The story goes on - FF..UPDATED Part 57 ~*~ - Page 101

Aww Debby
What can I say......I'm SPEECHLESS 👏
The Sajan scenes were so much fun and cute but the thunder
was definetly stolen by our very own MAYUR😛.....They are just
so perfect!!!! The last scene was something I definetly want in the show
It started with cuteness to simplicity....to excitement to purity it was
so pure....Seriously the creatives do need to read ur fic....u have the
power to keep the story and your readers locked in it...So WELL DONE
And wanting for an early update so update soon...😉
Love Ya

Hey DD!!! kya update tha!!! 👏 waise sachi aapne tho kamaal kar diya.......itnaaaa acha update?!?!?! yeh hamare liye theek nahin hai.......after all i AM in 10th std.....so how do you expect me to study if i get addicted to your ff by the minute hmmm? oh well....cant really do much about that now can i? ab jo hona tha ho chuka....*sigh* but BY GOD i have been looking for the right words and the only thing i can say is WOWWW. Mayur were sooooo extra adorable!!! "Nupur: aunty, bukhar toh 101 tha. Apko lagta hai badh gaya hoga.. dawaai ke baad bhi? Mayank kya bol raha hai?"[B][/B] 🤣 sooo Nupur!!
and the last part was soo sweet! Awwwwwwww 😍 .........cant wait till the next update.....great job!!! 🤗
luv youu
Arpita
P.S: aap college mein ho ke skool mein? but jo bhi ho....you shud seriously become a writer......*sigh*..........please can you pm me when you update next? thanks.

Oh and i forgot to mention; the part where he was like "I love you.........tum nupur ho isliye" 😳 👏 That was the cutest eveeeerrrr scene! sooo HAS to be in the show.

hey i am new here... and i read ur ff and its really awesome.... keep writing .... u truly rock 😉

@ reshma; welcome to india forums!! my name is arpita and i luv this ff too!!

@sanah.. hey thanks a lot.. u r such a sweetheart! Hehe, sumtimes I feel jealous of Nupur too.. dnt worry, its only human to feel irsha..
So meri FF dawai hai? Meethi wali hai na? Keep reading.. and a big hug for you..!! 🤗

@amber.. thanks a million jaani.. u made my day with that comment..love you lots!! 🤗

@ynaiita, ananya, ruky, anjalika.. thanks a lot..!! 😃

@pragya.. thanks darling! Aww for sure.. next update dey for the movie so lots of Sajan for sure. 😃

@Ruchi..
Ruchi jaani ..!! 🤗Wohi toh, all is fair in love.. haha.. I am so glad u liked it.. badi wali jadoo ki jhappi apke liye specially! And wishes ke liye bada sa thank you.. will let u knw kal sham ko how things went.. thanks so much!! 🤗

@Sunita..
Thanks so much Sunita.. u knw I love hearing from you.. sum1 who writes so well herself!
Glad u liked that last part..I suddenly felt the need for an I love you..haha
Thanks a ton! 🤗

@Tina..
thank u thank u Tina!! Yeah, Mayur steal the show and I cant help being a bit partial to them sumtimes.. esp since he isnt well now..haha.. I am so happy u liked the last scene, I wanted sum1 to say that! Love you! 🤗

debby...

OMG DebbyjiI!!!! I wish I could see you right now and give you a hugeeee jhapppi!!!! I guess this will have to do for now!! 🤗 Gosh Debs, after reading your update I took this giant sigh of happiness!!! And I was smiling soo much and I am at work right now so people passing by are just looking at me funnily!!! 😆😆 I am receiving alot of wierd looks from people right now but who cares I can't help smiling!!! You are a dahlingg writer Debby!! I loved every single bit of this update!!! The Samrat part was soo funny!! Aww when Benji was all sad and Samrat punches him lightly that was adorable!! And aww Gunjan's so cute!! You captured everyone's essense so well. And o mannnn don't even get me started on the mayur part!! I am all smily and happy and dancyyy after reading this!!! *sigh* Thanks to you Debby my whole day is gonna be a happy one...it's 10 am here so my day just started. What a treat this was Debs, how do you do it each time? Ok..back to the update!! I loved the Nupur making faces part!! Aww and the end was just too dreamy, my comments will not do justice to how magical that moment between Mayank and Nupur was Debby!! I have no words Debbyji I can't think or type...all I can do is take deep happy sighs and smile from ear to ear!! That is the effect your update has had on me!! Love you Debbyjiii!!! 🤗