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Posted: 16 years ago
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PYAAR KI MANZIL (sweet si love story)

Srry 4 the late update..😉

(Recap: mayank as bartender , devdhar sir as DJ devo?.in nupur's dream..)

Part :5

Nupur in her room in front of mirror..

Nupur: gunjan aaj toh mujhey bahut hi maza aa gaya mere sapney main..tujhey pata hai..

Gunjan: diii..aapne kaha tha na ki college se aaye baad main aap sunaogi aapna sapna..

Nupur:hmm..:)

Gunjan: aacha aab chalo breakfast kar lete hai..

Nupur: yeh mirror bhi maujhey dekher kar crack hojata hai..kyun ki main hoon hi aise MIRROR CRACKING ..hai na?

Gunjan: haan ..meri di saaab se pyaari di hai?

They both hav a side hug..

They finishes up their break fast..

Scene cuts to mayank's house....

Mayank drinking juice..

M's mom: aacha mayank aaj mujhey atey atey thodi si late hojayegi..aaj hum bahar se order kar lenge dinner..

Mayank: nahi maa aap aney se pehle main banaunga aaj ka dinner..

M's mom: theek hai.. bye?love u..

Mayank: byee mom?love u tooo?

M's mom leaves..

Mayank: arey 8:30 hogaye maujhey bhi nikalna hoga..

Mayank takes his bag n leave..

Nxt scene to college..

Gunjan n nupur in their classes..

Nupur's class..

Uday & jacko talking to each other..

Uday: kitna maza ayega na jab samrat mr. excel banjayege..

Nupur over hears their conversation?

Nupur: yeh samrat kaun hai?

Uday: kya tum college main nayi ho?

Nupur: haan..

Uday: yeh samrat basket ball champion hai..aur mera bhai bhi..

Nupur: oohh!!!

Jacko: aur is college ka cooooooollll dude bhi..

Nupur smiles..:)

Scene shft to gunjan's class.......

Gunjan seated..jus then samrat , dia , annie enters the class..

Dia: sammy..

Samrat: ya babes..

Dia: aaj tum mere paas baitho..

Samrat: hmmm.. ya sure candy..

Dia & samrat hav a seat..

Just then mr devdher (sir) enters the class..

Every one: morning sir..

Mr.devdhar: morning..so kya aap sab ne project complete kiya?

Gunjan: haan sir..

Dia makes face..

Mr.devdhar: aur kisi ne?( no one answers)

Gunjan goes to sir's table nd keeps the project file..

Mr. devdhar ask's some questions based on their project?only gunjan answers..

Samrat slowly to gunjan: hello chashmish ji humey pata hai ki aapko sab aata hai par agar aap har time answers deti raho gi toh saab bad main aap pe hasenge..

Gunjan sits..

The bell rings..every one stands ..while going gunjan's leg slips..

Gunjan: aa..

Samrat holds her In his arms..

Dia feels jealous seeing this..

Dia: annie..chalo yahan se..

Annie: haan dia baby chalo..(they leave)

Gunjan stands..

Gunjna: sorry.

Samrat: its okay..waise this is the 3rd time..

Gunjna takes her books..she too leaves..

Samrat: wiered..koi bhi ladki samrat ke jawab ka sawal na de..sochne ki baat hai..(he leaves to caf)

Samrat : ek cold coffie..

Gunjan & nupur at caf..

Gunjan: bhaiyya do coffee..

Both gunjan n nupur take a seat on the table..

The man goes to sammy's table n gives him his cold coffee..nd then oes to g&n's table nd gives them their coffee..

They both(g&n) hav their coffee nd leaves..

While going

Nupur: by god!! Gunjan dekh toh zara in be sharmon ko..

Gunjan: kya hua di??

Nupur: kya hua?? Yeh aise mini 's pehan kar phir rahe hai jaise inmain koi sharam baqki hi nahi reh gayi..

Gunjan: haan..khair yeh chodo.....

Gunjan: aacha di main chalti hoo..meri class ka time ho jayege..

Nupur: han..

Gunjan leaves..

Mayank in library..

Mayank to the librariyan: (shows a chit) yah books kahan hai??

Librariyan: who wale block main?mayank yeh boooks tum second time le rahe ho aur is beech kisi ne bhi yah books nhai li hai aaj tak..

Mayank smiles: thank u..

Takes those books nd leaves..

Nupur: cj.......

CJ: ohh(silently).. haan..

Nup: tum us taraf kyun ja rahi hho humari class toh is taraf hai naa..

CJ: oh..thanx 4 da info sweetu..par main yeh class bunk kar rahi hoon..kyun ki aab shukla sir ki class hai..

Cj: byee..n'joy karo..(she leaves)

Nupur: ruko CJ main bhi aa rahi hoon..

She moves a step ..jus then..a voice from back..

A voice: mahodayaaa?

Nupur (slowly): yeh kaun hai..:( ( turns)

Nupur: aapp?

Shukla sir: yeh classs ka time hai aur aap kahan ja rahi ho class to is uttar (north)disha main hai..aap dakshin(south) ki taraf kyun ja rahi hoo??

Nupur : who sirr..main ???main ani pene ja rahi thi..

Sir: pani is taraf bhi milta hai..aap chalo..aur ap shudh hindi main baat karo..(he leaves)

Nupur: chal nupur........

In gunjan's class

Samrat is seated beside gunjan..

Misss aha: gud afternoon every one..

All togeather: gud afternoonnnnn..

Miss aha:so aap sab ka aab tak ka din kaisa tha??

Every one: aacha ..

Samrat: aab tak toh aacha tha par aab aap agayi toh aur bhi aacha ho jayege..

Every one laughs..

Miss aha: samrat mujh se flirting??...

Samrat: (see's gunjan ) flirting..(smiles)

Miss aha: yeh bowls main aap sab apni naam ki chits daal kar rakh do..phir jisey jiski chit ayegi who meri class main partner banega..yeh blue chits boys ki ..aur yeh pink girls ki...

Dia: annie tumhey kya lagta hai mujhey kis ki chit anni chahiye..

Miss aha : so let's start?hmm..dia..

Dia takes a chit nd write's her name..

Rest of the class also writes their own names on the other chit's..

Miss aha: okay ..aab hum pehle boys ko bulayenge..hmm..benji tum ek chit uthao..girls bowl main se..(every one gets a chit..)

Miss aha:aab girls(every one gets a chit)

Miss aha: toh pehley kaun kholega chit..

Benji: main hi kholunga..

Miss aaha: okay..aur jor(loud) se naam padna hoga.

Benji: DIA..😊

Dia makes a face..(benjii)😕

Miss aha: oaky dia aab tumhari bari tum kholo apni chit...

Dia : BENJI...😭😡

Everyone:woww..what a coincidence..

Miss aha: okay dia..tumhara partner meri class main hai benji..

By this rest of the class also thes chits..now..it's samrat's turn..

Miss aha: okay samrat aab tumhari bari..

Gunjan catching her pen..

Samrat takes a chit:GUNJAN..

Pen's slips from gunjan's hand....

Every one:..ohhh!!

Miss aha takes some class..( aah.!! No time to describe all this)

After some time..

Miss aha: okay bye every one..aaj ki humari class ka time ho gaya hai...

Miss aha leaves..

Gunjan stands..while going..her dupatta is stuck ...

Gunjan tries to take it but can't.

Samrat talking to dia..& see's gunjun in prob..

Samrat: ek min babes main abhi aata hoon.. tum jao..c u in caf..

Dia: okay par jaldi..& leaves..

Samrat goes to gunjan

Samrat: can i???

Samrat removes gunjan's dupatta which was stucked to the writing table....

Hope u guuys liked this update..

DO COMMENT...

Edited by maniasings - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42
Lovely update.. enjoyed reading..!! :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
gret part dear cont soon sweety...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear...good update yaar...
do cont soon
i loved it.....:):):)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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kya kahu awesome or fantastic 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
LOVELY PART!!!
IM ENJOING READING UR FF!!!
CONT SOON!!!
TAKE UR TIME!!!
SEE YAA
LOVE UUU
Posted: 16 years ago
#47

PYAAR KI MANZIL (sweet si love story)..😊

Hey guys as I know the previous part was not as much as intresting!!here's a fresh update..n'joyit !!

(Recap: samrat removes gunjan's dupatta which was stuck in the table....)

Part: 6

Gunjan: thank you..

Samrat: any time babes...chashmish...

Gunjan takes her books n leaves...

Samrat: hmmmmmmm.....chashmish!!!.... (Nd leaves)

At the caf!!!!

Samrat: chinu 1 cold coffee..

Benji: mere liye bhi 1 cold coffee...

Uday: mere liye..Ek hot coffee..

Benji :han..agayi teri CANDY..

Dia: hiii Sammy...

Sammy: hii babes....take u r seat......

Dia , annie , jacko r seated..

Samrat: waise candy tumhara is week end ka plan kya hai?

Dia: mera toh abhi tak koi plan nahi hai ..agar tum kahoge toh how bout? pub chale is Saturday ko?.??wat say guys??

Jacko,annie say yess..

Samrat: is Saturday ko toh nahi..

Dia makes a sad face as ohhh!!!

Samrat: kaise rahega agar is Saturday....mere ghar party..????

Dia: wowwww!!!!

Samrat: toh is Saturday sare excel ko mere ghar party..

Dia sees gunjan , nupur, vatsala seated..

Vatsala: are vah main toh is party main ja rahi hoonn..aur tum dono???

Dia: aurr..kyun na hum is party main kisi ko bakhra banaye??humara entertainment pura Karen???

Benji(in low voice):ihaan haan..mujhey pata hai tum kiski baat kar rahi ho dia..woh do bechari gunjan ya nupur ke hi bare main keh rahi hooo?.

Dia: Sammy..kya tumney morena sisters invite kiya????

Samrat: nahi babes pehle toh maine tumhe hi invite kia..(dia smiles)aur waise bhi who sare exel main hi include hoti hai na?

Dia: mujhey lagata hai ki who nahi aayengi..is roking typ partys main..

Samrat: jab samrat bulega toh koi bhi na nahi keh payega.....

Dia smiles..

Dia to herself: han..aur mujhey is party ka bahut hi intezar ho raha hai?(gives a evilish smile?)

Dia: okay bye Sammy meet u tomorrow.. chalo annie.they leaves...

Samrat goes to gunji, nup's table.....

Samrat: hiiii chashmish..

Nupur: tumm????tum yahan bhi a gaye???

Samrat: kyun yahan aana mana hai kya??

Gunjan: di!!

Nupur: tu aab chup hi reh gunji ?tu janti nahi in ladkon ko.. yeh tera pechey kartey kartey yahn college tak bhi aa gaya..

Gunjan: diii yeh...

Nupur: gunjan tu chup reh...

Samrat: helloo!! Miss...

Gunjan: dii!yeh mera class mate hai..!!!

Nupur: bye god!!!

Uday: aur yeh samrat hai..mera bhai...kuch yaad aya??

Nupur: yeh?samrat?lagta toh nahi hai..

Uday: kyun ??

Nupur: kyun tumhare yeh cool due ,basket ball champion mall main ladkiyon ko apna parichaay dete phirta hai???

Uday: samrat...? Mall main??... Ladkiyon ko pachrai??

Nupur: PARICHAII...introduction...

Uday: wat ever..jo bhi ho..waise yeh yahan tumse ladayii karne nahi aya hai //

Samrat: maine sare excel ko party ke liye mere ghar pe invite kiya hai..toh tum dono bhi is college main padti hooo toh tum dono ko mere ghar ana hoga Saturday ko..

Uday& samrat leaves...

Gunjan: acha di aab chalo bhi ghar..

Nupur: haan gunjan mujhey pehley hi teri baat sunleni chahiye thi..aacha chal ghar..

Nupur:okay bye vatsala..

Vatsala: byee Nupur..bye gunjan..

Nupur& gunjan leaves..

Its night..(9pm)

At mayank's house..

Mm: toh kya tu party main jar aha hai??

Mayu:nahi..

Mm: lo main bhi kis se pooch rahi hoonn!!yeh kabhi kisi ki party main gaya hai??

Just then the phone rings......

Mayu: ma phone uthao na..

Mm: waise bhi main hi utha rahi hoon..

Mm picks the phone..

Mm: hello..

On the phone: hello..kya main mayank se baat kar sakti hoon??

Mm: mayu kisi ladki ka phone hai tere liye..

Mayank: ladki?? Maa ..naam toh pucho na..

Mm: haan theek hai..

Mm: haan..aap ka naam..

On the phone: by god!!! Sorry Main toh bolna hi bhool gayi..main Nupur...

Mm: haan Nupur beta 2min main mayu ko bulati hoon...

mm: mayank!!! By god!! Nupur ka hai!!

Mayank to him self: Nupur ka??? Nupur ne mujjey kyun kiya phone??

Mayank takes the phone

Mayank: hello..

Nupur: hello mayank..

Mayank: haan Nupur bolo..

Nupur: who main tum se kuch notes ke bare main poochna tha college main bhool gayi isiliye aabhi tumhe phone karna theek samjha..

Mayank: haan bolo kaunse notes ke bare main..

Mm:yeh phone par bhi notes ke bare main hi kahega..(in low voice)

Mayank tells something to Nupur...(about notes..)

Nupur: kya yeh tum notes main se dekh kar bol rahe ho...

Mayank: nahi toh....

Nupur: ohh!! (in low voice) yeh kitna aacha bol raha hai jaise notes main se dekh kar bol raha hai..

Mayank: kuch kaha tumne..

Nupur: hm..nahi toh..waise thank you Mayank..

Mayank: it's okay!!

Nupur: okay byee..

Mayank: byee..(nd hangs the phone)

Nupur also hangs the phone..

Nupur: isne itni jaldi jaldi notes samjha diye par mere toh dimaag main kuch bhi nahi aaya!!

At mayank's house

Mm: aare mayu yeh Nupur kaun hai??maine pehli baar suna yeh naam?

Mayank: arey maa college main nayi aayi hai yeh!!( nd tells her about Nupur)

Mm: aur waise yeh ladki tere jaise hi dikh rahi!!

Mayank: matlab??

Mm: matlab ke padayii ..padayiii..padayii..

Mayank: Nupur?? Aur hamesha padayiii??

Mm: kyun aabhi toh usne phone karke tujhse notes ke bare main poocha na..

Mayank:haan..kher chodo na maa..

Mm: aacha aab tu yeh books band kar!!!aur soo ja..

While going she turn off the lights..

Mayank: maa.......

Mm: soo ja mayu......

Mayank goes to sleep..

At gunur's(gunji& nup) house!!!:

Gunjan on her bed with her books..

Nupur comes

Nupur: by god !! gunjan tu bhi na.. aab yeh books bandh kar.. aur yeh le ( hands her a glass of haldi milk) haldi ka doodh pi ke so ja!!

Gunjan drinks the glass of milk!

Gunjan: aacha dii good night!!

Nupur: good night!!

Nupur turn's off the lights..!!

Gunjan thinking:yeh di bhi na...

next at sammy's place
sammy:sexy saturday ghar par party hai...
dadi:ek aur party???
uday:yes dadi...ek party aur loads of enjoyment..
dadi:enjoyment???khak enjoyment saarey ladkiyan chotey chotey kapde pahen kar aayenge..aur banadr unke peeche(point towards uday..)
sammy:dadi is baar aap kisi alag insaan ko dekhenge..humari party main..
dadi:alag insaann???
sammy:haan dadi ..bilkul aapkey type ka jo ladki ki tarah dressing karta ho..
dadi:tere aise dost kab se bangaye??
uday:tab se jab se bhushan sisters college main aaye hai..
dadi:hmmm...milna padega inse...
Hope u guuys liked this update..

Plzz DO COMMENT?

Edited by maniasings - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
nice update......but i want a little more MAYUR scenes.....sry if im asking for too much
Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya_s

nice update......but i want a little more MAYUR scenes.....sry if im asking for too much

thnxx for ur compliment..ananya.. u r not asking much.!! mayaur ke toh scenes abhi agey ke updates main hai yaar.!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part dear plz cont sooon dear i am wating for next update

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