhi super fast ho gayi ho?aurrrr?who ladki ka naam CJ hai aur who parties main nahi ati hai?

Dadi: yeh ladki hi hai?mainey pehli baar excel coll ki koi ladki ke barey main aisa suna hai joh parties main nahi aati?

Nup: aur dadi aap ko pata hai aur zyada fashion bhi nahi karti hai? bilkul ''TOMBOY'' jaise rehti hai?

Dadi: kya?tomboy?

Nup: haan dadi?

Nup: aur dadi ..apa ko toh pata hi hoga..morena main parties kaisey kartey hai..aur yahan toh kuch bhi mauj maza hi nahi hai?

Dadi: haan beta..mujhey pata hai?main kya karun mujhey is ki aadat hi ho gayi hai jaisey?

Just then mayank enters?

Nup: lohhh!! Yeh boring peson bhi aa gay..aab toh party aur bhi battar?

Dadi: kaun????

Nup: who mayank?hamesha mujh se jhagda kartey rehta hai..

Dadi: nahi beta...mayank toh bahut aacha hai....

dadi: waisey dadi is party ko rocking bananey ka mere paas ke plan hai..

nup: kya?...

dadi explains nup something....

nup: waah dadi!!!

Dadi: toh chal...

Dadi n nup both goes to DJ...

Dadi takes the mike...

Dadi: aaj ki party kuch boring hai..toh kuch tadka lagaya jaye..

Sam nd gunjan see's dadi?...

Sam: waah sexy..!! hojaye tadka...

Dadi: so 1 2 3 ?lets start...

Lets Go(If U Feeling Me Make Some Noise, Ladies And Gentlemen Raise Ur VoiceNa Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na.......) - 2, Lets GoSam goes on th dance floor…nd dia goes back of him.. Uday too goes…Tu Hai Meri Soniye, I'll Be With You Night And DayJab Tujhe Dekhe Najare, Kismat Konnection Ho JayeEverybody On The Floor, Make Some Noise Aa Karle ShorDeewaanepan Ka Hai JorCome On Everybody Now Sing It One Time Sha(Aai Pappi Aai Paapi Aai) - 3 Wanna Take You Higher(Aai Pappi Aai Paapi Aai) - 3 Higher And HigherNup nd dadi drags gunjan… (Badali Badali Si Raate, Sach Ho Gai Saari Baate) - 2Yeh Kushiyon Ki Saugate, Jaise Rab Ki Hai DuaEverybody With Me Swing, Lets All Dance Tonite AwayDil Mein Ho Hai Aa Keh DeCome On Everybody Now Hit It Like Dat Yeh(Aai Pappi Aai Paapi Aai) - 3 Wanna Take You Higher(Aai Pappi Aai Paapi Aai) - 3 Higher And HigherEvery one on th dance floor…annie with jacko…Lets Go, Rock Down Feel My FlowBaby Take It Easy, I M Nice N SlowWana Show You, Why We Ought To Be TwoWhena Whena Make You Part Of That I DoCant Do Without U Cant Test A FarNeed U In My Life N I Cant DenyNeed It In The Starry Skies, I Don't LieWithout You My Heart Rather Die(If U Feeling Me Make Some Noise, Ladies And Gentlemen Raise Ur VoiceNa Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na Na.......) - (2) (Peechhe Duniya Main Aage, Mere Soye Aarman Jaage) - 2Ab Toh Bas Aisa Lage, Mere Kadmo Mein JahanEverybody Join The Song Keep The Party Going OnYaaron Hum Se Badhkar KaunCome On Everybody Now Hit It Like That Sha(Aai Pappi Aai Paapi Aai) - 3 Wanna Take You Higher(Aai Pappi Aai Paapi Aai) - 3 Higher And Higher, Lets Go Tu Hai Meri Soniye, I'll Be With You Night And DayJab Tujhe Dekhe Najare, Kismat Konnection Ho JayeEverybody On The Floor, Make Some Noise Aa Karle ShorDeewaanepan Ka Hai JorCome On Everybody Now Sing It One Time Sha(Aai Pappi Aai Paapi Aai) - 3 Wanna Take You Higher(Aai Pappi Aai Paapi Aai) - 3 Higher And Higher

Hope u guuys liked this update..

Plzz DO COMMENT...

Edited by maniasings - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
HEY VERY COOL!!!
JUST LOVE IT
1 REQUEST.....
NEXT TIME SOME MAYUR NOHK JOHKS
SUPERB
CONT SOON
TAKE UR TIME
SEE YAA
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
awesome work dear...i was actually imagining everything
mindblowing
plz add more of mayur
dadi-nupur jodi was awesome
plz can you pm me on ur nxt update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
Imagination is such a wonderful power! i love ur imagination!! pls doo write more!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
another good update..

i love ur FF..
it was soo cute..
dadi-nups jodi rocking...

sammy gnji..moving alone..lol..

plss continue soon..
Posted: 16 years ago
#78
thanx every one for the comments............
Posted: 16 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: sweetshab

another good update..

i love ur FF..
it was soo cute..
dadi-nups jodi rocking...

sammy gnji..moving alone..lol..

plss continue soon..

thanx.!!
sam nd gunji move alone but they don't even utter a single word!!!:)
nd thanx for commenting...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80

nice but where was mayank, there was no mayur. please have mayur in it as well. thanks.

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