FF:PYAAR KI MANZIL..(updated:part14/pg no.30) - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
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SUPERB!!!
TOO GOOD!!
CONT SOON!
TAKE UR TIME!!
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Sajan to cute!!!thnx a lot!!!!do continue soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ynaiita

Sajan to cute!!!thnx a lot!!!!do continue soon!!!

ynaiita

they are cute....
i'll continue soon...
n thanxx
Edited by maniasings - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
#64

Pyaar ki manzil(sweet si love story)

Part :8

Nupur nd gunjan back to their home

Sammy , benji nd uday..at Sammy's house?

Dia ,annie& jacko in shopping mall?

Dia: hey lets first select dress?

Annie: haannn..

They go to ladies wear?

Annie: hmm?show us party wear gowns?

Sales man.(s.m): ya sure mam..

Sales man shows somes dress..

Annie: dia woh wala kaisa hai? Red knee length gown??

Dia: hm..aacha nahi hai..woh wala black nd white..(points her finger to wards a knee length frock)

Annie: excuse me ..woh wala batao..

Dia: yahh..it's perfect?pack it..

Annie completes the billing?

Annie: chale dia???

Dia: yahh..chalo..

Dia,annie&jacko leaves..

At gunur's house?.itz 8:15 pm?

Gunjan: di!! Papa kahan hai??
nupur: papa aabhi yahin gaye hai atey hi hongey!!!

Nupur: gunjan chal koi movie dekhtey hai!! Aaj toh bahut hi bore ho raha hai?

Gunjan: haan di aaj bahut bore ho raha hai chalo koi aachi si movie dekhtey hai?.

Nupur : chal dostana dekhtey hai?

Gunjan: hmmmm???

Nupur: rab ne banadi Jodi!!

Gunjan: ?.nahi di hum ghajini dekhtey hai!!

Nupur: haann..

Just The bell rings..

Nupur: papa hi hongey?

Gunjan: di main darwaza kholke aati hoon aap movie lagao?.

Nupur: theek hai?
gunjan opens the door?.it's gunur's dad.. papa come's in and gunji closes the door?

Gunjan: aap kahan gaye they??

Papa: bas ek dosth se milney gaya tha?aur yeh lo tum dono ke liye kuch laya hoon?

gunjan takes the cover..

gunjan: aap fresh ho jao aur hum movie dekhtey hai?.

Nupur: yeh kya hai gunjan??

Gunjan: woh..!! di papa ne diya hai yeh hum dono ke liye?

Nupur: kya hai??

Gunjan: ice cream?.choclates nd movies ki cd's?aur yeh pop corn!!!

Nupur: waooo?

Gunjan: di main yeh chocolates fridge main rakh deti hoon..

nupur: theek hai?

gunur's dad: chalo bacho movies dekhtey hai..

all the 3 sits to see the movie?eating pop corn?

it's 9:30..

gunur's dad: aacah aab main so raha hoon tum dono bhi jaldi dekh kar soo jao..

gunji: ji papa?

gunur's dad leaves?

nupur: gunjan aab tere fav song aney wala hai?

gunjan: haann ..

after some time?( the end of the movie)

gunjan: aacha di aab chalo so jatey hai..aabhi 11:00pm ho rahe hai..

nupur: haan gyarah(11) toh bajengey hi na gunjan ?agar movie dekhi hai toh thoda late toh sona padaga hi na ?

they walks to their room..

gunjan: aacha di?good night?

nupur: kal toh college ki chutti hai na?

gunjan: haan..

nupur: aacha?good night?

nxt morning..(itz the party day)

nupur: gunjan aaj yoh college nahi hai na..

gunji: haan di aaj college nahi hai?

nupur: gunj?.

Phone rings?

Nupur: main dekhti hon?

Nupur picks the call..

Nupur: hello..

Other side: hello..main samrat..kya main gunjan se baat kar sakta hoon??

Nupur: hm..haaan..

Nupur: gunjannnnnn..tere liye phone..

Gunjan: ek mint di aayi?

Gunjan comes?

Gunjan: kiska hai di?

Nupur: who samrat ka..

Gunjan: samrat ka??

Gunjan takes the phone..

Gunjan: hello?samrat?..

Samrat:haan gunjan main hi hoon?

Gunji:haa?tum?

Samrat: chashmish?

Gunjan: phone kis liye kiya??

Samrat: woh ek aur baar yaad dila ne ke liye ki aaj mere ghar party hai..tum aa rahi hoon na?

Gunjan: woh!!!

Samrat: arey main bhi kaisa bhulakkad hoon..isiliye exams main aachey marks nahi aatey..kal hi toh tum ney kaha tha

na ki tum aa rahi hoo?

gunjan: who samrat?

samrat: haan chashmish?? ?

gunjan: w??

samrat: tum toh aab kuch bolney nahi wali..theek..kya main nupur se baat kar sakta hoon???

Gunjan: haan..

gunjan: di!! Samrat aap se baat karna chahta hai..

samrat: do sisters?ek bulane ko chillati hai aur ek softly bultati ahi!!oh!!! chashmish!!

Gunjan: tum ne kuch kaha??

Samrat: um..hm?na!!!..kaha na nupurr se baat karni hai?

nupur takes the phone..

nupur: hello?

samrat: hello..nupur?.mainey tumhey usi din invite kiya tha par tum kuch aachey mood main nahi thi..toh aaj ek aur baar party ke liye invite kar raha hoon..plzz aana?

nupur: haan..hum aa rahe hai?

samrat: aur chash ??gunjan ko bhi lana..

nupur: haan gunjan bhi aa rahi hai?..

samrat: thanxx?byee?

nupur: byee..(hangs the phone)

gunjan: dii aap ja rahi hoo samrat ki party main??

Nupur: main hi nahi gunjan hum dono ja rahe hai..

Gunjan: par?

Nupur: haan mujhey pata hai ki tu keh rahi hai ki :main samrat ko galat samaj rahi thin na..haan main samrat ko galat samajh rahi thi par wohh aacha hi hai..aur usney yeh third time humey invite kiya hai ..jana toh padega?

Gunjan: haan?

Its night 8:00pm?

At samrat's house..

Dadi: arrey uday chal mehmaan aney lage hai..aur tu hai ki ladkiyon ki tarah 2 ghantey e tayaar ho raha hai?.

Uday: ladkiyon ki tarah??? Nahi dadi yeh toh aaj kal ke ladkon ka fashion hai?

Dadi: fashion??? Huh? Kya fashion hai?

Uday: arey dadi samrat bhi toh tayaar ho raha hai na?.

Dadi: samrat?? Who toh kab ka hi tayar ho gaya hai?.

Uday: samrat tayaar ho gaya??

Dadi: aab yeh batein band kar aur jaldi neechey aaa?sarey mehmaan aa gaye hai?

Dadi leaves?

Uday: main ladkiyon ki tarah tayaar nahi honga toh mujhey koi ladki kaise pasand karegi??umm ?

Uday: chal chaltey haai uday!! Kon kon si ladkiyan aayi hogi is party main?..

Uday goes down stairs..

Uday : hello( to a girl)

A girl: hii!! I want a orange drink?

Uday: okay..waiterrrrrrrrrrr

Waiter: yes sir..

Uday: madam ko ek orange drink do?

Waiter: yes sir: main aabhi lata hoon..

Nxt near samrat

Girl: hii samrat?

Samrat: helo babes..

Girl: cool party?

Samrat: thanx babes?

A girl standing back to samrat: hey hello sam?samrat?

Samrat turns to that girl..

Samrat: hey candy?u look awesome..

Dia is wearing:

Dia: oohh!! Sammy..u too look gr8!! (sam & dia hav a hug)

Dia: woh Sammy? bakhi aur sab aa gaye kya??

Sammy: baakhi kaun dia sab to aa gaye..

Dia: sab aa gaye??

Sammy: haan sab aa gaye?

Dia: ohh! Who gunjan aur auski behan nupur bhi aa gayi kya??

Sammy: ohh!! Woh dono nahi aayi!!

Dia: ohh!! Shayad who ayengi bhi nahi!!

Sammy: nahi who aayengi!!

Dia: tumhey kaisey pata??

Sammy: samrat ko har baat maloom hoti hai na candy!!

Dia: ohh!!

Sammy: hey sexy!!!

Dadi : haan puttar!!

Sammy: yeh hai candy!! I mean dia?

Dadi: dia?.( see's dia with a weird look) heelo jii?

Dia: hello aun..dadi!!

Dadi: aacha tum samrat se baat karo main aur mehmaan ko dekhkar aati hoon?

Dia: yaahh sure dadi?

Dadi: aur samrat ek mint ke liye zara yahn aa..(dia smiles)

Samrat: yes sexy..(they walk a side..)

Dadi: aab band kar yeh sexy?vexy..

Samrat: hmm..okay?sexy..

Dadi: aacha aab bas..aur kya yehi who ladki thi..

Samrat: noo dadi..

Dadi: phir who nahia aa rahii hai kya??

Samrat: nahi dadi..woh aayegi ..aur who bhi grand entry ke saath?

Just then..

A voice.: oho gunjan?

Samrat turns toward the voice?(itz nupur & gunjan)

Samrat : lo dadi aapki do company aa gayi?

Nupur is wearing:

Gunjan wearing:
nupp...
Dadi: wahh!! Kitni pyaari ladkiyan hai?

Samrat: phir main yehi toh kehta hoon?inki specialty?

Dadi: teri is party main in dono ne hi pure kapdey pehney hai?.

Uday:welcome ?.nupur?gunjan..

Nupur:hello??

Gunjan:hello..uday..

Sam:ek minute dadi main abhi aaya?

Sam goes to nups & gunji..

Sam:welcome angels..

Nupur:hii samrat..par angels????

Sam:who kya hai na..main sabko kisi na kisi naam se pukarta hoon..par meri dadi ko tum log angels lagi..toh maine soncha why not angels..waise bhi maine abhi tak tum dono ke liye koi naam nahi soncha tha...

Nupur:ohhh..

Sam: hello chashmish...

Gunji:hii...

Hope u guuys liked this update..

Plzz DO COMMENT?

Edited by maniasings - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
superb , superb update
nice costumes
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
awsome update......loved it...
superb dresses........nice choice...
nd angels......wow
plzzz cont soooonn....ASAP......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67

AWESOME update
Angels does suit Gunur a lot. And Dia is rejected and Gunjan is
accepted. Woh toh hona hi tha Gunjan ko koi na nahi keh sakta.
LOVED the dresses even Dia's
Update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
cooll part plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
WOW
VERY NICE
COOL DRESSES
LOVE IT
CON SOON
WHEN U HAVE TIME
SEE YAA
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
cool!! do write some more later!

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