FF:PYAAR KI MANZIL..(updated:part14/pg no.30) - Page 10

thanxx a ton every one........

Pyaar ki manzil(sweet si love story) ......the main part of the whole party.......srry guys for the mistakes..:)

Part 11.......

Dadi calls mayank and Sammy..nd tell them something..

Samm:woohh..kool!!

Mayank:par dadi main???

Dadi:arrey puttar tum dono hi karogey to party rocking ho jayegi..

Mayank:par dadi..

Dadi:par var kuch nahi..

Ab jao tum dono?

The lights off..

Sammy comes with guitar..

Nd mayank playing piano..

Seeing Sammy with guitar nd mayank playing piano..

All girls go gaga over them..Sammy:Bholi si soorat aankhon mein masti Ay hayArre bholi si soorat aankhon mein masti door khadi sharmaaye Ay hayEk jhalak dikhlaaye kabhi kabhi aanchal mein chhup jaayeAy hayMeri nazar se tum dekho to yaar nazar vo aaye Mayank:Bholi si soorat aankhon mein masti door khadi sharmaayeAy hayEk jhalak dikhlaaye kabhi kabhi aanchal mein chhup jaayeAy hayMeri nazar se tum dekho to yaar nazar vo aaye Bholi si soorat aankhon mein masti Ay hayNupur totally lost in the song?which happens to be her dream song?She imagine..some guy singing this for her..but till now she haven't saw his face.. Nupur:Hmmm.... lala..Ahah.. lalala..Ahah.. lalala..Dadi sees nupur stunningly?the way she's lost in the song?Nupur imagines..there is no one..other than her and her dream guy..their is fog everywhere..she is in red gown..nnd the guy in black shirt................ Sammy:Ladki nahin hai vo jaadu hai aur kaha kya jaaye(Sammy runs his hand over his hair)Raat ko mere khwaab mein aaye vo zulfein bikhraayeAankh khuli to dil chaaha phir neend mujhe aa jaayeBin dekhe ye haal hua dekhoon to kya ho jaaye Bholi si soorat aankhon mein masti door khadi sharmaayeAy hayEk jhalak dikhlaaye kabhi kabhi aanchal mein chhup jaayeAy hayMeri nazar se tum dekho to yaar nazar vo aaye Bholi si soorat aankhon mein masti Ay hay ..Gunji too is enjoying the song..even shes lost..in some other world? Like her dream worldGunji:lalala....Hmmm..lalala..Ahahahahah......lalalalla....Everyone & Sammy is shocked to see gunji singing...Mayank:Saawan ka pehla baadal uska kaajal ban jaayeMauj uthay saagar mein jaise aise kadam uthaayeRab ne jaane kis mitti se uske ang banaayeChham se kaash kahin se mere saamne vo aa jaaye ..Sammy&mayank:Bholi si soorat aankhon mein masti door khadi sharmaayeAy hayEk jhalak dikhlaaye kabhi kabhi aanchal mein chhup jaayeAy hayMeri nazar se tum dekho to yaar nazar vo aaye Bholi si soorat aankhon mein masti door khadi sharmaayeAy hayAy hay ...

Nupur,mayank,sammy,gunjan..are totally lost in their world?

Everyone claps?

They all come back to their senses except nupur?.

Sammy: kaisa tha dadi?.?

Dadi: kamaal ka tha puttar who dekh nupur abhi khoi hui hai ?.

Dadi goes towards nupur

Sammy goes to gunji

Sammy:waah chashmish tum ne toh hosh hi uda diye sab ke?

gunji feels shy?.

Nupur is still in her dream

A guy is coming near nupur?. nupur is in red gown and the guy is seen its ?..(it's a secret)

Just then dadi pats on nupurs shounlder

When nupur comes to her senses she see mayank in front of her?

Nupur:tum??

Mayank:kya?

Dadi:kya hua puttar main ne tumhe jagaya tumhare khayalon main se mayank nahi

Napur:who? wohhhh

Dadi:acha ab bata kaunse khayalon main khoi hui thiii

Nupur: kuch nahi dadi? bas?waqt aane par sabse pehle aapko hi bataungi

Dadi smiles and nupur leaves

Mayank:bilkul pagal hai?

Dadi:haan who toh hai? par beta tu kahan khogaya tha gaatey waqt?

Mayank:kuch nahi dadi? mayank smiles and leaves

Dadi:kya baat hai dono ke dono khayalon main doobe hue hai? kahin dono ek doosre ke khayalon main toh nahi khoye hue the?

And she turn? she sees sajan talking and feels happy

The party is almost over?

All the guests are leaving

Nupur comes to gunjan

Nupur:chale gunjan?

Gunjan:haan di chalo?

They both go to dadi

both: dadi humey abhi chalna chahiye?

dadi:arrey beta itni raat gaye akele kaise jaaonge

nupur:arrey dadi hum akele kahan hai hum toh do hai naa

dadi: nahi beta aise raat main do akeli ladkinya nahi jaati.. tum log ruko

dadi calls uday

dadi:uday puttar indono ko chod aa puttar

uday:dadi im feeling tiered

dadi:tu toh hamesha hi bahane batata hai

dia:hey sammy?(always chipku! Huh!!! Sammy sammy kabab main haddi)

sammy:yess candy????

Dia:you were rocking asusual!!yeh song kis ke liye tha..(blushing..

Samy:tha kisi spl ke liye..

dadi then calls Sammy?.

Samy: I'll b just rite back candy..

Dia smiles..

Dia: okay bye sammy ..(they both hav a hug)dia leaves?

Sam goes to dadi?

Sammy:yes sexy?

Dadi: Sammy puttar zara in dono ko inke ghar chod aa beta yeh dono itni raat main akeli kaise jaayengi?

Sammy: theek hai dadi waise bhi main jaa hi raha hoon mayank ko drop karne inko bhi drop kardoonga

Dadi: mayank ko kyun?

Sammy:uski car kharab hogayi dadi?

Dadi:acha beta jaa inko chod kar jaldi ghar aa? zyaada der mat kar

Then gunjan and nupur takes ashirwaad from dadi

Dadi:jindi reh putta..

They leave

In the car

Nupur and gunjan are sitting on the back seat

Nupur:samrat tum bahut acha gaatey hoo?.

Sammy:thanx nupur? tum bhi kamaal ka gana gati ho nupur?

Nupur:sach main?.

Mayank clear his throat?

Nupur asks wats the matter

Mayank:tum aise gaa rahi thi jaise tum kisi gali ke nuked par khadi hokar bheek maang rahi ho

Nupur:mayank tum apna mooh band hi rakho toh acha rahega

Nupur:tum toh aise gaa rahe the jaise saare gadhe chila chila kar ro rahe hai?

Gunji is smiling looking at them

Sammy see gunjan from the back view mirror

Mayank:tum apni jubaan par lagam lagao?

Nupur:tum pehle lagao mr monkey

Gunjan is trying to calm down nupur

Gunjan:diii ab jaane bhi do naa

Nupur:tu ruk gunjan tu kuch nahi pata

Gunjan sees Sammy as for help

Sammy from the mirror say her ssshhhhhh?and wink at her

Mayank:tum apne aapko samajhti kya ho miss morena..

Nupur:main jo bhi samajhti hoon apne aapko tum apne aapko kya samajhte ho languor?

Mayank:nupur ab bahut hogaya?

Nupur:kyun mayank? Kyun zaban band hogayi tumhari..?

Mayank:main keh raha hoon nupur? ab agar main bigad gaya toh pata nahi tumhara kya hoga

Car breaks down

gunjan:kya hua?

Sammy:pata nahi car kharab hogayi shayad

Nupur:ab yeh kya hogaya? mujhe pata tha jab yeh mayank humare saath that oh kuch na kuch bura hona hi tha?

Mayank:ab bas nupur?

Sammy chks and says now we want water but where can we get that?

Sammy:main abhi us aur jaakar dekhta hoon pani ke liye

Gunjan:main bhi chalti hoon tumhare saath

Gunjan and samrat leaves

Mayank and nupur are waiting for them

Its about an hour they left for water

Nupur:1/2 ghanta hogaye hai yeh dono kahan chale gaye?

Mayank:chinta mat karo nupur aajayenge

Nupur:par kab aayenge?? Nupur is tensed

Mayank :chalo hum bhi chaltey hai unhe dhoondne

Nupur:haan chalo

Just then gunjan and samrat come back

Nupur:kahan chale gaye the tum log?

Gunjan:who dii? pani bahut door mila

Sammy winks gunjan

And they all sit in the car

Sammy looks in the mirror

Gunjan smiles

They reach bhushan mansion

Sammy:bye nupur, bye chashmish

Mayank:bye gunjan

Gunjan and nupur:bye

Nupur turn see mayank and leaves

Mayank and Sammy also leave

Gunjan is in the lawn

Flashback

In the party after the song?..

Sammy:tumhe pata hai chashmish..

Gunjan:kya samrat?

Sammy:mujhe lagta hai ki nupur aur mayank ek doosre ko pasand karte hai

gunji:what? Nai aisa kuch nai hai

sammy:mujhe pata hai chashmish main tumhe prove kar ke dikhaonga

gunji:par..

sammy:par var kuch nahi? just wait and watch?

then gunjan comes to the present

nupur:gunjan tu yahan khadi kya sonch rahi hai

gunjan:kuch nahi diii

in the room

nupur is talking to herself

nupur:jo mere khayaalo mein hamesha se tha kya who mayank hai???

Gunjan is listeng from outside of their room

Nupur:kya main mayank se pyaar?. Nahi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta? par aisa ho bhi sakta hai?.nahi nahi?nupur tujhe neend bahut aarahi hai chal soja

Nupur goes to her sleep?.

Gunjan to herself: haan di aap mayank se pyaar karti ho?..

Then gunjan also sleep

Nxt Morning:

Gunjan is preparing breakfast

Nupur comes and hugs gunjan

Nupur:tune mujhe kyun nahi uthaya ganjan? Sab akele karli

Gunjan:di maine soncha ki tum thak gayi hoo toh main tumhey nahi uthayi

Nupur: acha theek hai bata kuch madad chahiye..

Gunjan:nahi di bas aap chaliye sab tayaar hai

dad:goodmornig beta

nupur:good mornig papa

gunjan:good morning papa

dad: arrey beta tum dono ko batana tha ki mujhe kuch dino ke liye

London jana hai?.

Gunjan:par papa aap kab tak wapis ayenge

Papa: 1 mahina lagega beta

Nupur: papa 1 mahina?

Papa: try karoonga beta jaldi aaneki

Gunjan:aap kab jaarahe hai?

Papa: kal dopahar

Nupur:itna jaldi?. Aap kal jaa rahe ho aur aap humey aaj bata rahe ho?

Then they leave to college

Sammy:hey chashmish

Gunjan:hii samrat

Samrat: toh gunjan ab batao kya main ghalat tha

Gunjan:tum bilkul sahi the samrat

Samrat:kya? Tumhe yakeen hogaya

Gunjan:haan samrat jab hum ghar wapis gaye jab maine dii ki batein suni

Samrat:mayank se?

Gunjan:nahi apnea apse

Samrat:waah gunjan?ab humey nupur ki dil ki baat toh maloom hogaya ab humey mayank ki dil ki baat jana hai

Scene shifts to nupur class

Nupur:hii CJ

CJ:hii nupur kaisi ho?

Mayank: achi hi hogi use kya hoga?.

Nupur:nahi mera toh din hi kharab hogaya subah subah languor ko jo dekhliya

Cj: oh guys ab bas bhi karo

Nupur:haan chalo cj hum canteen chaltey hai

Mayank:uske alava tum jaa bhi kahan sakti ho

Nupur: ab bas mayank?

CJ and NUPUR leave

Nupur:CJ kal tum party main kyun nahi aayi

CJ: who actually tumhey toh pata hai naa nupur mere hostel main kitni problem ho rahi hai? kal bhi problem hogayi thi?

Nupur: tum hostel kyun nahi chod deti?

CJ: kahan rahoon?

Nupur: mere ghar par?

CJ: pagal hogayi ho kya?

Nupur:pagal kyun?? Atleast jab tak tum doosri rehne ki jaga nahi dhoond leti jab tak toh reh sakti ho naa

CJ: par nupur?

Nupur: par nahi var nahi? aaj tum aaogi

CJ: thanx nupur

Nupur: ismain thanx kyun???

Nxt scene Sammy and gunjan???.

Gunjan: samarat par humey mayank ki dil ki baat kase pata chale giii

Samrat: I have a plan babes?.

Gunjan: plan??

Samrat: haan plan and tell the plan to gunjan?.

Gunjan: kya? Issey pata kaise chale gaa

Samrat: tum bas dekhti jaao?.

Samrat: aur gunjan kal sharp 1 baje tum mujhe caf xango main milo?

Gunjan: par kal toh nahi ho sakta samrat? kal papa bahar jaa rahe hai?

Samrat: okay then papa ko imean uncle ko drop karne ke baad?.

Its evening?

Bhushan mansion

Bell rings

Nupur opens the door?

Nupur: time kya ho raha hai?

CJ: who nupur thoda paking main der hogayi

Nupur: acha ab cholo?

They both go inside

Nupur tells the whole story of Cj to her dad?

At the dinner table?.

Gunjan is not at the dinner table? shes not feeling hungry so she is in her room?

Dad:ab tum teeno akeli kaise rahogi ghar main..

Nupur:par papa

CJ: dariye nahi unkle main hoon naa?

Nupur: haan papa aapko pata hai cj black belt hai?

In the room

Gunjan is on the phone?

Gunjan:haan

Gunjan: par aise kaise?

Gunjan: haan pata hai par nahi ho sakta??.

Gunjan: nahi radhika main kal nahi aa sakti kal papa jaa rahe hai aur hum papa ko chodne ke liye jaana hai naa

Radhika: haan gunjan par uske baad toh aa sakti ho naa?

Gunjan: nahi radhika mujhe kuch kaam hai uske baad?.

Radhika: acha theek hai gunjan jaise tu theek samjhe?.

Gunjan: okay bye?

She thinks

Gunjan:kya samrat ka plan se pata chalega mayank ke dil ki baad?.

After somtime..Cj nd nupur enters ........all the three talks somethingnd goes to sleep

hope u guuys liked this update..

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ITS AWESOME YAAR..........LOVED IT COMPLETELY

wow nice story!!! um i cant wait to read what will happen next...update soon....me waiting!!!

Nupur and Gunjan lost in their dream worlds and Nupur
ka prince charming Mayank. Chalo atleast Nupur ne accept kar diya.
Sajan are going in the right track. There scenes were the best. Ab Mayank ke liye kya plan hai. Jaldi update karo. Mujhe pata lagana hai.
Update soon
and Yea bhul gayi it was SUPERB

Originally posted by: TINAMALHONTRA

Nupur and Gunjan lost in their dream worlds and Nupur
ka prince charming Mayank. Chalo atleast Nupur ne accept kar diya.
Sajan are going in the right track. There scenes were the best. Ab Mayank ke liye kya plan hai. Jaldi update karo. Mujhe pata lagana hai.
Update soon
and Yea bhul gayi it was SUPERB

thanx ruchi mayur

hey coool part....

hey a very very very cool part darl...

awesome!!!thnx for updating!!!do cont. soon!