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Posted: 16 years ago

#991

heyy debby!!

wonderful update

loved the whole thing specaially the samji scene.

the mayur scene was sooooo cute.

update soon

drishti

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debby

@debby

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Posted: 16 years ago

#992

@sheri di.. Yeah u r d first and started the feedback on such a good note.. 😊 thanks a million.. I am so glad u liked the update!! 🤗

@radz.. yeah, bas haan hai baaki Gunjan ki taraf se.. hehe.. relieved to know u liked Mayur, since dey r in love, I try to keep the freshness intact.. thanks a bunch!

@drishti..I like Sajanji too..dey r such gud frends na? 😊 thanks a lot dear!

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Sanah tendulkar

@sanahVM

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Posted: 16 years ago

#993

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wow...!!! debby... i never seem 2 hv words 2 describe hw wunderful ur ff is.....😆😉

i mean....u write so...well...so well....!!!
m smtimes jelous..!!😆😆😆

hw cn smone write so well yaar....!!!!!!👏

very very well written part again..i must say....

n lol...!!! gunjan ko apne bare me sochna hi nai aata...!!!!!😆

d mayur scene was fabulous...!!!

i can just imagine ths scene..n lol mayu ko paani nai peena...!!😆😆😆

but d best part of ur update was d last part....

mayur are so cute...!!!😳😳

bt i think mayank is a bit more cuter...wat say...!!😳😳😳

smtimes toh g m jelous f nupur also...!!😆

lol...!! aaj irsha ki bhavana kuch zyada h ho rahi h...!!! 😆

keep writing...!!!

xxx

luv..🤗

sanah..!

ps- i wish ur ff was a bi-weekly..!!! woh kya hai na k is dawai ka dose ek hafte me ek baar kafi nai hota...!!😆

Edited by sanah tendulkar - 16 years ago

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Amber

@bubblygurl

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Posted: 16 years ago

#994

WOW WOW WOW...>!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What an update madamjiiiiiiiii
tussi toh badehi great ho..!! you knw all your updates are so good that one actually cannot choose the ebst from them all...!!!! you rock...!! you're the best ff writer!! 🤗

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Ynaiita

@ynaiita

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#995

awesome yaar!!!great pt!!do cont. soon!!!

ynaiita

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Ananya

@ananya_s

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#996

debby wow yaar im speechless.......awesome one continue soon

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Rukhsar Ahmed

@ruky786

Trailblazer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#997

i love mayank and nupur so cute thanks for the update

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MoNayaHolicPrag

@MoNayaHolicPrag

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Posted: 16 years ago

#998

wow yaar maaza aagaya
continue dear
tum toh kamal ki writer nikli waise can i request sumthing if u dont mind(i know u must be thinking i request a lot )
next part a long sajan part plssss
u know naa that i olve sajan like anything

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#999

wowwww

debby jaani..first of all JADOO KI JHAPPI for u🤗🤗

thanx a lot jaani for updating it...........it was soo soo chweet.loved each and evry bit of it.....JST LOVED IT

hey mayank ka rxn was awesome .....evn i do the same....lol...

nups is really becoming more and more naughty these days .....poor chap mummy se bhi daant khaani padhti hai....chalo kuch nhain hota pyaar mein sab kuch chalta hai...😳

mayank pulls her....awwwww...the sweetest moment there..i could easily imagine it ...*blushing*😳😳

awesum...gr8 update ....*hands down*

HUGS...🤗

ruchi

ALL THE BST JI.....U WILL DO WELL🤗

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Sunita

@whatsername

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#1000

was it ur writting i read or was it honey tat i just tasted ???? soooo sweeeetttttttttttt mannnnnnn !!
tooo short thouuuu !!!!!!!!!!!! i just scrolleed down ur update adn found out it wasn't short at all .lol i was jus soo into it .....

You have the abilities to keep the reader hoooked to ur writiting and make them ask for moree !!!!

well donee. .another fab update..
waiting for ur next

''Mayank: I love you Nupur..

Nupur: main pari hoon isliye?

Mayani: tum Nupur ho, isliye.''

This bit HAS TO BE in the showw ..... its perfect
👍🏼👍🏼
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